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verytired
03-10-2012, 10:35 PM
Been a silent reader of many stories here. Seems like perhaps it's time to give back to the community. 1st time writing composition since 'O' level, so pls gimme some slacks on the standards. Also, as names, places & event will be altered to withheld identity, I foresee some minor inconsistency as the truth sometimes slips out. Not much spicy details, dun up me is ok, but pls dun zap me. Bros looking for feature packed erotic story should look elsewhere.
The desktop at home is shared, so i only feel comfortable updating on ipad on iphone. Also due to work & family commitment, my update will not be like flood torrent. I'll try buy must to continue at least twice a day. Pls be a bit more patient with me.
Story about internal conflict on fidelity and dilemma to stay as friends or onto a path everyone know will have no happy endings. I'd not sure if I how much non-erotic details should I go into before bros gotten bored & zap me. I'll just go along the way and pls gimme feedback.
verytired
03-10-2012, 10:35 PM
Few years ago, I job hopped to a MNC firm. As with company that occupies several storey of the building, it's not unusual to move in & out, up & down the lifts. (My company did not occupies the floors in sequential orders).
And with the accursed "no smoking" law, poor smokers like me have to go all the way to 1st floor, get out of the building, just to get my 5mins of de-stressing break. Being new around, I just go alone. This is how I meet her.
I was walking towards the smoking corner by the waterfeature when I noticed a tall, slim babe in a black number. Her hair was full of body with a subtle mahogany coloring and soft curvy waves. Her lengthy legs, made sexier with her 3inches heels which together, made her stands more than 175cm. It's bout 9plus so the sunlight is still not high up and the rays are coming in from a lower angle. From the lobby where I stepped out, this babe was standing to my east. With the sunlight flowing around her I can clearly made out the shape of her sexy legs thru her black dress. That's the silhouette I see from afar.
As I walk closer, she looks no more than 32, her locks framed her almond shaped eyes, enhanced by her neatly drawn brows. She's a looker! And I can notice most men would steal a glance when they walked passed. Wonder which company she worked for...
Thou she was alone, we never talked or even made eyes contact. Hell. I wasn't even standing close to her.... as I'm only 16x. and it's intimidating standing next to a tall babe. So I just enjoy my puff and this eye candy. Noticed that her perky butt have no vpl. Hmm... someone who cares for her look.
She finished her stick and walked off... as I enjoy the sight of her cat walking away....
skyline2000
04-10-2012, 10:05 AM
First camper!
caister
04-10-2012, 11:37 PM
second camper here to pitch tent
verytired
05-10-2012, 09:22 PM
3rd camper..... joking lah. Thanks for the support. I got some time before the missus come home for a short installment.
Cont....
She finished her stick and walked off... as I enjoy the sight of her cat walking away....
Later that evening, I realized much to my delight that she's in the same company, same floor. Cos she's just sitting near the door, thou Andover department. Great! I was thinking. I mean even thou I'm married, it wouldn't hurt to have babes around the office. I'm sure many bros here feels this way, right? Good for morales. ;)
A few days went passed. I never coincidentally met her during smoke break. I even tried to keep an eye when she was leaving for her break, so I can "coincidentally" bump onto her in the lift lobby. But due to new job, new commitment, sometimes I didn't notice when she slips off. Btw, I dun even have a direct line of sight from my seat. Have to act busy, move around. Heehee. The bor-liao stuff that we do just to get pass the day.
Then one day, I was walking towards the door, going for a smoke, I saw her looking up from the corner of my eyes. Then she flashed a smile. Was it at me? Or someone behind me? Damn! How should i react? Time is running out with each step i take. In the end, I just act indifferent and go straight. Suddenly...
ben69
06-10-2012, 09:19 AM
3rd camper reporting! haha!
suddenly... wat?? err.. excuse me, u forgot to zip??
anyway, TS faster con't leh dun leave us high & dry...:p
Bangster
06-10-2012, 10:33 AM
Nice story.
Can relate to your experiences...
Probably she'll start off with
"wanna go for a fag?"
Then later part will be
"wanna go for a fuck?"
Lol
alan0338
06-10-2012, 10:57 AM
camp here ... :D
Summerhillt
06-10-2012, 01:14 PM
What a " sio hoon " (smoking) thread.
RisingDick
06-10-2012, 02:05 PM
Keep it cuming.
verytired
06-10-2012, 06:49 PM
Nice story.
Can relate to your experiences...
Probably she'll start off with
"wanna go for a fag?"
Then later part will be
"wanna go for a fuck?"
Lol
No lah. No so direct lah. Life so straight forward hor sai liao, no need keng so hard. But frankly, her "other" sio hoon.... Sigh... More to that later.
Anyway. Thank u bro for your support.
-verytired signing off at the toilet of paragon while family is in dingtaifeng. :p
Will try to continue tonight. Cheers
simple2kee
06-10-2012, 10:11 PM
interesting story!
verytired
07-10-2012, 01:10 AM
Cont....
Time is running out with each step i take. In the end, I just act indifferent and go straight. Suddenly...
She: "hi Ted, going to smoke?"
I was thinking how the hell she knows my name? (obviously that's altered in this story)
Me: "no. Go shit..... "
Both of us paused and stared at each other for like 3 secs.
Me: "of course smoke lah. Wanna join?"
She stunned look was quickly replaced by a wide smile: "ok! Wait wait"
Her smile can be considered photogenic, wide and dimpled exposing her top row of near perfectly straight teeth. She smiled happily and started digging into her drawers. As she remain seated & bent down bent to reach down to strap her heels, I caught a glimpse of her pink bra, no cleavage, guess hers not more than a B. I promptly look away. Would be embarrassing if I got caught staring at someone whom I just gotten to know.
She introduced herself as Jermaine.
Me: "how u know me?"
Jer: "your team is new here. It's easier for hundreds of ppl to remember few new faces than the other way around. And u r the only one there who smokes."
Me in an enlightened tone: "aah. And I thought I was handsome enough to catch the eyes of a pretty lady.
Jer: "haha, u quite thick skin hor? Anyhow sian charbor?"
I raised by left hand palm in and tapped the b.zero1 on my ring-finger with my thumb. "英雄不提当年勇"
Jer laughing: "u really funny"
And so, over the next few breaks x days, she begins to rely on me to bring my lighter. In fact i dun mind at all. Cos everytime I hold the light as she come closer with her cigarette in mouth, i was enjoying the close up view of her without her knowing as her focus was on the flame. Every lashes, every freckles.
Over our conversation on everything, I learnt that she was an air stewardess. That's explains the devilish figure. She was 32 then but looks more matured due to her makeup & dressing. She quit SIA after giving birth to her daughter as she wanted a normal working hours.
So now I've got an ex air crew milf here....:D
keewee
07-10-2012, 01:12 AM
please do continue
verytired
07-10-2012, 01:17 AM
Pls do give feedback on writing style. Compo or dialogue? Mix ok? Clear what is spoken & what is my thoughts.... Cos we all know not every time we speak what we think, or think what we speak. Hahahaa..
studdyme
07-10-2012, 01:26 AM
camping for more!
kelvinlf
07-10-2012, 08:33 AM
sounds interesting. will camp here for the air stewardress :D
uzumakiidii
07-10-2012, 05:46 PM
nice story here. pitch tent waiting for more.:D
FattyDad
09-10-2012, 11:26 AM
nice, continue please
verytired
09-10-2012, 10:03 PM
Cont...
So now I've got an ex air crew milf here....
Me: "yeah right, u might as well be saying you were a man. I dun believe you're a mum with this figure."
Jer smiling coyly: "really. My daughter already 2. And I'm fat loh."
She pinched the back of her chiffon dress lightly as a act to show her slight tummy. But what I really saw is the side lines of her panties thru the beige soft fabric. With nothing much left to imagination, I had a hard on.
Jer: "I do jog to slim down, but my husband said I slowed him down, so I jog alone less often."
I was thinking if I jog behind her, I'll also be slowed down. How to jog with a hard on? :p
Me: "so slim no need to jog lah."
My eyes wondered down her legs & noticed the sculptured calfs. Maybe it's the running, maybe it's the frequent wearing of heels, but coupled with the long slender legs, I must say....
Me: "these are a pair of art!"
Jer: "u pervert! U no chance lah. U r too short!"
(Well, I know I'm below average and not the regular hunk, but I wasn't really bothered. Moreover, when both r lying down, most likely i got the last laugh.)
Me: "Oh. So height is the problem. Not the fact that we are both married, not to each other"
Jermaine smiling while slapping my shoulder: "idiot!"
That's phyical, and so she crossed the line. The line frankly I dun mind gorgeous babes like jermaine crossing...
RockHardnSolid
09-10-2012, 10:29 PM
Camping for more..keep the momentum goin bro!
verytired
10-10-2012, 04:57 PM
Thanks for the support.
Frankly, i read most of the stories here that r so erotic & honestly i feel i didn't write as good. Is it becos "grass is always greener on other side of fence"?
Should i continue to bored u guys by going thru slow details or just skimp thru u dive into the far side of the pool?
Opinion & comments needed.
Cheers!
& damn so hard to write with handphone.
lostbird
10-10-2012, 06:01 PM
Interest thread, must joint in..:D
ludwig19
10-10-2012, 06:33 PM
Please continue bro, any story is a gd story :)
SmokyJoe
10-10-2012, 08:01 PM
Wah bro it's getting quite exciting. Another smoker here waiting eagerly for your story.
verytired
13-10-2012, 12:56 PM
Cont...
The line frankly I dun mind gorgeous babes like jermaine crossing...
Days gone by, we became closer. I was asked to join her lunch kakis and occasional, it's just her & I. There were times when she got pestered to go lunch with who & who. She'd begged me to go after I teased her she's on her own for the flies she attracts. I'd drag some of my team girls along to make a crowd. Also, during our smoke break, sometimes buwyas tried to chat her up, she'd text "help". And I'd ended up chatting with these guys, asking bout things they are flaunting or proud of, so tactically steering the conversation bout themselves. We just pretend to be so amazed. Then when we r alone we laugh bout it. Jermaine got bright smile and a contagious laughter. At times makes me think she's high under the influence of alcohol.
Me: "u better cut down on your smile. Else I'd become public enemy in this building"
Jer: "u r my guardian mah"
Me: "No. Your fly swatter!"
Jermaine laughed.
Me: "and what attracts the most flies?"
Jer: "idiot!"
Me: "wrong! It's shit"
Jer: "bloody!".... Followed by a slap on my back.
Me: "dun understand. So many ppl invite u but u dun want. I never invite but u stuck to me?
Jer: "cos u not like them, they all only after my skirt."
Hmm... This is something I dun really understand. What makes some girls think that their husband, bf or friends are different? I might be wrong here, but ain't all u bros always fantasizing, peeling off pieces of article of clothings of the babes around us mentally?... oh. I'm the only pervert here? The only difference is how we manage to segregate thoughts from action.
My eyes autoroam down her body, along the curvy waist that her tight long sleeved tee hugs. An inch or two of exposed soft border of fresh separates her top from her denim mini-skirt. My glance fixated on the her perky bums for a few second, thinking what lies beneath set my thoughts wild. There was a silence and my instinct snap me awake & I looked up, staring directly into her eyes. Oops, busted! I was searching for some words to break the silence and I can't believe these words came out of my mouth....
RockHardnSolid
13-10-2012, 02:02 PM
Camping for more
Djandi
15-10-2012, 03:26 AM
Bro ts.. Ur story is great.. Keep it going!!! Cheers
lasupkia
15-10-2012, 10:45 AM
Just continue writing and be open to suggestions. Practice more and improve more.
Every writer has his/her own style of writing.
verytired
15-10-2012, 01:35 PM
Just continue writing and be open to suggestions. Practice more and improve more. thanks dude. For awhile i tot i got only 5 or so listeners. I needed more feedbacks to improvecheers!
fnulnu88
17-10-2012, 01:07 AM
Where did TS go? Continue lah :p
sp150
17-10-2012, 03:14 AM
Ts everyone have they own style of writing so no worries abt how u write most important is don't let it die halfway cos a full thread is hard to come by. And We all know how hard it is to actually write our own encounter/story(though I didn't post any of mine but thinking of how to start is already damn hard)so don't let comments bring u down just take it as constructive criticism. Cheers!
Camping here. :)
want0nmee
17-10-2012, 09:26 AM
TS, we need more updates from you. more.
zenmeyang
17-10-2012, 12:01 PM
miss my smoking days ... quited for 2 years plus liao, after nearly smoking for 20 yrs !
verytired
17-10-2012, 09:51 PM
Thanks guys for the encouragement especially to bros who up me.
@sp150. Am fine with criticism. But lack of comments leh. Would be good if more interactive like bro zen here. U should start yours. If worry bout half way die off then no one would start to roll the ball.
@zen. Good for u! I'm trying to quit too. Now down to 5 sticks per day. So a pack will last me 4 days.
1 thing I regret is that should write my whole story in mswords first then cut & paste whole thing 1 go. Now I must struggle to not be overwhelm by pressure of letting u guys down for waiting too long. This touch screen keyboard is making it tougher.
Will cont when I'm done with work & the missus sleeps.
Thanks again for waiting.
FatSpider
17-10-2012, 10:12 PM
keep the story going, very nice so far
verytired
18-10-2012, 01:21 AM
Cont...
I can't believe these words came out of my mouth....
Me: "yeah. I different. I want you without your skirt."
This time i saw it coming & managed to siam the slap. Couldn't believe i said something so corny. My words is exactly what I was thinking then. But Jermaine thinks I was joking and pulling her legs. In fact she finds it hilarious and laughed.
Me: "am I so harmless to you?"
Jermaine & I were comfortable with each other. She grab every opportunity to gloat me and wouldn't let me off without joking criticism at my slightest blunder. I in return criticize her wearing of loose fitting shirts that made her flat chest even flatter & her mis-matched bra & panties colors. (this one slap the hardest...). Speaking of that....That was a day when i approached her desk just as she was rotating on her chair to reach the cabinets behind. You guys can imagine yourselves trying to turn on an office chair u'd move one leg to drag your body with the chair to gain momentum? Yeah. U guess it, i saw a glimpse of her lacy white panties. She saw me coming so I quickly ripped my eyes off what I'd be rather staring that moment and smile back. Damn, recalling it now is still erotic, dun know why since I had later on progressed further at this.
Later on downstairs, I stood beside her in a serious tone: "you cannot be angry with me for telling u this....can u turn anti-clockwise instead to reach behind you?"
Jermaine was halfway lighting her cigarette when she paused and stared in bewilderment: "shit! U saw!"
Frankly, I was quite taken then that she figured in out in that 2 secs. That means she saw me, maybe in a split seconds, staring down just before our eyes locked. Yet was too fast she couldn't be sure. Thinking back, was glad I told her then.
Me: "Cho-to cho-to cho-to. U promised wouldn't be angry leh!"
Jer: "i'm not. Shit man!......tell me what u see."
Me: "wahlau, u every morning every evening also see yet u ask me what I see?! Dun believe nevermind"
Jer: "Really can see har? Shit man."
Me: "that's why I quickly walked away. I'm telling u so u would be careful in future." (but in fact I wished I had my phone camera ready.)
She kept quite, blushed and her doe eyes looked thankful. I tried to ease her awkwardness: "so u dun cause more ppl nose bleed."
She laughed and slapped my arm lightly. And so that's why I know her bra & panties were mis-matched
casa2011
18-10-2012, 08:53 AM
thanks dude. For awhile i tot i got only 5 or so listeners. I needed more feedbacks to improvecheers!
You earned yourself one more supporter here! This local office romance buay pai sia. Try to include more "chat conversations" between both of you to make the story more juicy.
Camping~~~too bad I can't up ppl point yet :x
So, TS, are you still working in the same office as her now?
ludwig19
18-10-2012, 11:37 AM
Another silent supporter coming out to show support! Continue with ur gd work bro, its well appreciated by ur readers :)
verytired
19-10-2012, 12:05 AM
Try to include more "chat conversations" between both of you to make the story more juicy.
still working in the same office as her now?Noted your suggestion.
Answering that question will be a spoiler. Do u still wanna know now?:p
Another silent supporter coming out to show support!thank you.
This few days I'm pretty tied up. Pls be patient.
ts take your time man haha. It's hard to wait, but good things are worth the wait.
casa2011
19-10-2012, 12:35 AM
Noted your suggestion.
Answering that question will be a spoiler. Do u still wanna know now?:p
thank you.
This few days I'm pretty tied up. Pls be patient.
I still prefer to wait.
:D
SkylineGTR
19-10-2012, 09:41 PM
nice story bro.. upz u +5!
Cheers
verytired
24-10-2012, 01:31 AM
Thanks gtr for the encouragement. Fighting sleep, very tired brings another installment.
Cont...
her bra & panties were mis-matched...
We scheduled our break & lunch thru sms so that we dun seems so close as to stepped out together every time. At first it's "smoke?" "what to eat?" "my car or your car?". Then it slowly grown to gossip bout colleagues. In short, we would SMS during work hours about everything & nothing. Thou as an unspoken rule, we never SMS after office hours or weekends. Guess we both know, like I mentioned earlier, we were married but not to each other. We just managed to click well.
Then one day, as I was walking pass her desk for our regular break, I noticed she didn't smile. (I really dun understand what's on my face but she always smile so gleefully when she sees me the first time everyday like some long lost friends). With a sullen face, she followed me out. We were not alone in the lift, we just kept quiet all the way til we sat at the bench and lit our cigarette.
After a long while, i lit up another stick: "u wanna talk bout it"
Jermaine was silent. She took out a cigarette and I promptly lit up for her.
Me: "if u r ready. I'm ready"
Jer: "let's go out of cbd for lunch. U drive."
Well, under normal circumstances I'd say things like come back erp u pay. But that day is not normal. We went back to my desk after the smoke break and i kept thinking bout what could have happened.
Before long, it's 1pm. We had lunch somewhere off tanglin. i was caught off guard when she ordered a draught in the middle of a working day. But just to go along, i ordered the same telling myself just 1 should be fine. (i was driving, remember?). After a awkwardly quiet entrée, she passed me her phone. It's an sms exchange with her husband. I shall not go onto details here, but basically he's asking how much jermaine have, when is the next payday, any shares she's holding that can sell.
Me: "money problem?"
Jer: "more like gambling problem!"
Me: "the new casino? Apply NCPG loh"
Jer: "it's useless. He travels a lot for work, so he can still go overseas casinos."
Thru our conversation, i learnt that she's from quite a well-to-do family. So the main problem is not lack of money, it's her husband incorrigible habits.
Jer: "actually, I'd been drinking lately. After i tuck my daughter to bed I'd go to the park near by place to drink."
Me: "gosh. A gorgeous lady alone drinking in the park in the middle of the nite?! Safe or not?"
Jer: "1 or 2 cans wouldn't get me drunk. Besides there r quite a few ppl jogging."
Me: "Your husband not worried"
Jer: "he run his own accountant practise. Wake late work late. So I'm home before him. But than even he knows, he couldn't be bothered."
i dunno what to say then. She had 2 bottles of beer & not in a very moody state. I shouldn't be riding on others unhappiness. But as jermaine stared into the emptiness in deep thoughts, her frowning together with her perfectly shaped high arch brows made her look so sexy. And I shouldn't get started with her drinking from the bottle.....damn.
Me: "think u can go back to work? Why not u call in sick, go home & have a rest? I'll pick u up on my way to office tomorrow so u don't worry bout leaving your car in office."
She nodded. I settled the bill then drove her home. It's broad daylight, she wasn't drunk. So i just dropped her at her block, watched her entered the lift and went back to office myself. Alone in my car, can't help but wonder if I should send her all the way to her place. Maybe it's not convenient, but most importantly, she didn't ask. Or maybe she was waiting for me to offer. Argh...what the hell! Dun think dun think. It's not possible.
Max18
29-10-2012, 02:42 PM
Sniper reporting! Brother i guess u should have send her up, broad daylight no issue. Inside the room, close curtains n door, on the air con set liao.
Peace
Seiyajohn
29-10-2012, 03:00 PM
Nice story.
eeemen
31-10-2012, 11:25 PM
Interesting lay out for the story bro, a slow and nice build up, so don't worry, carry onz with ur style of writing la, enjoying it!! Cherrs bro, .................
verytired
01-11-2012, 01:08 AM
Sniper reporting! Brother i guess u should have send her up,cannot lah bro. U sniper nor recki one issit? I dunno who else up there at that time leh
Nice story. thanks
Interesting lay out for the story bro, a slow and nice build up, so don't worry, carry onz with ur style of writing la thanks. I tot I was too long winded & most bros expecting some actions the 1st page.
drinkmorewater
01-11-2012, 01:24 AM
Setting up smoke camp
verytired
01-11-2012, 03:57 AM
I'm on overseas assignment. Just came back to hotel half drunk. Just a short installment. No cliffhanger, sorry bros.
Cont...
Argh...what the hell! Dun think dun think. It's not possible...
Back in office, I sms her "everything ok?"
Jer: "not ok also must live on. At least for my daughter."
Me: "small issue lah. At least he's not seeing other woman."
Jer: "unless some other woman got so much money to dump on him."
Me: "hahah. On a bright side, at least he didn't hit u."
Half hour later.... Me: "or did he?"
Another half hour later. Jer: "pls keep my personal life a secret."
What bothered me then is the fact that my million dollar question still unanswered. Somehow, I already know the answer....
I tried to divert the topic with a bit of humour: "what? Did you say anything to me?"
Jer: "haha. I'm glad I know u. Take care see u tomorrow"
Me: "me too. Take care & have a nice rest. Dun stay out too late. be a good girl and drinks on me next time."
From then on, jermaine is more opened to me bout her personal life. Time & again she'd remind me to keep her problem a secret. She spoken to no one as she confessed she wanna keep a happy family image to her team colleagues and even her boss. I couldn't remember how long she said she's been married, but it was 10years ago when she meet her husband. She describe him as very 'kuw lan' & 'te ki'. Thought he would changed after becoming a dad but still the same. Sometimes she would show me her sms quarrel with her husband. When we can afford longer lunchtime, we went from fine diners to kopi tiam for beer or wine. Thru all her bitching, I sincerely felt for her. There wasn't any real solution. She wasn't really looking for one from me. I just offered her my ears...
see see only
01-11-2012, 09:45 AM
TS ....
A nice writing style ... :)
U got yourself another camper ... hope you have enough tents and beers .. :rolleyes: :D
lostbird
01-11-2012, 11:44 AM
Hmm a shoulder to cry on;)
honya
01-11-2012, 08:33 PM
You have good writing style man! you can really go scriptwriting ^^
verytired
02-11-2012, 01:31 PM
Thank you for the complimentsTS ....A nice writing style ... :) U got yourself another camper ... hope you have enough tents and beers .. :rolleyes: :D...from old bird (sure got enuff beers to go around) Woah, did u up me so many points? Didn't noticed I got over 40. Is so, thanks bro
Hmm a shoulder to cry on;)...middle aged bird
You have good writing style man! you can really go scriptwriting ^^...& young bird, 1st post to boot ;-)
Will continue when I settle back in sg, cheers & thanks esp those who up my rep.
ricky79
02-11-2012, 02:31 PM
Cant wait for the next posting... keep it coming.
itiswhatitis
02-11-2012, 04:36 PM
mr verytired,
pls continue writing.... i like yr story....
i purposely went to suntec city today lunch time to see can spot both of u anot, hahah....
Sevenstorm
02-11-2012, 06:27 PM
sio hoon kee buddy falling in!!
Sevenstorm
02-11-2012, 06:29 PM
sio hoon kee buddy falling in !!!
sp150
02-11-2012, 10:33 PM
Bro verytired ur story not long winded lah got structure mah like ur heading smoke buddy>beer buddy > fb so now waiting anxiously for the fb part haha...just joking lah pls do continues ur style of writing.
verytired
02-11-2012, 11:45 PM
i purposely went to suntec city today lunch time to see can spot both of u anot, hahah....did I told u I'm at suntec? Ah! Stalker!
so now waiting anxiously for the fb part haha...just joking lah pls do continues ur style of writing.thanks. Slowly lah. We got flesh got bloody. Got feelings one. Cannot say F then F, right?
And thanks to all who up my rep, anonymous or otherwise.
Btw, confession...I see 4 stars at my thread, wondering what that is, I clicked with this silly phone and suddenly became 5 stars. Bo pan kay hor. Sorry sorry.
verytired
02-11-2012, 11:49 PM
Cont...
I just offered her my ears...
There were times when jermaine was unusually moody to the point that the silence seems too long. When I pressed her, she'd just passed me her handphone showing the SMSes.
One of them caught my attention, I couldn't remember word for word but it's bout her husband dumping the kid with her and sleeping in the next room. The relationship got worse with no physical contacts and she felt so lonely, drinking herself to sleep after she tucked in her kid and done with chores.
At this point, can i be blamed for thinking what a loser this husband is? Got a hot looking wife & a daughter, portrait of a happy family, yet behaves like that?!
Then the horny devil in me was thinking something else...
(WTF! Wake up! Leave her alone! )
{but wouldn't the lonely babe yearns to be touched?}
(she's married!)
{but husband not fulfilling his duties..}
(you have a wife!)
{your wife dun need to know...}
(you still loves your wife! U dun love jermaine! It's just lust!)
{so separate your love & lust}
(shut the fuck up!)
"Hello? Hello? U drunk is it?".....huh? A third voice?
"can I have my phone back?"
"oh" I said sheepishly "a bit sieh liao, dunno how to use your fruit phone. See? All black?"
The more she opened up, the more I feel most married couple have their difference. On & off my wife & I also had quarrel. And thou all these drink session, I also opened up my personal life to her. I never do to anyone, not to my family of wife's side. Not even to my close friends. One main reason I opened up to jermaine is that she's not a mutual friend of me & wife, so I feel that my secrets safe with her. There ain't no line of gossip that goes back to my wife. I'm sure more of you can imagine if our wifes learnt of our complains of them thru another woman, a hot babe to boot, all hell break loose.
Jer: "he never appreciate the things I do!"
Me: "ok ok. I buy u a beer"
Jer: "I was doing the laundry and he just push me aside say "xiam" cos I was in his way"
Me: "ok ok 2 beers."
Jer: "2 beers?! I wanna drown myself in beer every night! If not for my daughter. I really dun see how this marriage can work anymore."
Around this time, my wife & I had a bad argument. Is bout some trivial matters that got blown out of control. The content is of not importance to this story. I was quite pissed that I just grabbed a can of beer from the fridge and left the house saying "going back office". It was half hour to midnight.
I entered my car, slammed the door and started to drink. Had a few mouthful. Then I remember jermaine. I took a photo of the beer in my hand and mms her. While waiting for reply, my mind strayed to think of her and what would be different should we met earlier. And some point, I was squashing these thoughts & lamenting how can I betrayed my wife of so many years. Thou the sparkle had somehow diminished, we still had walk thru a long way together.
Buzzzz..... Buzzzzz....
tomic
04-11-2012, 09:49 PM
bro, the horny devil will always WIN!!! only a matter of time... hahahaha
Vodka_Blu
05-11-2012, 08:38 AM
Kudos to TS... Somewhat links me back to a similar real-life incident that happened 2 years ago...
The little devil always wins in such a state...
Juz my 2 cents... :D
itiswhatitis
05-11-2012, 08:51 AM
mr tired,
buzz buzz........... wat? can u pls continue?
i chased yr story till skived from work alr.......
enjoy writing n write more.
kittymae
10-11-2012, 01:34 AM
I also very tired...
from waiting for updates! :D
callmebad
10-11-2012, 01:59 AM
your story looks like quite true
at least I don't feel you're fantasizing away
not like the usual type of thread
very fast starting fucking away
what you said is quite a true description of some couples' lives
verytired
12-11-2012, 02:07 AM
can u pls continue? i chased yr story till skived from work haha. I also skived work to read others work.
I also very tired...
from waiting for updates! :Dpaiseh paiseh. Been busy. Hey, I admire your work too, u know?
your story looks like quite true
at least I don't feel you're fantasizing away
not like the usual type of thread
very fast starting fucking away
what you said is quite a true description of some couples' livesyeah. Based on true events. Sensationalized a bit. Think Three kingdoms vs romance of three kingdoms. Sorry for the "slow fuck". I not bunny lah.
A longer update coming... Since I Mia so long.
verytired
12-11-2012, 02:09 AM
Cont...
Buzzzz..... Buzzzzz....
SMS in ":) cheers! Where u now?" Me: "zhaw chu" (hokkien run away from home) Jer: "yeah yeah. Photo so dark. Which pub? Bo jio" Me: "auntie, which pub serves beer in can one?" Jer: "serious... Gado again? Since when u become like me, emo go drink beer? U ok?" Me: "not ok also must live on. U wanna join?" Jer: "not so soon lah. Darling haven't sleep" Woah. I was thinking jermaine so ninja, must wait til husband sleeps then sneak out. This feeling is like committing adultery. I was imaginating so much my Bermudas filing up. Then I snapped from my daydreaming (thou it's passed midnight already). I sms "better not lah. U accompany your husband. I'm alright." Jer: "haha. U idiot lah. I'm referring to my daughter. Hubby overseas dump me & maid with chores and babysitting. Tell u what, I need at least half hour. U ok to come my place? Pls stock up beer, chips & cigarette." Me: "ok. Half hour." Jer: "ons!"
Huh? I didn't thought jermaine so straight forward. My mind is running wild. Are we doing the deed with a sleeping daughter next room? How do i go about this?...7-eleven beer, cigarettes, condoms? My little brother also misbehaving. Did I missed some hidden messages? I looked at my phone again. Aiyah! It's "onz!". I misread. Chay! I tossed out the can of beer 2/3 full and drove off on my errands.
I arrived at her carpark downstairs her place. I wasn't sure of the plan, moreover, I dun know her unit number, so I texted her. Jermaine came out of the lift within 5 mins. She was wearing a white sleeveless and a cotton baby blue sports shorts complete with flip flops. She had tied up her hair in a bun with stray strand of hair framing her face. In her hand is a little mango paperbag. I had never seen her casual style and she looked so much younger that no one could tell she's a mother.
Only when she sat in the passanger seat did I have a closer look that she had light makeups on, some mascara, light blush and lipgloss.
Me: "so late u want to go beach har? You make up is this morning one or u took the trouble just for me?"
Jer: "idiot. Just drive lah."
Me: "seriously, go where? I tot u can't leave with your daughter alone so that's way I come over?"
Jer: "1, 2 hr ok one lah. She sleeps like a pig til morning one. I'm her mother I know one lah. Turn left go all the way til the end then left again."
We were cruising passed temasek poly, then turn left onto tampines ave10 & reached an ulu carpark. It's almost 1amand still there were at least 10 park cars.
"so ulu what u wanna do to me." I joked.
She girly slapped me on my shoulder as I was talking out the cans of beer in the trunk. "idiot lah"
"by the way, where these ppl go?"
Jer: "jogging bah. There are still ppl around the reservoir. I never come here to drink, usually across there. Mah fun to drive."
As we walked towards the water: "I feel so used! Make me buy beer yet I cannot drink much, cos I chauffeur."
"hahah! I never thought of that. So now I can drink more yet not worry got dead drunk cos got chaperone." her laugher always brings a smile. I feel like falling in love and dating. And a mix of guilt set in, thinking of my wife at home. I made an excuse to retrieve my phone in my car and walk off. I lean into me car and texted my wife "I'm fine. Got work to rush. Go sleep first". Then I return to jermaine just a distance away. She had a shawl around her shoulder now.
"Chay. I tot u bring me present in the bag."
Jermaine chuckled. "u want present?" she stretched out her hand witht the paper bag. "U can take the bag. Haha"
"u keep if for Merlion later." .{ i'd rather take u right now! }
We settled down on a secluded stone bench and spread out the snacks and beer between us. Popped open the beer and lit our cigarettes. This whole scenario reminded me of dating in my youth. i couldn't remember when was the last time i actually "panic" in the park with my wife. The only thing different is our conversation wasn't sweet nothings, was spouse bitching. We are no mutual friends with each others' half, maybe that's way we are comfortable complaining, to let out bottled up frustrations.
Me: "you do know that most of your problem it's better to let your folks know. i mean no parents would let their beloved daughter suffers."
Jer: "it's hard. All these years, whatever hurting things he done or said to me, I kept it inside as i don't want my parents to worry. I want them to believe i am happily married to the right man. I tried very hard to paint a perfect picture of a happy family."
". . . " i was lost for comforting words. At least my problem is adhoc and will cool off after a few days. We were both staring out across the calm water for a few quite moment. " i'm sorry.... "
Jer: "for what?" i turned my head and saw jermaine looking at me. i can see the reflection of the lamp post through her eyes as tears starts to well up. She quickly turned away as i think she was trying to hide her tears. "i'm glad i can speak out my heart to you. i'm really glad that you are here for me."
i stretched out my right arm over her shoulder and gave a few comforting pads. At this moment, i wasn't thinking of taking advantage of her. just felt for her just like you would gave hugs at funerals and departures.
Jer: "You don't mind?" She took the packets of chips between us and placed them on her side.
Before i figured out or responded Jermaine shifted closer and placed her head unto my shoulder. Jermaine's height was much attributed to her long legs, so as we both seated, it's the right height for her head to rest on my shoulder. Now we really looked like lovers. Luckily we weren't in town or anywhere. If kanna caught, sure got a lot of explanation to do.
We stayed in this position and chatted and smoked another round of cigarettes. Then this time, without a word Jermaine sat up.....
cocacola2012
12-11-2012, 02:47 AM
I like the title: smoke buddy, beer buddy, FB.
Sounds like the climate of the story is reaching...
Nice story..... please continue.
demonhunter
13-11-2012, 05:09 PM
Then this time, without a word Jermaine sat up.....
Jer: WOAH !!! AH NI TUA KI AH :eek::eek::eek:
:D
lostbird
15-11-2012, 12:24 PM
Hi, should be ma tu liow:D
eeemen
20-11-2012, 02:18 PM
Bro TS, waiting while standing up leh? How long more to stand?? Very very tired liao leh!! :D. Cheers, ..........
Eager2enter
29-11-2012, 06:29 PM
camping for more~~~
kittymae
29-11-2012, 11:40 PM
haha. I also skived work to read others work.
paiseh paiseh. Been busy. Hey, I admire your work too, u know?
yeah. Based on true events. Sensationalized a bit. Think Three kingdoms vs romance of three kingdoms. Sorry for the "slow fuck". I not bunny lah.
A longer update coming... Since I Mia so long.
Gam sia for,the support!
U update also leh!! :D
thecommand3r
01-12-2012, 05:31 PM
another supporter reporting! good story bro
UchihaNyke
03-12-2012, 03:49 PM
Pls continue bro, it's so nice edi
strongnoti
03-12-2012, 04:18 PM
oh.. nice write. pls continue.
Noobwee
10-12-2012, 06:43 AM
Camping for more bro!
verytired
14-12-2012, 11:30 AM
Sorry for the waiting... (provided u r waiting)
Was flying around for personal & work. Rushing to meet xmas deadline. Lack sleep & feel ran over by truck.
Will update this weekend after i catch up with sandman.
Piaseh
zwheii
16-12-2012, 03:53 AM
Nice read TS! Will be camping for more here :)
tombyron
16-12-2012, 07:45 AM
Continue faster bro..weekend already..
drewdrew11
16-12-2012, 12:06 PM
camping for exciting stuff to happen next!
Tootsies
02-02-2013, 07:44 PM
im still camping bro..............................
LovePotion
02-02-2013, 10:38 PM
camping for moreee and moreee
eeemen
08-02-2013, 04:12 PM
Bro TS, very tired waiting leh! But still waiting!! :D. Hope you're well rested and can come back with more!! happy Lunar New Year bro, cheers, ..........
verytired
09-02-2013, 12:03 AM
Woah. Still got camping supporters! So touched. I tot no one already and will let the tread fade off.
Will continue after the holiday break. In the mean time, a quick fix to bros who like my writings, I done a couple of detail FR over at the health centre forum. Do drop a line or two if u like those too.
When I was writing FR, did cross my mind that some bro might be interested to read the massage review part only. Also different ppl have different chemistry with the ladies and have different happy endings. Being too discriptive might ruin surprises and in some way, might make things difficult for the nice ladies.
But seriously, some "close encounters" I had there can easily sum up as "most fun you can have without fornication"
Maybe should write here withholding names? Your views? Either way, do support or comments on my FR.
Thanks and happy cny!
Humpy Dumpty
09-02-2013, 01:41 PM
great story. please continue!
EcchiPicchi
21-02-2013, 01:26 AM
Just read through all six pages of your thread! What a cliffhanger you left us with! Hope you can continue once you're less busy. :p
ace18
27-02-2013, 03:49 PM
Bro, finished all 6 pages now, waiting fo rthe next instalment, dont keep us hangin here dry for too long ya...=). Thumb up.
timezz
28-02-2013, 12:10 AM
hope you are back to cont this soon!
Heavenly100
28-02-2013, 06:30 AM
Nice story. Camp...
junior_cannibal
28-02-2013, 11:20 AM
Like what a client of mine mentioned, the two stuff one should abstain, drugs, the second one, gambling. One can be filthy rich, once hooks on either one of this two, either bankrupt or die.
jsingh85
28-02-2013, 05:01 PM
bro waiting for more updates.
eeemen
11-03-2013, 01:36 PM
Bro, a month has since past, hoping that you've gotten your stuff sorted out and ready to carry onz with your story? Cheers, ..........
Davincii
11-03-2013, 07:14 PM
*camping*
Nice story bro thumbs up!!mind teaching me how to upz kind of cant figure out how to do it,am new too hope you don't mind
Vectra
12-03-2013, 12:32 AM
No update for a long time...:cool:
SmokyJoe
14-03-2013, 06:13 PM
Been following since you first started and am eagerly awaiting for the story to continue. This is one of the best threads to follow! The pace is nice and comfortable and is easy to read every now and then. Kudos to you bro and I hope everything turns out well for you!
corps
17-03-2013, 01:05 AM
Just read from start bro. Good stuff and camping for more. :D
SpitZur
17-03-2013, 04:41 AM
Nice write up, camping for more
wilson80
19-03-2013, 09:31 PM
Still waiting for more updates
Overdrive
19-03-2013, 09:53 PM
Camping for more. :D
bergkamp
25-03-2013, 12:18 AM
Faster leh
Moltres
25-03-2013, 02:36 AM
nice ! camping for more
Ballistic
25-03-2013, 02:37 AM
Camping here
mdonion
22-07-2013, 11:49 PM
good work, any more?
Nikolaus
26-04-2015, 03:47 PM
It's been so long, but still no new posts... This was one of the few stories that I really enjoyed following and waiting for updates.
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