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oFudge
19-02-2014, 02:21 PM
My humble fictional story and here it goes. I'm still under moderation, therefore limited words to be post. Hope bros can show some support :D
Janet was born fifteen minutes after Jenny. The dads met while looking in the nursery window and discovered they only lived two blocks apart. Although Jenny's parents were much older than Janet's, a friendship that developed from the shared experience carried over to the little girls. They became best friends and were inseparable. They started to school together, shared everything, and began dating at the same time. They dressed alike and always wore their dark hair in the same style. Janet's eyes are a little bluer; Jenny's are a little more gray. Often being taken for sisters, even twins, caused little girl giggles.
Their similarities have continued as adults. Both are slender in build but have curves in all the right places. Janet is a quarter inch taller at five eleven and their weight is within a few pounds of each other. They can and often do swap clothes. Although using the same large B, small C-cup bra size, depending on the cut of the bra, Janet's breasts are a little more elongated with slightly larger nipples while Jenny's are more cone shaped and puffier. Each of them skipped the second grade, graduated high school at seventeen.
Jenny came to know a guy named jack ....
oFudge
19-02-2014, 09:03 PM
Looking back, I can't exactly pinpoint the moment when I stopped seeing Jenny as a sister and saw her as an extremely sensuous, very desirable young woman. When we'd get together during our visits home from different colleges, I'd find myself staring at her ass or licking my lips over her tits. I started fantasizing about her when I masturbated, and there were even a couple of occasions when I started getting aroused just from being in the same room with my sister!
It was all very confusing. But at the same time it was exciting and exhilarating. The orgasms I had after jacking off with images of Jenny dancing in my head were the best I ever had. I should mention that modesty was never a big priority in our family. We didn't exactly walk around naked in front of each other but no one thought anything about being seen in their underwear. Since I'd started having these feelings for Jenny, I'd been hoping for a glimpse of my sister in bra and panties, but it never happened. I figured after a while I'd find a girlfriend who would make me forget all about my sexy sister, but no such luck. I dated alright, plenty in fact, but I inevitably compared these poor girls with Jenny and they all came up lacking. You'd better believe I was one miserable (and frustrated) college man!
It was Friday after Thanksgiving, about three o'clock in the morning, to be exact. Jenny had been out on a date and came in a bit tipsy on Margaritas. We always chatted after dates if the other one's light was still on. My light wasn't on when Jenny reeled home that night, but she came in anyway. I was fast asleep and the next thing I knew someone tumbled into bed beside me and started tickling me.
oFudge
20-02-2014, 04:23 PM
Still want to carry on ? Or is it too boring. Do let me know as it is my first time writing it. Pardon me if it's badly written:(
gajugu
20-02-2014, 04:38 PM
I support your story, keep writing ;)
oFudge
20-02-2014, 09:04 PM
"Jenny! What the hell? You're drunk!"
"Not drunk, Jack," she said. "Just pleasantly horny."
She was more than horny, and her good mood was contagious. She started tickling me again, and before I knew it I had kicked half the covers off. I always sleep in the raw, and in the craziness of Jenny's tickling, my dick got exposed a couple of times. She pointed it out of course, with much laughter, and then it became a game for her to really get a look. I might have indulged her under other circumstances, but with her crawling all over me I had started getting aroused. The more she rubbed her body against mine, pressing her big boobs against my bare chest and kissing playfully, my dick was getting harder by the moment. There was no way I was going to let her see me with an erection. Or was I?
My head was spinning with the possibilities. After all, I thought, she was the one who was instigating all this craziness. She's the one who burst into my bedroom in the middle of the night and demanded to see my dick. Still, I thought, she's not in complete control and might not remember everything. But as these thoughts went through my mind, I didn't have a chance to act on them because Jenny made a sudden powerful lunge and pulled the sheets down to my knees. My big dick burst into view, all eight inches fully erect and pointed right at the ceiling. I started to shove pillow over my lap until I saw the look on Jenny's face. "Damn, Jack!" she gasped, a hand going automatically to her breast. "That's the most beautiful cock I've ever seen!"
"Is it?" I asked, with amazing calm. "Yes," she said, leaning over for a closer look. It was as if she was inspecting a piece of art, and I was almost amused at the way she looked at it with a critical eye. "It's a lot thicker.Longer too." (I remember thinking, well, that solves the mystery about whether she's sleeping with her boyfriend or not.)
"And look at those big balls!" C'mon, Jen I said, finally getting embarrassed. You make me feel like a prize bull at a county fair. Well, maybe that's how I see you just now," she replied. She frowned for a minute as she stared at my dick and then she remembered she was still wearing her heavy coat. She took it off and gave me a quizzical look. "Turn about's fair play, don't you think,
Jack?"
oFudge
20-02-2014, 11:20 PM
Story boring ah ? Why like no support one :(
TheOnlooker
20-02-2014, 11:34 PM
Story boring ah ? Why like no support one :(
Bro I think your starting a bit weird ah. You suddenly describe the girls then pop in one guy, to me I think you should explain how they met then add in dialogues of them talking before heading onto the kinky parts. As your topic is about birthday, maybe you can write about the start as you at the party or chalet or something, more engaging to the audience, not everyone will bother about when they're born. Well this is just my opinion, you have a vast vocabulary, I'm sure you can write well, its just the plot. You have m y support :)
time4secret
21-02-2014, 02:32 AM
Camping here for more updates
oFudge
21-02-2014, 03:11 AM
Bro I think your starting a bit weird ah. You suddenly describe the girls then pop in one guy, to me I think you should explain how they met then add in dialogues of them talking before heading onto the kinky parts. As your topic is about birthday, maybe you can write about the start as you at the party or chalet or something, more engaging to the audience, not everyone will bother about when they're born. Well this is just my opinion, you have a vast vocabulary, I'm sure you can write well, its just the plot. You have m y support :)
I think i did not plot my story properly and mess it up. Let me try to save it :D
Camping here for more updates
Thanks bro ....
oFudge
21-02-2014, 03:12 AM
I didn't know what she meant, but I watched breathlessly as she unbuttoned her blouse and tossed it aside. Her bra came next, and I gasped again as she loosened those beautiful tits of hers and let them swing free. She must have worn a really confining bra because her tits were much bigger than I'd thought. I'm not exaggerating when I say she could have been a centerfold, her young body was that perfect! "What do you think?" she asked, cupping her big boobs together and lifting them to her face. There was more to come. She slithered out of her skirt and took a few minutes to let me enjoy seeing her in just her panties. Again I thought she was real centerfold material, especially when she struck a few provocative poses for my benefit. When she rubbed her crotch with both hands and licked her lips, I just about lost control.
"Ready for the unveiling?" she teased. She hooked her thumbs in her panties and pulled them down a couple of inches. Oh, yeah!" I said. Jenny got to her feet and leaned against the headboard, her crotch just inches from my face. I could smell her pussy, and the sweet scent almost made me dizzy. I felt Jenny grab my head and hold on as she shoved forward with her hips. My tongue licked against that thin nylon barricade between her juicy pussy and my cunt-hungry mouth. "Yes," she sighed. "Yes!" Soon I had Jenny's panties dripping wet with my spit and could see the dark bush beneath the pink nylon. I couldn't stand the teasing any more and reached for the waistband of her panties. Slowly I pulled them down, baring the vee of brunette pubic hairs it pointed toward my goal. Finally those panties were down."What a beautiful cunt!" I cried. "And it's all for you, Jack," she whispered. I grabbed Jenny by the neck and pulled her closer. She opened her legs to welcome my tongue, and finally I was tasting what I'd been after all along. My tongue lapped hungrily at her tingling clitoris, and when it made contact Jenny had to grab the head of the bed for support. "Ah, yes!" she groaned. I pulled her snatch on top of my face, burying my tongue between those slippery cuntlips and tasting her flowing juices. Jenny was writhing against my face as I tongue-fucked her, moaning and holding me tight by the hair. My dick was very hard, and the thought of plowing her deep inside was almost too much. Desperate for some sort of relief, I grabbed my cock and slowly stroked it as I continued eating her. My hand would have to suffice until I got hold of the real thing!
"God, I swear I could cum this way!" Jenny cried finally. "But I don't want it like this, Alan. Do you?"
To be continued ....
Hope the bros can support my first story :D
IwantbustyKim
21-02-2014, 10:04 AM
3some sex coming up!!!!!
JiaXin96
21-02-2014, 10:08 AM
continue, quite interesting ah...
kunt69
21-02-2014, 10:22 AM
Oh please continue getting hot
oFudge
21-02-2014, 03:09 PM
3some sex coming up!!!!!
continue, quite interesting ah...
Oh please continue getting hot
Please stay tune bros. Will be writing later :D:D:D
Healthy
21-02-2014, 03:13 PM
Bro
Please continue
To be continued ....
Hope the bros can support my first story :D
zeajay
21-02-2014, 03:46 PM
Who's Alan?
oFudge
21-02-2014, 04:29 PM
Who's Alan?
Let me plot the story properly again. Got a little mess up. Wanting to include another people. cheers :D
oFudge
21-02-2014, 04:41 PM
"No," I admitted, reluctantly pulling my face from my cunt. "I love eating you though." Well,she said, sitting down slowly on the bed and reaching for my dick. "Turn about is fair play as they say." I lay back as she knelt between my legs and started licking my dick and balls. She paid particular attention to my nuts, commenting over and over again how big they were. I'd never seen a woman with such an affinity for a man's balls, she played with them for a long time while I lay there in ecstasy. She'd suck one into her mouth and then another, making me quiver with excitement. My whole body shook when she tried unsuccessfully to get both balls in her mouth at once. The effort felt terrific and I told her so. "But I'm dying for you to suck my cock" I said finally. "I don't think I can take much more of this sweet teasing." "Yes, sir," she said with a grin. "I'm gonna suck you like nobody's done before, and that's a promise." She wasn't kidding either! I don't know who she had been practicing on, but she sure as hell knew how to give head. She licked the dickshaft until it was wet with her spit before paying close attention to the cockhead. She worked that knob inside her mouth, rolling it around and tickling it with her tongue until I was almost begging for mercy. She looked up at me with my fat knob resting on her tongue. As good as that felt though, I was anxious to be deep in her mouth. When that moment finally came, I thought I was going to shoot right in her throat. Her lips slid down the length of my throbbing poker like warm, liquid satin, and when her mouth was buried in my pubic bush, I was aching to pop my cork. But we both knew this wasn't how we wanted to cum.
"Now!" she said. She sat up abruptly and let my prick fall from her mouth, but she held it tight as she looked me hard in the eyes. Her face was a mask of lust, and I watched her finger stroke her clit as she proposed the next outrageous step. The way she put it was far from eloquent, but I've never heard hotter words, before or since. "Ready to shove this big dick up again?'' "Damned right!" I grabbed her and kissed her, no peck on the cheek but a full blown tongue-down-the-throat effort that was met with equal passion. Our tongues intertwined as we thrashed around together, desperately seeking that perfect position for the moment of truth when I would slip my cock inside her cunt. Not surprisingly we gravitated toward the same position, with me on my back and her straddling my belly. She leaned forward to kiss me, pressing her tits against my chest as she grabbed my dick and guided it home. Slowly, very slowly she slid it, and my body shook hard when I felt my cockhead brush against her pubic fleece. I moaned loudly as my dick was suddenly encircled with her slippery, sticky cunt lips. "Oh, yeah," I moaned. "Feels really good, doesn't it?" she sighed. "Yes!" She was purposely taking her time, letting cock and cunt meet in slow, delicious agony. The head of my prick slid all the way inside, then an inch of the shaft and then another inch. Bit by bit I was flowing into her as she slid her cunt back to engulf my stiffness. The look on her face was sheer ecstasy as she gave a final thrust and took me in. We lay still for a moment, relishing that exquisite moment when we were first joined together. I knew it was only an illusion but my
cock felt enormous inside my her pussy. When I finally began moving it inside her, it felt longer than ever, and my balls were so packed with cum they seemed to swell to huge proportions. I knew it was just my imagination, but I ran with it, enjoying each ecstasy-packed moment.
To be continued ....
Please continue to support my first story bros :D
IwantbustyKim
21-02-2014, 05:19 PM
More TS! Just up u! Love this part:
"Now!" she said. She sat up abruptly and let my prick fall from her mouth, but she held it tight as she looked me hard in the eyes.
oFudge
22-02-2014, 05:24 AM
"You're so far into me'', she sighed. "I really want you to feel me, she said, lunging suddenly and making her whimper with pleasure. "Feel good?"
"You know it does," she said breathlessly. "Play with my tits some more. You like sucking tits don't you?" "When they're big and beautiful like yours!" I said.
She leaned down so I could get a better hold of her knockers. I guided one into my mouth, sucking the nipple between my lips and nibbling. They were already hard but after I licked and chewed them for a while, they seemed to get even stiffer. She moaned as I sucked those big pink nipple, pressing my face between her boobs and overwhelming me with her flesh. I felt as though I was being absorbed by her. My face was pressed between the swell of her huge tits while my dick was sheathed by her grasping, hungry pussy. I loved the feeling of being lost and overwhelmingly erotic. The intensity of our togetherness was something she felt as well. She said'' I've never wanted a man as desperately as I want you right this moment," she confessed. "I've wanted you all year long," I admitted. I watched her face as I continued pounding into her, thrusting up as she shoved down. We were in perfect sync and working each othet carefully, steadily toward mutual climax. "I've known all along," she said to my surprise. "You have?" I asked as I shuddered when she clenched her vaginal muscles and slid her cunt slowly over my thrusting shaft. It was as if my dick was being stroked by thousands of tiny hands and mouths, each one working a particularly sensitive zone."I've seen how you looked at me. Women notice these things whether you realize it or not. I know when a man is looking at me with lust in his heart, She paused for a second before adding, "Especially if it's you." "Damn, you," she groaned finally. "I'm right on the brink of cumming up a storm. How much longer can you hold off?" "I was waiting for you !" I cried. "You were?" she asked, love and sensuality mixing in her husky voice. "Yes. I was holding off only because..." "Don't wait!" she cried, suddenly humping my lunging dick with a frenzy that was almost frightening.
"Don't wait because I can't... not any more! Cum with me!" "Yes!"
"I can feel it!" she cried. "I can feel that hot load gushing in my cunt. Damn, Alan! You're cumming so much!" "All for you!" I groaned. "All for you!" "And I'm cumming too. Yes! We're cumming together, yes! Oh, yes!!" She wasn't kidding! My dick unleashed one thick, heavy spurt of sperm after another as my she drained my big balls. It was like I couldn't stop shooting and just when it was starting to hurt, the contractions deep in my dick stopped and so did the cum. She kept on cumming even longer than that, and when she finally slumped happily on my chest it felt like we were stuck together at the crotch. Our juices had met and mingled and formed the kind of bond that no one could ever take from us. "Well'', she said with an impish grin. "I'd say this was a night to remember, wouldn't you?" "It's definitely one I won't forget," I said. "Now give me a goodnight kiss!" Soon after we both drifted to sleep....
To be continued ....
Please support bro. If you like the story, feel free to up me and let me know when you up me :D
oFudge
22-02-2014, 05:25 AM
More TS! Just up u! Love this part:
"Now!" she said. She sat up abruptly and let my prick fall from her mouth, but she held it tight as she looked me hard in the eyes.
Thank you bro. Will continue writing, let me know if its boring or not good. My first story :D
oFudge
22-02-2014, 11:11 PM
It was a weekend and we decide to call along 2 other friends which is debi and karen and spend our weekend having a camp. A weekend camping. Something healthy instead of going to the bar and drink and stuff like that. So early in the morning all of us went to gather some camp stuff needed to stay over night. I mind running wild and i know that this camping isn't just a simple camping ! Soon after packing, we drove to the camp side and started to unpack. We make our camp, setting up two tents, and the "kitchen", before nightfall. After the evening meal, we all sit around a campfire, enjoying the coolness of a summer evening after a hot summer's day. Talk ranges from the silly to the hilarious, as we tell jokes and stories. Soon it is time to bed down for the night and that's when the fantasy really begins. We enter our tent, and arrange the sleeping bags and other articles before undressing for bed.
When "Debi" removes her top and bra, I'm aroused by the sight of her breasts, illuminated by the light of a single candle-lantern. I reach over and gently cup my hand under her breast, lifting it slightly so that its weight rests fully in my hand. I feel her response as she gasps a little in suprise. I bend my head forward and flick my tongue over her nipple several times before I take it between my lips and gently suck it, using my lips to roll her nipple back and forth. "Ummm, you'd better let me finish undressing before you start that," she whispers, "Or do you want to do it for me?" I simply release her in silent reply, undressing as she does. I marvel at the beauty and elegance of her form. From the graceful lines of her face, to her full breasts that fill my hands so nicely, and down to her hips, with their tantalizing curves and the patch of orange-red hair centered between them. Her legs are nicely shaped, and as she extends them out onto the sleeping bags, I envision how beautiful they look wrapped around my waist. After blowing out the candle-lantern, I turn to lay down, and she places a hand against my chest. "Stay there a minute," she says. And with that, she sits up and begins to return the caress that I gave her a minute ago. Her head bends down and I feel her breath against my nipple. Then her tongue is teasing and caressing at the same time. Finally, she sucks the nipple into her mouth, rapidly running her tongue around it. Her hand strays to my thigh, caressing the inside, tantalizingly close, but still keeping away. I know this game, and its name is estacy. She lifts her head and smiles in the darkness. I can barely see her but her blue eyes are sparkling with secret suprises. Through the darkness I reach for her waist, sliding my hands up until my thumbs are underneath her breasts, drawing her close to me. We kiss, gently at first, with tender and sensitive tongues playing over one another until the intensity of the night begins to fan the flames of desire. Tongues begin to run wild, first in her mouth, then in mine. Our hands are caressing, kneading and pinching flesh on one another, promising more later, and wanting it now.
A giggle breaks the spell, as we realize the thin nylon of the tent does nothing to stop sound. We listen to our friends for a moment, trying to figure out if we've been overheard. Another giggle, followed by a slight moan tells us we need not worry about them. We return to our private little heaven, kissing to restore the flames. Kissing her all over, ignoring the place she wants kissed most of all, while at the same time, returning my hands to her nipples, to lightly pinch and pull on them I can hear her breathing becoming heavier and
watch the rise and fall of her hips. Without warning, she suddenly sits up, grabbing my shoulders and forces me onto my back. Suprised, I lay down on the sleeping bag, as she half-stands inside the little tent. As her pussy descends towards my face I can hear a lusty voice whisper, "Don't tease me. Eat my pussy damn it." Her thighs on either side of my head, I open my mouth and use my tongue explore her moist tender pussy. I'm suprised by her wetness, and the force of the rythmic motions her hips are generating. Her hands are in my hair, pulling up on my head, making me realize she'd wanted this all night. On and on into the night. She grinds her pussy against my tongue and pulling my head into her thighs threatens to pull my hair out. On and on, her breathing is comming in shorter and shorter breaths. Her wetness is everywhere it seems. I can feel it in my moustache, on my cheeks, and even some running down my neck from my chin. She announces her orgasm with short breaths and little cries, while her whole body spasms and shudders its approval. My lips are pressing and sliding over her clit in off-rythym beat to her contractions, trying to prolong her pleasure.
To be continued ....
Show some support bros :D
oFudge
23-02-2014, 05:32 PM
Getting boring ah ? No bros support :(
Moderarion so comments slow but my tent is pitched for sure
oFudge
24-02-2014, 02:15 PM
Moderarion so comments slow but my tent is pitched for sure
No problem bro. Thanks and will continue to write :D
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