xiaosiong
13-02-2011, 06:40 PM
hey,
i am still very new to SBF and this is the first time i have attempted to write any story. so if there is any bad English or the flow is no good, i hope the bros here can forgive me. the story that i am going to tell is somewhere near my own experience, but i tweak it a bit to makes it sounds wildly and more action pack
my cast are as follow
Me: J
My Gf: I
My buddy: D
My buddy Gf: A
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Part 1: The idea.
this happens a long way back when i was still in the army. it was a time when i am still a boy and still crazy over the "young n dangerous" time. my buddy was same as me, we are part of a private which we formed ourself, and we played, dranked and sian girl together.
i still remember vividly that during then, my gf was only 18, and she is those typical ah lian with long golden hair. when she smile she has a dimple on her cheek that makes her look so sweet. her figure is also super good with those slim and fatless tummy with a 34C front. in hokkien they say "in front shine people, behind ride people" type.
she is working in a neighborhood bakery, and there is no lack of people going to sian her every few day. but when they knew whom me n my buddies where.. they siam far far away. haha those were the days
so one of the day, one of my buddies (age 23 during then), asked me while we were having a drinking session (gf was around as well). we spoke in hokkien, so i try to translate them to English
D: eh E, wanna go oversea bo?
J: where? army pay like shit leh...
D: we go redang la, my friend tells me that place very nice.
I: ya lor, my supervisor also tell me that place quite nice. sea water as clear as swimming pool
J: i very budget leh.. surviving on $300 a month nia leh, plus hard to take off day. U sponsor me money ah??
D: dun worry la, we go for a short 3D2N short trip la. u gf also come la. my gf wanna go so i jio u one. hahaha
J: nowonder la! wanna F also no need to go so far wat. btw, since when u had a gf? how come i dunno
I: ya lor! long each other so long liao, got updates bo jio! IRC still put u single n available wor
D: aiya recently go stead one la. u on bohz?
J: k la k la. we go book tmr
D: no need la, just pass me the passport details for both of you, i will arrange with my uncle. he's a salesman at a tour agency. he can get good price for me.
J: ok lo.. u better dun charge me extra arbo LP wack u!
D: okok. u cannot trust buddies one meh?
then we toast to our hearts content before we go home separately
to be continued...
i am still very new to SBF and this is the first time i have attempted to write any story. so if there is any bad English or the flow is no good, i hope the bros here can forgive me. the story that i am going to tell is somewhere near my own experience, but i tweak it a bit to makes it sounds wildly and more action pack
my cast are as follow
Me: J
My Gf: I
My buddy: D
My buddy Gf: A
================================================== =======
Part 1: The idea.
this happens a long way back when i was still in the army. it was a time when i am still a boy and still crazy over the "young n dangerous" time. my buddy was same as me, we are part of a private which we formed ourself, and we played, dranked and sian girl together.
i still remember vividly that during then, my gf was only 18, and she is those typical ah lian with long golden hair. when she smile she has a dimple on her cheek that makes her look so sweet. her figure is also super good with those slim and fatless tummy with a 34C front. in hokkien they say "in front shine people, behind ride people" type.
she is working in a neighborhood bakery, and there is no lack of people going to sian her every few day. but when they knew whom me n my buddies where.. they siam far far away. haha those were the days
so one of the day, one of my buddies (age 23 during then), asked me while we were having a drinking session (gf was around as well). we spoke in hokkien, so i try to translate them to English
D: eh E, wanna go oversea bo?
J: where? army pay like shit leh...
D: we go redang la, my friend tells me that place very nice.
I: ya lor, my supervisor also tell me that place quite nice. sea water as clear as swimming pool
J: i very budget leh.. surviving on $300 a month nia leh, plus hard to take off day. U sponsor me money ah??
D: dun worry la, we go for a short 3D2N short trip la. u gf also come la. my gf wanna go so i jio u one. hahaha
J: nowonder la! wanna F also no need to go so far wat. btw, since when u had a gf? how come i dunno
I: ya lor! long each other so long liao, got updates bo jio! IRC still put u single n available wor
D: aiya recently go stead one la. u on bohz?
J: k la k la. we go book tmr
D: no need la, just pass me the passport details for both of you, i will arrange with my uncle. he's a salesman at a tour agency. he can get good price for me.
J: ok lo.. u better dun charge me extra arbo LP wack u!
D: okok. u cannot trust buddies one meh?
then we toast to our hearts content before we go home separately
to be continued...