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raider123
05-01-2006, 01:59 AM
Dear bros of SBF, I have received several pm asking when I will continue my previous fantasy story. Thanks for the support. I have decided to let it RIP. However, I decided to start a new fantasy story about a middle-aged man named Tan Ah Beng... ...My apologies if any bros here have the same name. Anyway, it is just purely a story...

Wake up!!! A loud thunderous roar rocks my bedroom… I wake up from my sweet dreams in Hawaii with all the bikini babes to see a fat old hag standing besides me. That is my wife who I have married for 25 years…

Talking about my wife, Mary… I really missed the past when she is still a young petite girl who I court persistently to win her heart although I do admit that partially I am “interested” in the business of my father-in-law. Over the years due to her hobby in appreciating good food, she has grown to a size of 70kg, way above the 45kg when I just know her.

What time already you still sleep? Hurry up! Go and wash up… Over the years, I am used to her foul temper…and there is one thing which I always hold it against her which is her insistence of not having any kids…what to do since she is the one who let me enjoy life. At least, I don’t have to slog it out like other people.

My name is Tan Ah Beng, aged 48. I am the general manager of a local mid-sized SME dealing in trading of household products. I got the present post due to my wife. My father-in-law is the chairman of the company. The company is pretty ok with about $40mil turnover year in year out. Basically it is still a family business with my brother and sister-in-law running it.

My wife and I live in a terrace house at Bukit Timah which is given by my father-in-law. In fact, he owned the adjacent 3 units, one for himself, one for his son and another one for his younger daughter. He said that we should live near each other so that our family will be harmonious.

“Tonight come back early, we are going to pa’s house for dinner, said my wife. “Ok, I will try, I said. “What try…you better do it,” She yelled at me. I just can’t be bother at her. It is just another dinner where my father-in-law will boast about the capability and achievements of his son and daughter working in the company to the rest of my relatives. Anyway I am used to it. Everyday, I just hope to leave my house early in the morning and get back late in the night. I feel that I can only get my pride back when I am outside my house.

Every morning, I will hop into my modest Toyota Altis and drive to work. My office is at Tuas. Our company owned a landed office cum warehouse which we keep all our products. “Good morning Mr. Tan…Good morning Mr. Tan…” As I walk through the warehouse, all the workers greet me. I saw a group of them sitting together and I walked over…”No need to work ah?” I said. “Hi Good morning Mr. Tan!” said Ah Huat. Ah Huat is one of our senior store assistant who is about the same age as me. He and I are on good terms due to our same “hobby”.

“What are the 2 of you doing here,” I asked. “We are discussing about Miss Lin,” said Ah Seng who is one of our junior store assistant. “What so interesting about Miss Lin,” I asked. “Today she wears a g-string leh,” said Ah Huat with a horny smile. “How do you know,” I asked. “Mr. Tan, Ah Huat has a pair of bionic eyes…some more she wears a white miniskirt today…can see the lining clearly leh…” said Ah Seng. “Ya, some more she walked until so hiao…the butts swaying from left to right,” added Ah Huat. “You all… very hardworking at this type of things,” I said with a laugh.

Miss Lin is administrative executive of our company who has worked 5 years with us. She is 34 this year and still single. Although she doesn’t look young compared to those SYTs but she still maintained her complexion and still looks good. With her long flowing hair and a slim body, she can still make men turn their heads especially MILF lovers.

Due to her martial status and eagerness to get married, she dressed more and sexier as her age increases…I think women are always scared that they will be left on the shelf.

“Good morning Mr. Tan,” I was greeted by an unfamiliar voice. “Good morning, you are?” I replied. “I am the new temp receptionist who will be helping out Dora,” She replied.

I look at this SYTs this front of me. I am admitted that teenagers have eaten too much potato that helps them to over-develop… A young girl of her age has at least a C-cup … yummy.

Our company has about 45 staffs, consisting of about 30 office staffs. We are quite an established brand in local scene since the early days when it is run by my father-in-law. Currently, it is run by his elder son, Albert. He is someone who cannot make it in local university and went to London to study. In my opinion, he will be the one who will squander away the family fortune. However, there is one thing which I have yet to learn for him is to pretend to be capable in front of my father-in-law.

Although I am his brother-in-law, I am not on good terms with him. In fact, he tends to bully me most of the time, and I have to take the rap for some of his mistakes. Although I am the GM, he seems to trust a junior manager, Kelvin whom they study together in London.

Albert is someone who is flashy and likes to show off his wealth. He droves a Enzo Ferrari and likes to collect expensive watches. Sometimes I wander whether he is making a lot of money for the company. Most of his expenses are charged to the company bill like fine dining, first-class air travel. At work, he doesn’t seem to be capable and a lot of staff is unhappy with his attitude.

To be continued... :)

ricardo
05-01-2006, 11:27 AM
bro good start. hmm ... wonder who he bonk first the SYT or the 34 year spinster. make them all horny sluts please :D

IceBerg
05-01-2006, 06:09 PM
Bro .. nice 1 .. Never fail to make me glue to comp for hrs !!! Pls continue :D

raider123
06-01-2006, 11:43 PM
Bro Ricardo,

Still got a lot to learn from you...I hope my story will have a lot of twists in it...most impt i hope it will be realistic and reflect our society behavior... :)

lazy_chai
06-01-2006, 11:58 PM
Agree with bro iceberg..... Pls don't let us wait too long Mr. Tan.:)

aspire
07-01-2006, 12:05 AM
Bro, you are really a great writer!!!:D
Gonna be chasing your story from now!!!
All the way!!! Cheers!!!!!

KingEros
07-01-2006, 03:16 AM
I hope my story will have a lot of twists in it ... most impt i hope it will be realistic and reflect our society behavior ... :)
Bravo, bravo ... keep them coming, make this place educational. :D

Wigan23
07-01-2006, 10:13 AM
Hi Bro,

Nice to to see you writing again...pls continue with your story !

Hurricanz
07-01-2006, 05:47 PM
Hi Raider123,

this is the first time i read ur story....ur story line very gd n it left me hangin there....if i got the power, i will up u....tks for takin ur time writin us a story :)

sexytoy.com.sg
08-01-2006, 02:19 AM
Tell me more....over developed gals and the enzo ferrari ah sia kia

nitro_heat
09-01-2006, 01:23 AM
Hi Raider123,

Any ideas on how to continue the story ?

Artic
09-01-2006, 10:39 AM
more...more...more....:D

ricardo
09-01-2006, 10:45 AM
Bro Ricardo,

Still got a lot to learn from you...I hope my story will have a lot of twists in it...most impt i hope it will be realistic and reflect our society behavior... :)

your writing style is good in fact i think i have got to learn from u. But hor one thing u have to surely learn from me ... SPEED! bro faster continue lah :D

t_henry
09-01-2006, 11:09 PM
good introduction of a new story.
waiting for your good work

raider123
10-01-2006, 10:06 PM
A big thank you to all bros here...I admit I am a bit slow pls pardon me :)
If all of you enjoy the story just leave a reply in this thread...that is a big encouragement for me...points are secondary...

Here you are...Part 2

“It’s time for the meeting…”said Kevin as he entered my room. “Ok, let’s go…” I replied. It is better to be early than late as Albert is famous for his foul temper. We make our way to our meeting room, a place with contemporary décor which cost about $100,000 to renovate. It is another so called “project” handled by Albert to impress our clients… Actually no staff in the company likes to attend meeting hosted by Albert. This is because he will sure scold someone in the meeting just to show everyone he is the boss.

Everyone sit down at our respective places waiting for Albert to arrive. Today’s meeting is to discuss about the slide in sales for the past 3 months. Everyone is very tense as we don’t expect Albert to be a gentleman today… Albert came in about 5 mins together with his secretary, Deborah.

Immediately as they walk in, my eyes roamed around Deborah’s black tight miniskirt which has a high slit in the front of her left leg. The slit is so high that as she walks, you can almost see her…

Pomppp….Albert drop his documents on the table loudly…”Can someone tell me why our sales dropped for more than 30% in the past 3 months?” Albert shouted. “Mr. Lee, please answer my question,” Mr. Lee is an old guard of the company who has worked for 30 years since my father-in-law days. He is the Sales Manager.

“Recently, all our competitors start to reduce their prices due to cheaper products from China…” replied Mr. Lee. “So? Do I have to teach you what to do…as a sales manager, you have to convince them that our products are better and valued for money…” said Albert. “I know but we can deny the fact that pricing is the key factor for household consumer products,” said Mr. Lee. “What the f*&^% I need you for as a sales manager,” Albert shouted.

“As a sales manager, you have to bring in the sales. Don’t give me all this crap…Don’t think that you have an iron rice bowl here since you have worked for 30 years in this company, “said Albert sarcastically. Mr. Lee remains solemn and his head starts to dip. I pitied him being insulted by a young chap who knew nothing about this industry.

“David…why didn’t you report this matter to me earlier…,” David is my Christian name given by my wife because she feels that my name is very o pian…Oh no, it’s my turn now for the grilling.

“Eh Albert, at first we thought that it is just a dip in sales for one month…we didn’t know that it has developed into a mini trend…” I replied. “As a GM of the company, you should be alert to any unusual developments in the entire company…if not why should you be the GM…” Albert said. Albert just goes on and on… My morale becomes lower and lower…

At last meeting is over…all the staff walk out of the meeting room…I feel very bad after the “grilling” session by Albert but I think most of the staffs including myself are used to it liao…

As I walked out, I can’t help to take a few glances at Albert‘s secretary Deborah... She is 28 years old and has been working in the company for the past 2 years. Deborah is a pretty and sexy OL babe. She is 1.70m tall with a pair of long “killer” slender legs. She has a slim figure coupled with a pair of nice B cup breast. Her butt is shapely…those that you want to grab it… I think she can easily be a model if she chooses to. The best thing is that every male in the office looks forward to see her at work each day. Although her dressing is not always revealing…but sometimes we are treated to her occasional zaogeng…I guess male species always like the “now you see it now you don’t” theory…this make us feel more shiok…

To be continued...

Squall
11-01-2006, 07:47 PM
Wahh! Solid, camping here. :D

nitro_heat
12-01-2006, 01:34 AM
Waiting for more...

raider123
13-01-2006, 12:27 AM
Since Bro ricardo said that i am slow...I think I have to speed up :D I hope you all enjoy the story line so far...

Part 3

“Mr. Tan, want to lim kopi mai?” said Ah Huat as he work into my room. “Kia loh, u got jio Ah Seng or not,” I asked. “He is waiting downstairs,” replied Ah Huat. Every afternoon, I like to go for kopi with Ah Huat and Ah Seng. I don’t know why I just feel very comfortable going out with them…Although there is a gap in our position, they are my best buddies in the company.

“Mr Tan, kenna butter again in the meeting,” said Ah Seng. “Xi Guan Joo Ho,” I replied. “I see you very poor thing leh…every time kenna bully by Albert, no matter what you are the GM mah, must give you some face what,” said Ah Huat. “Mai Gong liao, last nite where did you all go” I asked.

Both of them giggle. “Last nite we went to secretary theme’s night at Egos, we saw a Miss Lin lookalike there leh, “said Ah Huat. “You still dare to say, you raba raba the girl until so song…like machiam you molest Miss Lin like that, “ said Ah Seng. “Wah lau, everyday in office, my eyes see all the zaogengs of Miss Lin but cannot touch. Now can find some one similar, sure very gian one what…” said Ah Huat.

“Chion Boh…don’t bluff me leh…Miss Lin I also gian you know,” I said. “Chion lah, she look at least 90% like her, even the “headlights” also same size…” said Ah Seng. We all just spend our time talking cock in the kopitiam…

Suddenly, my phone rings…”Hello,” I said. “Hello! What time already? Where are you,” said Mary. This is the most stressful and depressing noise I can hear…”Coming back liao…rushing some work.” I replied. “You better don’t be late for dinner if not Ah Pa will be angry…come back now!”. I quickly rush back home in order to spare myself the nagging later in the night…

Once in every week, my father-in-law wants the whole family to have dinner together. I reached my father-in-law place at 7.00pm. “Pa…” I called him as I enter the living room. My father-in-law is reading the newspaper. As usual, he will not bother about me. “Beng, you are here ah“, my mother-in-law called out. “Ma..” I greeted her. “Just nice…Let’s have dinner now…” She said.

My mother-in-law, Susan is the step mother of my wife’s Mary. My father-in-law marries her when Mary’s mother passes away. My father-in-law is already 67 years old while Susan is only 40 years. Actually my father-in-law is a dirty old man as well, lusting after Susan. I believe if you are wealthy, age is not a barrier. Although at 40 at that time, Susan is considered a lao chio for her age. With only some small visible on the tummy and legs, her figure is still well maintained especially huge pair of huge gigantic tits. If she is sent to Ethiopia as a nanny, many kids will have to call her mum…

Mary and Albert are given birth by the previous wife. Over the years, Mary has learned to accept her step mother but not Albert. He is still not on good talking terms with Susan. She has tried many ways to make Albert accept her but failed. In the eyes of Albert, Susan is just another slut who seduces his father and is going after the inheritance.

Susan is another smart lady who knows that Albert is my father-in-law blue eye boy. Thus it is to her advantage if she can make Albert accept her. Although Susan is a scheming lady, I seem to get along with her well. I believe this is because I am harmless to her in her plans.

“Everyone waiting for you…take so long…you purposely right?” My wife talked to me sternly. “Something cropped up in the office, I have no choice,” I replied.

“Albert…Erica…come down for dinner,” my mother-in-law shouted. I saw Albert walking down with his pretty wife, Erica who is a former air stewardess.

She married to Albert when she is 27 years old. Erica is a materialistic girl who loves to associate with all the luxury brands. Her monthly expenditure on branded stuff easily hits $30k to $40k. She marries to Albert also partly due to the wealth in this family. She likes to show off in front of Mary with all his luxury items. Most of the time, Mary will just complain by saying that I am a useless guy, not able to give her what Erica is having.

Although she is at 30 years old now, Erica will be any man’s PCC target. When regular spa and slimming treatments, she maintained her complexion and figure in tip-top condition. She has a pair sexy eyes that can hook you on…Her milky skin is as smooth as porcelain…which makes you want to lick her all over… Somebody said that she look like Lillian from the movie superstar thingy. Well I do agree but Erica’s figure is better and headlights are much bigger…

Although she just given birth 2 months ago, her figure did not goes out of shape… instead her figure is more well-endowed now especially her boobs which is visibly much bigger now…She is wearing a black spaghetti top with a short denim skirt. No one can really tell she has just given birth 2 months ago. Together with her new highlighted curvy long hair…I realize I just have a hard-on looking at this goddess sitting down in front of me.

To be continued...

raider123
13-01-2006, 12:30 AM
Kindly give me some ideas how do you all want the story to continue...? All feedbacks are welcome :)

jrbecker99
13-01-2006, 05:46 AM
how do you all want the story to continue...? feedbacks are welcome :)

you write very well. story line tops. keep to it, please, more. take care.

oakleyeug
13-01-2006, 08:53 AM
Bro solid story... So solid untiul I wan to scold u.... Hey u let us all gian gian and then take so long to write...:mad: ... Me wanking half way realized the story have not touched home base yet (sex) yet I so horny liao...

Hey juz a joke:p , you have a excellent story my friend wonder when will I see Made In Singapore Blue Flim? By the way when is the new installment coming? Keep it up...

PS:

Have up ur points don disappoint me...

Oak

fat29
13-01-2006, 08:57 AM
Bro Raider123,

Just report the story as truthfully as it has happened in your mind. Hope you can outwit Albert soon and make him as powerful as his ability take him, but not more powerful than that. I am fed up with bosses who are incompetent.

Of course, I wish that you won't bonk your relatives but it is for you to decide.

Hope that you can write the story quickly. Thank you.:)


Kindly give me some ideas how do you all want the story to continue...? All feedbacks are welcome :)

obelisk
13-01-2006, 10:07 AM
so many targets available sia...
think Mr Tan gonna have a sore dick soon:rolleyes:

nex_terday
13-01-2006, 12:03 PM
Bro raider,
your story is most captivating. I guess it touches a sensitive nerve in many of us that there are many people born with silver spoons in their mouths and treat others are dirt, or maybe many of us are just plain jealous?:rolleyes:

Just wondering how I hope the story would go on - more about your conquest of the colleagues or to see how you put down that dimwit Albert!

Wtf, best is kick him in the ass by bonking his wife!!:D

Keep in coming bro!!
Cheers

desk13
13-01-2006, 12:09 PM
Just one word, SOLID.

natas
14-01-2006, 10:14 PM
Nice story, keep going....

beaver
16-01-2006, 12:20 AM
Bro Welcome back

beaver
16-01-2006, 12:20 AM
Bro Welcome back

raider123
16-01-2006, 01:43 AM
Bro solid story... So solid untiul I wan to scold u.... Hey u let us all gian gian and then take so long to write...:mad: ... Me wanking half way realized the story have not touched home base yet (sex) yet I so horny liao...
Hey juz a joke, you have a excellent story my friend wonder when will I see Made In Singapore Blue Flim? By the way when is the new installment coming? Keep it up...
PS:
Have up ur points don disappoint me...
Oak

Bro oakleyeug... my apologies for making u so gian and let u hang it there dry... I promise the sex episode will be here soon.

I guess it is just our man instinct to feel more gian when there is a steady build-up in the story line. I just don't enjoy those films when started, the actor and actress are already thick in the action...

No problem on the points...just hope you enjoy...

raider123
16-01-2006, 01:46 AM
Bro Raider123,

Just report the story as truthfully as it has happened in your mind. Hope you can outwit Albert soon and make him as powerful as his ability take him, but not more powerful than that. I am fed up with bosses who are incompetent.
Of course, I wish that you won't bonk your relatives but it is for you to decide.
Hope that you can write the story quickly. Thank you.:)

Bro fat29...I will definitely not bonk my relatives in real life cos my moral values does not allow that. As I said, this is just a story and I wish to exploits human weakness in my story...

raider123
16-01-2006, 01:54 AM
Dear bros...here you are..another episode...bro oakleyeug...pls don't scold me cos the sex element is not there yet :D


The whole family seat down at the rectangular dining table. Mary and I are facing Albert and Erica. “Siong…dinner is ready…” My mother-in-law called out to my father-in-law to have dinner. He put down his newspaper and walks over. "Where is Bernard?” My father-in-law asked. “Pa, he is asleep after taking her milk…” Erica replied with her soft sexy voice. “When he wakes up, let me know I want to play with him,” said my father-in-law with a smile. My father-in-law dotes Bernard very much especially he is the only grandson now.

“Where is Shaun and Zoe,” My father-in-law asked. Shaun is the youngest son of my father-in-law. I heard he is an illegitimate son from Mary. He was given birth by one of my father-in-law’s mistress. Zoe is his wife.

“Shaun and Zoe has to attend a private function and will be back later…” replied my mother-in-law. “Ok, let eat…,” he said. Everyone greeted my father-in-law to have his dinner.

“Albert, how is the sales for this month?” my father-in-law asked. “Pa, luckily I realize that in time, we managed to reverse the slide. This month, we should see a 5% increase,” Albert replied. “That’s good. Keep it up!” my father-in-law said. “David, next time you should report this issue to Albert earlier,” He said. “Pa I know, sorry it is my mistake,” I said.

As I am eating, I take a few glances of Erica…the way she put the rice in her mouth using the chopstick is sexy…those lips of her…Suddenly, she noticed me taking a few glances at her. I quickly turn away.

After finishing the dinner, the men sit down at the living room. Mary and Susan went to wash up the dishes. “Oh…my little baby has wakened up…”said my father-in-law happily. Erica has carried Bernard down from upstairs. As my father-in-law is sitting down at the sofa, Erica bends down slightly to pass Bernard to him. As a horny man’s instinct, my eyes straight away honed in on her pair of boobs, hoping to see any longkang. Erica’s black spaghetti top is quite hugging. I can’t see much zaogeng. Suddenly, Erica’s eyes saw that I am staring at her boobs. She gives me a stern look. I quickly turn away and look at the TV program.

As it is pretty late, I walk back to my terrace house. As I am walking, my mind keeps thinking of Erica…I wonder why Mary is way apart from Erica…I guess it is just my poor life. When I reach home, I went to take a bath and prepare to turn in.

“David! You dare to sleep,” my wife shouted. She just came back from my in-laws place. “Why what wrong?” I asked. “Erica complained to me that you are staring at her hornily…” She replied. Oh my god…I think I am in trouble tonight… “Just now during dinner, I already noticed that, you keep looking at her right,” She yelled. “I didn’t. It is just a coincidence.” I tried to defend myself. “I tell you first you better don’t let me catch you playing a fool outside, if not you will get it from me,” she screamed and screamed.

For this act, I am being “fined” for my one month allowance of $500 dollars. My salary is controlled by Mary. Although officially my pay should be $8,000, most of it is being “kapo” by Mary. For that night, I was also being “banished” to the living room.

Luckily the storm did not continue the next day. As usual, I went to work the next day. As I am making my way to my car, I saw Shaun getting into his Lotus Elise…followed by Zoe.

Shaun is the second son of my father-in-law. He is very playful and rebellious, even my father-in-law can’t take him in good hands. Everyday, he will just enjoy himself with booze, girls and even drugs…Every month, he will just ask for money from my mother-in-law. Surprisingly, she gives in to him every time. I personally feel that she might want to spoil him so that my father-in-law will not have a good impression of him. Subsequently, when it comes to the inheritance, he will not have a major share.

Zoe is a model of a famous local agency. I heard that they got married because Shaun “up” her during one night when they are both drunk in the living room of my in-laws house. Although she is not pregnant, my father-in-law insists that Shaun married her. As for Zoe, there is no loss to her because she is marrying a rich man’s son.

Today, Albert has called for a meeting. The agenda is to discuss venturing into consumer F&B products. He has called for a meeting at 9.00pm. Everyone, as usual, dare not to be late. Albert has arrived, together with his secretary Deborah and Erica, his wife.

Erica is the Business Development director of our company. After she married Albert, she has quit her job as a air-stewardess and join the company. If you ask me whether she is capable, I feel that she is more of a pretty "vase" for the company. However, she is very capable when it comes to entertain male clients...she really knows how to "sha jiao". All men will melt when she do that.

Today she is well- dressed in a black business pants and jacket. What is interesting is her pink top beneath her jacket. I just loved the lacy flowery design...just on top of her boobs area. It just give her a professional look with a tint of sexiness...

Deborah on the other hands, is not losing out to Erica. She is wearing a black tude dress with a white cardigan over it. I will be an ideal situation if both of them can involved in a tarma session...My mind starts to wonder and wonder...

To be continued...

Shagedelic
16-01-2006, 02:39 AM
next next next pls

nitro_heat
23-01-2006, 12:05 AM
Raider, where r you ?

darts
23-01-2006, 11:26 AM
Ah Beng where are you????

verisio
24-01-2006, 10:35 PM
Beng beng... more.. ahh more pls!

hehe :D

raider123
27-01-2006, 02:13 AM
Sorry bro for the delay. I am quite busy recently. Thanks for your support. This is the new episode.


Today, Albert has called for a meeting. The agenda is to discuss venturing into consumer F&B products. He has called for a meeting at 9.00pm. Everyone, as usual, dare not to be late. Albert has arrived, together with his secretary Deborah and Erica, his wife.

Erica is the Business Development director of our company. After she married Albert, she has quit her job as an air-stewardess and joins the company. If you ask me whether she is capable, I feel that she is more of a pretty "vase" for the company. However, she is very capable when it comes to entertain male clients...she really knows how to "sha jiao". All men will melt when she do that.

Today she is well- dressed in a black business pants and jacket. What is interesting is her pink top beneath her jacket. I just loved the lacy design...just on top of her boobs area. It just gives her a professional look with a tint of sexiness...

Deborah, on the other hands is not losing out to Erica. She is wearing a black tude dress with a cardigan over it. I will be an ideal situation if both of them can involved in a tarma session...My mind starts to wonder and wonder...

“Today, we should discuss about biding to be the sole-distributor of Simone Foods in Singapore…” said Albert. Apparently, the food giant decided to appoint a local distributor rather than dealing with individual retail outlets.

Albert has more or less decided to put in a competitive bid despite some differing views from the grounds. “Albert, no doubt, it will increase the revenue of the company by almost 50% however, our cash flow will be tight,” I said.

“We need to hold more inventory now since our product variety has increased. Based on a minimum 2 months holding period for inventory, our funds will be stuck in the “warehouse”. I explained. “Don’t worry about financing; we will approach some banks to increase our existing facility.” Albert said. “We have to move fast if not this opportunity will slip away. We cannot think like a pig and move like a tortoise now…” Albert said.

Albert is obviously insulting me. Anyway, I can’t be bother because eventually the company will not be mine. Who cares whether it will survive or fail…

That evening, as usual, we are having dinner at my father-in-law place. I reached the place the same time as Albert and Erica. Albert is very proud to tell my father-in-law about his big plans to bid for the sole-distributorship of Simone Foods.

My wife, Mary and Susan are working on the dinner. “Ma…”, I called out to my mother-in-law. “David, so early today ah?” She asked. “It is better for him to be early than we wait for him,” said Mary.

I tried to use the toilet in the kitchen. “David, the flush is spoilt. Use the one upstairs,” said Susan. “Ok,” I said. I walk up the stairs to the second floor… Suddenly, I hear someone talking…

“Is my dear Bernard a good boy today, let mummy carry you…” The voice is very familiar. It is Erica in the room with Bernard. I just didn’t bother her and carry on with my business. After coming out from the washroom, to my biggest surprise…I hear…”Good boy, let mummy feed you ok?” said Erica.

Out of curiosity, I decided to push the room door which is not closed slightly. My god…I can’t believe my eyes. Erica starts to unbutton her officejacket…one by one buttons came off…next she remove the jacket…which reveal her porcelain skin and fair shoulder…she then unhook her bra…oh my goodness…by now I am getting very excited now…I look around hopefully no one is around…Erica then pull down her left pink spaghetti strap…and pull down her top…I can see her milky left boob in clear view. At least a C cup due to her pregnancy. However, I miss out on her nipples…shit

“Come good boy…” Erica said to Bernard and starts to feed him. Bernard seems to suck the nipples happily. As I am watching this scene, I can’t help to rub my hardened dick inside my pants. “What a lucky boy Bernard is, how I wish Erica can “feed” me with her milky C cup boobs…The sight of an OL babe doing breastfeeding in her office attire gives me a new fantasy…

“You naughty boy…ah…don’t bite so hard…,” Erica said. Bernard is bitting her nipples hard. “Slowly…suck …suck…” said Erica. “Ssss…Ah…you naughty boy…just like your father.” I can tell that Erica is enjoying the gentle suction on her little nipples. “Ssss…ah…ssss…ah,” Erica moaned gently with her eyes closed. The more I look at it, the more horny I am. The ecstasy look of Erica makes me feel real hot.

Suddenly, I heard gentle footsteps coming from the living room. Someone is coming up. I quickly hide at the balcony and observe. Oh it is my father-in-law. He wanted to walk into the room but stopped suddenly at the door. I can see that his jaws almost dropped off.

He stand outside the room and peep. Obviously, he is enjoying the “scenary” of his daughter-in-law. As he watched on, a horny smile being to show on his face. What a horny man he is… He stands there for at least 3 minutes. Then he backtracks slightly and called out, “Erica, time for dinner.” He said.

To be continued :)

t_henry
27-01-2006, 01:21 PM
story progreess is slow...but quality is the best.

nitro_heat
27-01-2006, 11:22 PM
Time for dinner ? It's time to continue..... c'mon dun keep us in suspense.

FDSeah
27-01-2006, 11:35 PM
This story really good...i alway log in to see the story is it update. Dont let us waiting...

sexkills
03-02-2006, 10:27 AM
Hey bro... Your story rocks! More when you can! Will be waiting!:cool:

SamiHyypia
03-02-2006, 12:07 PM
wah...this one reminds me of the old school tcs drama"ah lang de gu shi" the one played by "wan zi liang" haha....of coz la..tan ah beng is ah lang lo.....maybe erica can be fann wong...muahahahahhaa :p

Kingshawn
08-02-2006, 07:43 AM
TAn ah beng , Tan Ah Beng...

Where are you? We'r waiting....

More more more... :)

ragnarclaw
08-02-2006, 10:25 AM
Where is Mr Tan...ops time for me to "drink milk" too:D

raider123
09-02-2006, 01:18 AM
Bros, sorry to keep all of you waiting...I hope all of you are still enjoying my long long story...:D


After the incident, I just can’t believe my eyes that my father-in-law is lusting after Erica. But I can’t blame him. Which man can resist the lure of such a beautiful woman? I think it is always the small head over the big head.

The year almost came to the end. Albert decided to hold a function at his house to invite all the business associates. We invited about 70 over people. The guests are treated to a sumptuous buffet dinner by a six star hotel. Lobsters, oysters and escargots are on the menu. This function is handled by Erica. A woman of her character would definitely make it as lavish as possible. Being the GM of the company, I have to entertain the clients.

I arrived at his house at about 5.30pm in my suit and wait for Erica to give her briefing. Some of the staffs are requested to help out in serving the guests. Surprisely, Ah Huat and Ah Seng were told to work overtime as waiters.

“Mr. Tan, what time can we go home today,” Ah Huat asked. “I think about 11-12pm maybe,” I replied. “So late ah,” Ah Huat said. “It’s ok what, Erica already said we can treat it as OT,” said Ah Seng.

“Mr. Tan, I heard later got a lot of chiobu attending this function,” said Ah Seng. “Don’t know leh. Maybe.” I replied. “Wah if later got those show half ball one will be good,” said Ah Huat. Both of them giggled away hornily. “Erica is here, keep quiet,” I said.

Today, Erica is well-dressed for this occasion. She wears a one-piece black halter top which show the middle long kang of her boobs, obviously she is not wearing a bra. Her hair is nice done up like a SIA stewardess. Her dressing is matched with her set of diamond necklace which cost $50,000, according to Mary. With her porcelain fair skin and her milky boobs, I think she will make a lot of male guests pcc tonight.

Erica briefed all the staff about their responsibilities tonight. “David, where is Deborah,” Erica asked. “I think she should be here soon. “ I replied. “What, she is still not here,” Erica said. “I will call her again,” I said. All along, Erica is not on good terms with Deborah. Surprisely, Albert managed to keep her as her secretary. I think most probable, Erica is jealous that Deborah is younger than her.

The guests start to come in at 6.30pm. Albert also arrived at that time, together with Deborah. She is in her normal office attire but her sultry looks make up for everything.
Obviously, Erica is not so happy that Albert arrived with Deborah.

Almost all the distinguished guests have arrived. Not surprisely, most of the male guests surround around Erica and Deborah. I carried my duties by entertaining some of the guests.

“Hi Mr. Chen, how are you,” I said. Mr. Chen is the managing director of the local retail supermarket chain which has more than 40 outlets. Our company is trying to work with them to use their retail chain to distribute our products.

“I am fine. Thanks for inviting me here today.” Mr. Chen replied. “It should be our honor to have you to grace this occasion.” I replied politely. “Where is Albert? I don’t see him around.” Mr. Chen said. “He is here just a few moments ago,” I replied. “Let me get you a drink,” I said.

We proceeded to sit down at a quieter spot besides the pool. “Mr. Chen, have you gone through our proposal,” I said. “I did. To be frank David, is the proposal done by you?” Mr. Chen asked. “Eh…how did you know,” I asked. “Well, such a detailed proposal can only be done be someone who is very experienced in this industry, definitely not by Albert or Erica.” He said. “David, you are a talented man, you should re-consider your position right now. You are a smart person. You should know what I mean,” Mr. Chen added.

I understand Mr. Chen’s conversation. He is encouraging me to do something on my own than to stay with my father-in-law’s company. He is also aware of the treatment I get working for my father-in-law. As we are talking, Erica saw us and walks up to us.

“HI, Mr.Chen…how are you, so nice to see you here,” Erica said in her sexy voice. Hi Erica, you look stunning today.” Mr. Chen said as his eyes scan Erica’s body from top to bottom. “Thanks for the compliment. I am so scared that my pregnancy will make my figure go out of shape,” said Erica. “No lah, your pregnancy makes you look more well…endowed,” Mr. Chen said sheepishly as he glances at Erica’s boobs…

Erica is aware of my presence and said,” David, do you mind to help me entertain Mr. Chew from C&T, “ Erica said. “Ok, see you later Mr. Chen,” I said as I took my leave. I can see that Erica wants to flirt with Mr. Chen and my presence becomes an obstacle. All this because she wants Mr. Chen to work with us.

To my surprise, Erica and Mr. Chen get up and move to the backyard of the house. Sensing that something is amiss, I decided to follow them…

“Just now, you should not say those things, David is there,” Erica said. “What is there to scared? What I said is true,” said Mr. Chen with a laugh. “You are very bad…,” said Erica as she gives Mr.Chen’s arm a pet. “Your figure is really superb after your pregnancy especially the… woo it is much bigger now,” said Mr. Chen hornily.

“Talking serious, how is our proposal to you,” Erica asked. “Well, it looks ok…should be no problem.” Mr. Chen replied. “Then when can we sign the formal agreement,” Erica asked anxiously. “Don’t worry, my dear, when you want me to sign, I will sign loh,” replied Mr. Chen as he placed his hand on Erica’s back and stroked it downwards. “Don’t do this, wait someone sees it,” said Erica as she stand up from the seat.

“You don’t bluff me ok, I take your words” Erica said. “Ok lah. Don’t worry,” said Mr. Chen. “This is good news, maybe we should have a toast to celebrate,” Erica replied.

At first, I thought Erica and Mr. Chen have some “special” relationship but I am wrong. The night went on smoothly until the Chinese orchestra performance. Miss Lin walks up to me and said that she has made a wrong booking date. I am in a panic because the performance is one of the main highlight of the function. Albert walks up to me and asked what happened to the performance. I told him the truth and he went into a fury.

“What, you have booked the wrong date,” asked Albert. “No. I have told Miss Lin to confirm the booking for me but she makes a mistake,” I said. “No, Mr. Tan you have given me the wrong date,” Miss Lin said. I am surprised by the behavior of Miss Lin. I am stunned for a while. “How can you make such a mistake, you are the GM,” Albert being to raise his voice and the guests are alerted to our conversation.

“But…But I did tell Miss Lin about the change,” I replied. “Don’t defend yourself. If your staff makes a mistake, you should bear it as well.” shouted Albert. “I am sorry for the mistake I know it is my fault,” I said as I don’t want to argue with him. “I am very sorry Albert,” I replied. Albert continued to rant at me. Phrases like stupid, useless, pig have been used on me. All these under the watchful eyes of all the guests.

My heart sunk lower and lower. I want to hide but I can’t. I ask myself whether I should take all these insults and continue to endure all these for the years to come. Why does he have to treat me like that since I am his brother-in-law? I am in a dilemma. I really don know how long I can still take it. I can remember the wretched face of Miss Lin on that night. I tell myself to be patient and wait for my chance. I WILL STRIKE BACK AND PROVE TO EVERYONE.

tomyz
09-02-2006, 12:50 PM
Beginning to look very interesting Bro....

monster98
09-02-2006, 01:18 PM
interesting story but machiam like we have to wait long long for 1 episode.. :D

ragnarclaw
09-02-2006, 01:56 PM
that's a interesting story, i wonder what will happen to Erica & Mr Chen later on..heehee:D

obelisk
09-02-2006, 02:00 PM
interesting story but machiam like we have to wait long long for 1 episode.. :D

bro...
rich ppl like mr tan will celebrate the whole 15 days of the chinese new year....
jus have to wait for him to come back after the holidays...

ken_v2
09-02-2006, 05:30 PM
i wonder if this could turn into a movie or tv series.. damn good!!

matsuda
09-02-2006, 05:39 PM
well at the rate the story is unfolding, maybe my son will have to take over........nevertheless an interesting start so far...

kkplayah88
09-02-2006, 06:06 PM
Classy story.. like chasing TVB TV serial.. sorry I am ah pek haha. Come on Mr. Tan Ah Beng waiting for the next installment pleeeeze

mccormick
14-02-2006, 06:10 PM
Ah Beng... where you??? tio toto MIA liao har??

nitro_heat
14-02-2006, 06:25 PM
Where are you Ah Beng ? :confused:

axeman24
14-02-2006, 07:47 PM
Hmmm.............. parking here already :D

raider123
20-02-2006, 01:32 AM
Sorry for the delay...I hope all of you would like the development so far :)


Next day, I am looking for Ah Seng and Ah Huat to go lim kopi. As usual, I went to the warehouse to look for them. “Seng, Huat, lim kopi liao,” I called out. “Ok lai liao,” they replied as standing on top of a ladder to do stock-take for a batch of goods.

As we are walking out of the warehouse, Miss Lin appeared in front of us. Taking me as a transparent person, she said,”Ah Seng, Ah Huat, I need to find out the quantity of IDCOD126.” She said. It is the stock code we used in our warehouse. Today, Miss Lim is in her usual sexy attire, wearing a short denim skirt and a white shirt which can see the design of her white bra slightly.

“Alamak, after we lim kopi liao, then we check for you lah.” Ah Seng replied. “They will check for you later,” I said trying to throw in my weight. “But Mr. Tan, this is required by Erica, I am afraid she will be unhappy if she can’t get it now,” replied Miss Lim sarcastically.

“Ok never mind, you want it now, let’s go,” said Ah Huat with a grin on his face. Obviously, he is up to no good. “Miss Lin, all the stock are on the first, second and third pellet, please counts yourself.” Ah Huat replied. Miss Lin counted all the stock on the first pellet and then said,” Ah Huat, help me climb up the ladder to do the counting,” She said. “Miss Lin, sorry today Ah Seng and I have rheumatism and we can’t climb up the ladder, “Ah Huat said in a way to spite Miss Lin. “What, what sort of excuse is this,” she said. All of us just laughed in amusement.

“Miss Lin, when a worker is unwell, we have to take care of them and I don’t think you need a GM to do stock take for you right,” I said with a grin to the amusement of Ah Huat and Ah Seng.

“Never mind, I do it myself,” She replied angrily. Miss Lin has fallen into the trap of Ah Huat. As she climbs up the ladder, our eyes become bigger and bigger. The short denim skirt presents her pair of sexy legs… … to us… …I didn’t know that Miss Lin has a pair of nice legs… …higher…higher…we saw her white lacy undies…By now, I believe all our little bros has waken up. “HEY WHAT ARE YOU LOOKING,” Miss Lin shouted and brings us back to reality. “Let go for kopi,” I said as we walk our way out.

“Do both of you ever fantasize bonking Miss Lin,” I asked. “Definitely, but can only think lah, not in this life,” Ah Seng replied. “Do you believe I can make it into a reality for both of you?” I said. Ah Seng and Ah Huat look at me in a puzzled way. Obviously, they don’t know what I intend to do…

“Mr. Tan, you are joking right,” said Ah Seng. “No, I am not. Both of you are my buddies. I tell you. I do not want to endure any more. I want to change my life. I promise that as long as I make it, both of you will have a good life,” I said. “Mr. Tan, you said until so serious,” Ah Huat said. “Will both of you support me,” I asked. “Don’t worry, we will as long as you don’t forget about us,” Ah Seng said.

Suddenly, I realized I am a changed man. I start to think of ways to have power, status, money and women in my life… and most importantly, get back at those who have bullied me before.

One evening, I left my office at abut 9.00pm and realized that I have forgotten to bring along a quotation which I need to pass to a client tomorrow. I decided to make my way back to our office in Tuas. By the time I reached, it is already 10.00pm. I am surprised to see Albert’s Ferrari in the parking compound. As I entered the office, I saw the lights in Albert’s office are still on. As I walk closely, I heard voices…NO…moans coming from his office.

“Ah…ah… Albert…slower…” A familiar voice…I tried to move closer… It is Deborah. “Ah…ah…ah…don’t stop…” Deborah moaned… “Nice pink nipples…simply delicious,” said Albert hornily. All this while, there are rumors in the company saying that Deborah has affairs with Albert. Now I can confirm that they are real.

“Ah…ah……ah …lick the other one…” moaned Deborah. “You little slut…didn’t know you are so horny…” said Albert. As I am listening to all these moans, I decided to unzip my pants and mast my bro myself. I start to fantasize the half naked Deborah with her office blouse being unbuttoned and Albert is sucking the hell out of her boobies.

“Ah… …ah ……Albert…who is…better…ah…me or Erica,” Deborah asked Albert as she cannot control her ecstasy. “My dear…you are best…how can Erica compared to you,” Albert replied.

Suddenly, my phone goes off. I am in a panic. I quickly throw my phone on the ground and hide beneath a desk. Deborah and Albert came out of the room and saw the ringing phone on the ground.

“It belongs to Mr. Tan.” said Deborah. “He must have left it here,” said Albert. “Don’t bother, let go back again…hehe” said Albert with a grin. “Don’t want…no mood already.” said Deborah. “Come lah…you have to help me to release my fire,” Albert said. “Albert, it is quite late already. I have to go home. Tomorrow ok.” replied Deborah.

After this incident, I realized I can start the first step of my big plan…

obelisk
20-02-2006, 12:33 PM
ooh...
big plans....
i like the sound of that...:D

the BENG will RISE to the occassion...:rolleyes:

axeman24
20-02-2006, 12:55 PM
Go Go Tan Ah Teck make them pay man hee hee :D

dohman
20-02-2006, 01:47 PM
good things are worth waiting for, right? ><

oakleyeug
20-02-2006, 01:50 PM
Mr Tan,

Mr Tan ahhhhh......
Wake up liao....

As Mr Tan woke up from his sleep he saw Deborah lying near his Johnny, he was very surprized that someone is lying so near....

Mr Tan...

He realized that all these r just a dream.....

Bloody hell mate... So long write 1 stroy... I holding on to my dick but still cannot see action.. How?

But this story is getting interesting man... Pls don torture us and give maybe 2 per day enough liao... Take good care mate...

Oak

nitro_heat
20-02-2006, 11:06 PM
Oh come on what's Mr Tan's excellent plan ?:D

bobosooter
21-02-2006, 12:33 AM
thanks for the story...more more more!:) :)

Marlborolgt
21-02-2006, 01:42 AM
Make Them Pay..!!..Make them Pay.!!!.. :mad:

obelisk
21-02-2006, 11:05 AM
Oh come on what's Mr Tan's excellent plan ?:D

he is still planning...
lol...:D

nitro_heat
21-02-2006, 11:26 PM
Oh muz be planning wisely......

Marlborolgt
25-02-2006, 12:38 PM
It must be a big plan...:rolleyes:

bobosooter
25-02-2006, 02:13 PM
MORE Updates! :)

huathuatman
05-03-2006, 05:00 AM
Wah nice story i finish le when can i get next update ????

verisio
06-03-2006, 01:31 AM
wah beng pls!! We want you!!!

raider123
06-03-2006, 01:49 AM
Dear bro...I am very busy recently...I hope all of you have not fallen asleep waiting for the story :D


After the famous “milking” incident, I realized my father-in-law seemed to enjoy making trips to Albert’s house, using the pretext of visiting his grandson… … … …

One night, knowing that Albert has to attend a trade association dinner, my father-in-law decided to pay a visit to his grandson.

“Grandpa, good evening,” Yati, the maid greeted my father-in-law. “Where is Sir and Mdm,” he asked. “Sir not in, Mdm is upstairs with Bernard, I will go and call her,” Yati replied. Sensing that history may repeat by itself, my father-in-law quickly stopped her. “It’s ok Yati, I will go up and look for her myself.” As he walks up the stairs, he became excited over what he hopes to see.

The door to Albert & Erica’s is not closed. He walks in slowly…He could hear the sound of running water… Erica is having her bath. He walks to the baby bed and saw Bernard tossing around. “My dear grandson, let gong gong have a hug,” said my father-in-law as he lift Bernard from his bed. Little Bernard starts to burr and spits some milk onto my father-in-law.

“Aiyo, you little naughty boy…you must have a good time sucking your mummy’s nipples,” he said with a laugh. He then place Bryan back into his bed and look around in the room. To his excitement, he saw a pair of Victoria Secret’s sexy lacy bra and panty laying on the bed. “Wah so sexy…my goodness,” he said as he starts to feel the soft material with his hands.

He then brings the lacy panty to his mouth and sniffs it… “Hmm…this is heavenly,” he said. The sound of running water stopped. He quickly put it back and pretends to play with Bernard. The bathroom’s door opened and Erica is surprised to see her father-in-law. “Pa, you are here ah,” Erica said. She is wrapped around in a white towel. My father-in-law is surprised to see her in towel. “Sorry, I will go out first and let you get changed.

As he is walking out, he tried to glance at Erica, his beloved sexy daughter-in-law. She looks sexy with her wet hair. He went down to the living room. A while later, Erica came down in a spaghetti top exposing her sexy lacy strap Victoria Secret’s bra.

“Pa, you are looking for Albert ah?” asked Erica. “Ya, at the same time, look at Bernard,” he said. “How’s work in the office,” he asked. “Ok, we are very close to secure the contract with CTL Distribution in Malaysia.

“That’s good. That Mr. Chen is not easy to deal with. Who deal with him directly, Albert or yourself?” He said. “I deal with him directly,” replied Erica. “He does have a soft spot for women,” he said. As they are chatting, Albert came back. “Pa, you are here,” said Albert. “Ya, why so late,” said my father-in-law. “I have to finish a important presentation,” replied Albert. “It’s quite late, I have to go,” said my father-in-law.

My father-in-law made his way out. Erica starts to nag at Albert. “Do you have a presentation to do, how come I don’t know,” asked Erica. “It is for a new client,” said Albert. “I think the presentation is for Deborah to see right,” said Erica sarcastically. “What are you talking about,” said Albert annoyingly. “Don’t think I don’t know that you have a illicit relationship with her,” shouted Erica. “Mad woman!” Albert then made his way upstairs.

Erica and Albert’s marriage is on the rocks. If not for the fortune, Erica would have divorced Albert. Somehow, this issue is going to play in my advantage…

cuntbuster
06-03-2006, 01:53 AM
yeah man..nice...so mayb erica will seduce the father in law and ignore albert????haha...anyway..u have a nice story...too bad i cant up ur point......

japboy
06-03-2006, 02:05 AM
dis one machiam TVB serials oreadi... great man.. i will set up my tent here!! :D

Tailsman
06-03-2006, 02:51 AM
Love your corporate and family affair. Its a MESS!

Can't wait for the next chapter.
Thanks you and keep it cumming.

staylucky
06-03-2006, 12:38 PM
Like brother raider's story very much :)

verisio
06-03-2006, 01:20 PM
pls i beg u.. hurry up n continue!!! Dun stop like that lah.. Argh. It's tormenting!

Wigan23
06-03-2006, 08:13 PM
Bro, finally u are back manz..pls dun keep waiting too long for your next episode..:p

terumo
06-03-2006, 08:41 PM
Great story!

ilovesg
07-03-2006, 03:39 AM
Give us more man~ gave you a 5 rating for this story Excellent! With lust , deceit , plots , schemes./ all rolled into one !! Guess there's gonna be lots of blackmail involved heh heh :P Waiting !

t123ang
07-03-2006, 09:40 AM
Give us more man~ gave you a 5 rating for this story Excellent! With lust , deceit , plots , schemes./ all rolled into one !! Guess there's gonna be lots of blackmail involved heh heh :P Waiting !


good story for media corp better than the fish ball story.... lol

EricssonMan
07-03-2006, 09:52 AM
Keep it cuming. :)

mccormick
07-03-2006, 10:54 AM
ah beng.. dun let us wait for another month hor.... :)

WazAGuy
07-03-2006, 11:04 AM
Great stroy...I wonder will ah beng family turn out to be Inner Forbidden affair with incest...jus a wide guess

ken_v2
07-03-2006, 01:42 PM
great story but the wait is too long.. .. LL.. still gotta wait.. hahaha..

alexgoh67
07-03-2006, 10:01 PM
Brother!!!

Pls dun torture us by keeping us waiting....this is a great story!!!!

I have a dream....that Someday all samsters will pool money together n start a TV station....u'll be cheif editor cum story-writer...we'll beat Mediacock's stupid and boring channel 8 drama series hands down!!!

Will be camping here patiently...awaiting yr next instalment...

...dun keep us waiting too long BRO!

100 thumbs up for u!
AG67

scott-iD
08-03-2006, 12:36 AM
Brother!!!

Pls dun torture us by keeping us waiting....this is a great story!!!!

I have a dream....that Someday all samsters will pool money together n start a TV station....u'll be cheif editor cum story-writer...we'll beat Mediacock's stupid and boring channel 8 drama series hands down!!!

Will be camping here patiently...awaiting yr next instalment...

...dun keep us waiting too long BRO!

100 thumbs up for u!
AG67

Haha.. yea a couple of us can be the casters too.. I can already start to imagine which roles Erica L and Fiona X are gonna be! :cool:

nitro_heat
08-03-2006, 01:25 AM
LL got to wait again.

raider123
08-03-2006, 01:30 AM
Brother!!!

Pls dun torture us by keeping us waiting....this is a great story!!!!

I have a dream....that Someday all samsters will pool money together n start a TV station....u'll be cheif editor cum story-writer...we'll beat Mediacock's stupid and boring channel 8 drama series hands down!!!

Will be camping here patiently...awaiting yr next instalment...

...dun keep us waiting too long BRO!

100 thumbs up for u!
AG67

Bro Alexgoh67, although i would like too but it is still a dream of mine. Actually I have a dream to shoot a TVB machiam alike serials but rated 3rd catergory. I think until now no one has does that in Hong Kong...

Thank you to all the bros...for making my thread into five star ratings. I seriously hope that I will "produce" more episodes...stay tuned ;)

raider123
08-03-2006, 01:38 AM
23-02-2006 04:28 PM KNN your story sucks... TABeng

I have received a pm on 23-02-2006 and the bro has deducted my points. However, he did not leave any name behind.

My sincere apologies to you if my story has offended you in certain way. It is just purely a story without any intention to offend anyone. :o

spotter542
08-03-2006, 01:48 AM
I have received a pm on 23-02-2006 and the bro has deducted my points. However, he did not leave any name behind.

My sincere apologies to you if my story has offended you in certain way. It is just purely a story without any intention to offend anyone.

Bro raider123 ,

No need to apologise to anybody in particular , much less to an Ah Kwa who zap a good story-teller (You) for no apparent reason.
Do continue to post your story of a poor chap ( My surname really is Tan , hor ! ) who defied all odds and triumphed against those who looked down & bullied him. :)
In the end ( hopefully ) , he rose to POWER and those bit**es were begginng him to shove his manhood into their lovehole ! :D

Cheers !

blondes
08-03-2006, 07:32 AM
WAhhhhh.. more liao ???

good story ley.. like watching TV Drama... good good.. waiting for yr next chapter... :D

K123456
08-03-2006, 11:17 AM
23-02-2006 04:28 PM KNN your story sucks... TABeng

I have received a pm on 23-02-2006 and the bro has deducted my points. However, he did not leave any name behind.

My sincere apologies to you if my story has offended you in certain way. It is just purely a story without any intention to offend anyone. :o
Don't be mad, he zap your points, I'll up you back to compansate. good story and pls keep it up

nitro_heat
09-03-2006, 12:15 AM
Hey Raider, don't take it to heart. :)

cheryl27
09-03-2006, 07:56 AM
erm....can pls continue with the story? hehe i'm waiting to read on that !!! CheERs

SexFreak
09-03-2006, 07:54 PM
erm....can pls continue with the story? hehe i'm waiting to read on that !!! CheERs

Hi sis, 7-early-8-early already changing your turf liao huh :rolleyes: Hehehe..........Cannot wake up so early man..........

Cheers !!!


SexFreak

Marlborolgt
11-03-2006, 11:19 AM
Bro wats the big plan?? Are u going to install DigiCam in Albert office and ericia room???:rolleyes:

PJ_chris
12-03-2006, 11:31 AM
Good story brother...when is u next cheapter?

raider123
13-03-2006, 01:40 AM
erm....can pls continue with the story? hehe i'm waiting to read on that !!! CheERs

I didn't know my story so powderful until I attracted a sis to this thread. I wonder how you feel when you read my thread Cheryl27?

As for bros...I think they feel horny but for sis? :rolleyes:

Eternity_Gal
13-03-2006, 01:43 AM
Do you fantanize the Ah Beng story plot urself?

I enjoyed and 've been following it ...

Keep up with ur Good work..

Cheers

raider123
13-03-2006, 01:44 AM
Here you are bros.. another episode...:)

One evening, my father-in-law asks all of us to go back for dinner, saying that he has something to announce. As usual, the whole family sits down at the dining table. Surprisingly, Shaun and Zoe are around as well.

“Since everyone is here, I will make an announcement.” My father-in-law said seriously. Everyone is tense due to the tone of my father-in-law. “On Monday, Shaun will be assuming the post of Finance Director in the company. Zoe will also be joining the company as a Sales Director.” He said. I can see the jaws of Albert and Erica dropped.

“Pa, eh…why this sudden change,” Albert asked. Obviously, Albert is not happy about this. This means that Shaun may vie for his inheritance eventually. “Well, I think the company is growing rapidly and we need more people to run it,” he said. “Pa, Albert and I can still manage it at the moment,” said Erica.

“Shaun has told me that he wants to learn how to do business, I think it is a good time for him to learn now,” he said. “Albert, you must guide him along,” he added. “Pa, don’t worry, I will learn from Guo.” Shaun said. Albert remains silent but he does not seem to accept Pa’s decision.

“As for Zoe, she is my daughter-in-law, how can I still let her go out and work, especially in those skimpy bikini or outfits as a model.” Pa said. “Pa, I am already the business development director, I afraid there may be an overlap in our duties,” said Erica. “It’s ok.” Pa said firmly.

Looks like there is going to have a good show in the office. Albert will be definitely on a “lookout” for Shaun and Erica will for sure “nail” Zoe in the office.

The war erupts during one of our normal meeting…

“Shaun, I heard that that you did not approve Erica’s budget for the distributor’s exhibition in Malaysia,” Albert asked. “Yes, I feel that the budget is too high, $50,000 just for a day event, I think it is ridiculous.” Shaun replied. Erica is fuming. “Shaun, this is the same amount we spent last year, even Pa also approved it,” said Erica. “Yes I know but I think we can do it at a smaller budget,” said Shaun.

Ever since Shaun is working in the company, Albert and Erica have a hard time dealing with him. On the other hand, Zoe seems to be a simple girl, who does not seem to take her appointment seriously. Although she seems to be very arrogant, she is not as scheming as Erica.

Come to think of it, Zoe is another attractive girl which every man will fantasize. Standing at 1.72m, she has a slim model figure which is curvy at the right place. Her boobs, although smaller than Erica’s, look perky on her slim frame. She has long silky hair. Together with her oval face and bright eyes, there is only one word to describe her…Chio…

With such a beautiful creature in the office, all man will try to get close to her. Albert, in his lusty character tries to get fresh with Zoe.

“Late lunch ah,” Albert said as he saw Zoe in the pantry eating her lunch. He then walks close to Zoe. Although Zoe is wearing a jacket over her white top, her creamy boobs are visible from a top-view. “Chicken rice, where you buy it,” Albert asked as her zoom his sight on Zoe’s creamy B cup boobs.

“The canteen in front of our building,” said Zoe as she is not too bothered about Albert’s questions. Albert seized the opportunity to move even closer to Zoe. He can see the black bra Zoe is wearing. The pair of boobs just looks delicious. “It must be very delicious,” said Albert even though he is referring to Zoe’s boobs. Zoe looks up and saw Albert lusting on her boobs and adjusts her dressing. “Dirty old man,” she said as she stared Albert.

“Eh… sorry I don’t mean it.” Albert apologized. “But you can’t blame me because I am a man and how can I resist looking at you since you are so sexy…,” Albert said. “Zoe’s just smile and continue eating her rice.”

Albert went back to his office after making his coffee. “Good afternoon, Albert,” said Deborah as she just came back from her lunch. As she seat down at her seat, she took off her coat, showing a black tube dress beneath. Albert just stands there staring at Deborah.

“It is so hot outside,” said Deborah as she used tissues to wipe her shoulder…the top part of her boobs…those smooth skin. “Deborah, come to the meeting room now. I need to discus about the sales statistics with you,” Albert said as he walks into the meeting room.

“Orh,” replied Deborah. As she walks into the meeting room, Albert quickly locked the room. “Deborah, I need you to help me to put out the fire.” Albert said as he jumped onto Deborah. “Albert, no want lah, just after lunch.” Deborah said. “Help me! I need to screw now,” Albert said as he pushed Deborah face down on the table. He then lift up her short skirts and pull down her G-string. Without wearing a condom, he just insert his hard bro from the back into the mei mei of Deborah…performing a doggie stance

“Ah…Ah…Albert…very pain…” Deborah cried as her vagina is still dry. Albert just continued drilling into Deborah. “Ah…Ah…Ah…Albert…don’t want…” Deborah pleaded. “You be a good girl, after I am happy, I will bring you to LV for shopping ok,” Albert said as he drill harder and harder at Deborah. “Ah…Ah… …Ah… Ah…,” Deborah started to enjoy the thrusting as her love hole starts to produce the lubricants required.

“Shiok… … very tight…baby,” Albert said as he enjoyed himself. “Ah… … faster… boss…Ah …Ah……,” Deborah moaned. Albert then pull down the tube dress of Deborah from behind and massage her boobs. “Smooth…skin…oh baby,” He said as he rub his hand on Deborah’s boobs. “Ah…Ah… boss don’t …play… with my… nipples…Ah…… Ah I can’t…take it…Ah… Ah,” Deborah moaned loudly. Albert is flirting with Deborah's sensitive nipples which send a chilling sensation throughout her body.

Albert’s hand phone went off… It is Erica. He quickly stopped and pick up the call. “Hello, Erica.” He said. “Albert, we have to meet Mr. Lim from GW Networks at 2.00pm, where are you,” Erica asked. “Ya, I remember, you wait for me.” Albert replied.

Meanwhile, Deborah dressed back her clothes. “Why? You are angry ah?” Albert asked. Deborah is angry about the rough treatment of Albert on her. “You are so rough on me,” Deborah said. “Don’t be angry ok, nah this is for you to go shopping ok,” said Albert as he pass a stack of $50 to Deborah. “That’s better…,” she said

ilovesg
14-03-2006, 03:19 AM
Wow more and more women getting into play. heh . Post more leh.. i am sure you don't want us to camp here days and night non stop right.

blondes
14-03-2006, 03:28 AM
wahhhh..... nice story... continue plsssss:p

mrkangoo
14-03-2006, 08:36 AM
upz upz upz

obelisk
14-03-2006, 09:13 AM
damn....
i nid a stack of $50 notes rather urgently...
wad do i haf to do to get it from Albert now that i know his secret???
can let me know his phone number??
i go take few snapshots can liao...:D

raider123
15-03-2006, 12:32 AM
Do you fantanize the Ah Beng story plot urself?

I enjoyed and 've been following it ...

Keep up with ur Good work..

Cheers

Sis It is just a fiction story although I don't deny it is my personal sexual fantasy. I hope one day I can act in this TAB serials ... :D

raider123
15-03-2006, 12:33 AM
Do you fantanize the Ah Beng story plot urself?

I enjoyed and 've been following it ...

Keep up with ur Good work..

Cheers

Sis It is just a fiction story although I don't deny it is my personal sexual fantasy. I hope one day I can act in this TAB serials ... :D

raider123
15-03-2006, 12:36 AM
“Mr. Tan, any program after work,” said Ah Huat. “Nothing most probably going home,” I said. “Wah lau so boring ah,” said Ah Seng. “Today payday leh, we are thinking to go Geylang,” said Ah Huat with a horny smile. “Geylang…but…no want lah…later see someone familiar,” I said. “No worry lah, we walk in the back lane, no one can see us,” said Ah Seng.

“Eh…I think still don’t want, later see all the tua liap neh mei mei then cannot tahan, “ I said. Ah Huat and Ah Seng burst out in laughter. “Cannot tahan then up them lah,” said Ah Huat. “Don’t want lah, my monthly pay only $800, where got enough to call chicken,” I replied. Ah Huat and Ah Seng look at me in disbelief. They couldn’t believe that my wife, Mary only give me $800 a month to spend, not considering the fact that I am the GM of the company. Even Ah Huat and Ah Seng have a take-home pay of $1,500 to $1,600 each.

One afternoon, we are having our weekly meeting in the company. Albert has hinted that there will be some re-shuffling in the company. Everyone is eager to find out. I am expecting a cross-fire between Albert and Shaun.

“Today, I will be announcing some changes to the management appointment of the company. “Kelvin has done well in helping us to penetrate the Malaysia market. Based on the figures as at Feb 2006, the contribution from Malaysia operations amounted to $10mil of our total turnover. We are expecting this figure to reach $18mil for this financial year close on June 2006,” said Albert.

Everyone is happy about the announcement. However, Albert has not announced the new position of Kelvin. “As such, I would like to promote him to the position of GM,” said Albert. Everyone is surprised by the appointment so am I. Everyone starts to talk among them concerning my position in the company.

I am thinking Albert should be promoting me to a higher position since I am his brother-in-law even though he don’t really like me. “As for David, he will be taking over a newly created position of general operations manager,” he said. I don’t know what the duties for this position are until I received the notice from HR. I am very angry and storm into his office.

“Albert, I need to talk to you,” I said. “Why are you so rude to enter without knocking the door,” he reprimanded me. “I am sorry but I want to know why you have demoted me to take care of the warehouse,” I asked. “Are you sure, I didn’t. You are still the GM just that you are taking care of another area,” he said. “Albert, everyone knows that it is a demotion, why do you have to do this to me, I am still your brother-in-law,” I said.

“Well, Kelvin is more capable than you so you can’t blame me, Kelvin is a Master degree’s holder while you are just an A’ levels holder,” he replied. “Albert, you must at least give face to your sister, Mary, since I am her husband,” I said. “I have spoken with sis and told her about this. Well she has no objections because you will still be drawing the same salary,” he said. “But…Albert,” I said. Before I can finish, Albert ask me to get the hell out of his room.

I slump back into my office chair and think in deep thoughts. What have I done to deserve this? I always give my best to this company yet I am treated in this way. Even my wife is not supportive of me… “You are such an failure Tan Ah Beng”

verisio
15-03-2006, 01:16 AM
I support you Tan ah beng! Your story touches alot of us bros here. We fight for u! :D

kkplayah88
15-03-2006, 09:42 AM
Tan Ah Beng you da man.. come one dont get even.. get angry.. revenge is a dish best served cold.. support support!!

Angrycum
15-03-2006, 10:18 AM
Woo good story. Quickly! Time for TAB to exact his revenge liao and get some pussy!

obelisk
15-03-2006, 10:53 AM
time to reboot com for Mr Tan liao...
install new software Revenge 1.01...;)

ken_v2
15-03-2006, 11:12 AM
go ah beng!! go!! we will support you.. .. revenge! .. screw all the girls .. hahaha...

hotshot0406
15-03-2006, 11:40 AM
Gd story Ah Beng

homeosapian
15-03-2006, 12:14 PM
keep the story coming...

SexFreak
15-03-2006, 03:48 PM
Wah lau.........what a great story. Vengeance Vengeance Vengeance...

Cheers !!!


SexFreak

fleetheart
15-03-2006, 10:28 PM
way to go, bro!! :D

Cao_pi
16-03-2006, 01:02 AM
Bro,

Honestly speaking, your story is captivating me at this moment. Any thoughts of publication? With stronger plots and better editor, your story will be a hit among man :D . Looking forward to more stories... All the best!

Its starting to match up to OES standard

FDSeah
16-03-2006, 08:33 AM
This story rock...i think u can sell ur story to TCS and make adrama show for all sporean.....:D :D

qfdy
16-03-2006, 09:35 AM
Good one. Keep it up Mr Tan..........

ah rat
16-03-2006, 10:52 AM
http://www.footballmotion.com/files/GANGSTER.swf

bigbeng88
17-03-2006, 12:40 AM
... i day i will learn to write like you.. excellent!

Marlborolgt
17-03-2006, 11:19 AM
Bro i got Superd Sales Track record, Can I join Ur Company and we plot the plans together... i will help u blindfold the sluts..make them cry for you. hahaha:rolleyes:

Sharpshooter
17-03-2006, 06:51 PM
Ah Beng , you are not useless ! Prove them wrong. Revenge neber tasted so sweet ! :D

nitro_heat
18-03-2006, 09:07 AM
The turning point of Tan AH Beng has come.

raider123
18-03-2006, 07:06 PM
Bro,

Honestly speaking, your story is captivating me at this moment. Any thoughts of publication? With stronger plots and better editor, your story will be a hit among man :D . Looking forward to more stories... All the best!

Its starting to match up to OES standard

Bro do you want to invest? We can get a small-time printer to do it... :D

Thanks to all the bro for your great support. What can I say...your support will spur me to write more story for all of you

bernie
18-03-2006, 07:08 PM
we cant wait animore bro.............quickkkkkkk

yinyang
18-03-2006, 08:43 PM
...support will spur me to write more story for all of you

Bro,
Just stumbled on your masterpiece, done all your episodes at 1 go..

You got the ingredients for a good soap opera: underdog, characters depicting real life, sex ...all with local flavour. Good, simple style and easy on eyes.. (err not refering to your story babes).

2 thumbs up for this sbf "bestseller".:)

scorkeong
21-03-2006, 03:55 AM
hi brother , great pen work one of the best stories so far i had read , a masterpiece indeed cant wait for the next espiode cheers

babycheong
24-03-2006, 05:30 PM
Mr Tan, where are you????

warmachine
24-03-2006, 06:03 PM
No more inspiration.... End of story. :D

yinyang
24-03-2006, 06:06 PM
Bro threadstarter,

Hope you get over your writer's block leh:rolleyes:

libraguy75
26-03-2006, 03:53 AM
hope to hear the contiuning part of the story real soon......




:D

MMLL
31-03-2006, 04:50 PM
Bro,

What happened after the demotion? Waiting anxiously for more.:p

B-free
01-04-2006, 01:10 AM
Where is our Ah Beng ?? Its month end alreadi & still no sign of Him....:confused:

Anyway, happy April fools Day :p

nitro_heat
01-04-2006, 01:18 AM
Where is our Ah Beng ?? Its month end alreadi & still no sign of Him....:confused:

Anyway, happy April fools Day :p

Yup, wat happen to him ?

sharptoot
01-04-2006, 02:12 AM
yo beng good story:) :)

scorkeong
01-04-2006, 04:46 AM
hi April Fool everyone lol where is tan ah beng , wish that the story can go onn really cant wait liao.Maybe we can hold a sammyboy rewards for best story , author , leading actor and actress . i will surely nominate this for best story!
cheers everyone

Sleazybobo
01-04-2006, 05:56 AM
C'mon bro........
its getting steamier & intriguing........go on..........
dont pause for too long........


130 130 :cool:

Beyond69
04-04-2006, 02:52 AM
Suddenly no more liao! This one is better than the book FATAL SEDUCTION!

raider123
04-04-2006, 11:23 PM
Dear bros,

Sorry to keep all of u waiting. I just came back from HK for a business trip. That is the reason for the long delay. Rest assured that more inspirations will be coing along the way...:)

ralphael
05-04-2006, 04:10 PM
Wah my neck is 3 inches longer liao with all the waiting

japboy
05-04-2006, 04:19 PM
Wah my neck is 3 inches longer liao with all the waiting

not ur didi meh?:)

guy12345
05-04-2006, 10:40 PM
Kindly give me some ideas how do you all want the story to continue...? All feedbacks are welcome :)


Nice story clap clap clap.Will up U :)

B-free
05-04-2006, 10:45 PM
Alright !! Ah Beng is back ... the story can continue...

Peter_North
07-04-2006, 05:02 PM
Dear bros,

Sorry to keep all of u waiting. I just came back from HK for a business trip. That is the reason for the long delay. Rest assured that more inspirations will be coing along the way...:)

Bro, waiting for your continuing chapters more kancheong than waiting for Da Changjin leh.

Fai Tee Leh.

sakamoto
07-04-2006, 07:16 PM
brother, waited very long....leh.......erica how???

gonggong18
08-04-2006, 10:11 PM
Bonk the big bosswife first.. then bonk the PA ..u control both who control the fool but make it steamy.. please

beaver
09-04-2006, 01:18 AM
Bonk the big bosswife first.. then bonk the PA ..u control both who control the fool but make it steamy.. please


No bonk the PA first... then use her to bonk everybody.

armanisexchange
09-04-2006, 01:22 AM
I also want to join in, hurry leh... quick quick finish your story leh :D

raider123
11-04-2006, 03:07 AM
Life must still goes on. Now being a general ops manager, I have more time with Ah Seng and Ah Huat. Life is definitely much more relaxed as compared to the office environment. Think of it, it may be a good thing for me. Someone who is already a old man should enjoy some peaceful life.

“Mr. Tan, your kopi,” said Ah Huat. “Gamsai pui ga si boh,” I said. (Thank you. Eighty cents is it?) “Aiya, ta gay brother liao…mian lah,” replied Ah Huat. It is the type of camaderie that bring us closer. Ah Huat and Ah Seng have always treated me like a brother even though we are not related. It is definitely much warming than the cold relationships I have with Mary’s family.

“Wah…Chiobu…Chiobu…,” said Ah Seng. Our eyes are fixed on this gorgeous, busty CFM babe that is working towards our direction. Although she is wearing a jacket, her boobs bounced along the way as she walks. The pink top beneath don’t seem to be able to cover the 2 melons. The three of us are enjoying this beautiful scenery in front of us.

“Shuai ges, may I know where is the main office,” she said in a very “tei” way. “Meinu, who are you looking for,” said Ah Huat while staring at her melons. “Your GM, Mr. David Tan loh,” she said. “Aiyo he is just right in front of you,” said Ah Seng. “Oh really, you are Mr.Tan ah…nice to meet you,” she said as she extends her hand to me.

“Hi, you are…?” I said. “My name is Carol from PPF Financial Advisory, I called you before regarding the workmen’s insurance and financial planning for your staffs.’ Carol said. “Oh I see, but we didn’t arrange to meet up,” I said. Feeling a little paiseh, Carol added, “Mr.Tan actually all these products are very useful not only to your company but to your staffs as well, if you can really spare me 30 minutes… in your office maybe, I will explain all their benefits to you,” said Carol with a slutty look. “Just 30 minutes ok,” said Carol as she place her hand on my forearms, giving a seductive glance.

“Eh…but I think we don’t…Before I can finish my sentence, Ah Huat and Ah Seng dragged me to the side. “Mr. Tan…wah lau…you cannot see that she is hinting to you meh…tan si me,” said Ah Seng. “Ya loh, mai tan liao…” said Ah Huat.

As we are talking, Albert and Kevin happened to walk pass the warehouse. Albert, as usual, picks up this babe on his radar screen immediately. “Hi, how can I help you,” said Albert. “Hi, I am Carol from PPF Financial Advisory.” Carol replied as she hand over her name card to Albert. “Oh I see, what bring you here,” said Albert as his eyes are on Carol’s melons as well.

“Well I am actually here to discuss about workmen’s insurance and financial planning with Mr. Tan.” said Carol. Albert and Kevin let out in laughter. “I think you should talk to our managing director,” Kelvin said. “Oh…I see…you are,” asked Carol as her eyes brighten up. “My name is Albert, this is my card,” said Albert proudly. “I think you should talk to me as I am the person who can make a decision.” He said.

“Sure. No problem…oops…Carol just dropped Albert’s name card on the ground. “I am sorry,” she said as she bend down in front of Albert…oh…giving a “feast” to Albert’s eye…Carol shows off her deep valley of her milky mountains…

“Can I discuss further with you in your office privately,” said Carol giving a wink to Albert. “Sure…let’s go now,” said Albert with a grin.

“Sorry, Mr. Tan, maybe I catch up with you again another time,” said Carol. Before I can say anything, Albert interferes, “He is just a small warehouse manager who is demoted recently, and he can’t buy anything from you. Anyway, his salary is only $800…what can he do…” said Albert while Kevin and Carol burst out in laughter. Immediately, I can see the change in attitude from Carol. She is giving me the “what the f*&^” look.

After they left, I sighed and sighed. Ah Huat and Ah Seng comforted me. “KNN, this type of f&^% up attitude,” said Ah Huat. “She thinks her neh neh very big KNS…if I got money I sure throw at her and screw her upside down,” said Ah Seng. “Never mind lah. I am used to it liao,” I said.

My HP rings and it is my wife, Mary. She wants to go to the temple and pray. She asked me to chauffeur her there. Knowing her temperament, I decided to obey her.

Aren’t you going down with me, go and park the car and come along,” she said in an annoying way. “Ok…Ok,” I replied. I park my car in the nearby car park and went with her. There are a lot of people today. Peddlers selling flowers, asking for donations and old folks selling tissues papers are common sight. I pitied the old folks and took out some $2 notes to give it to them.

Mary made her way into the temple. Before I enter the temple, an old man walks up to me and speaks to me in hokkien, “Sir, do you want to read your fortune.” As I normally don’t believe in these things, I thank him politely and decided to walk away.

Suddenly, he uttered a sentence which struck my heart. “Sir, your life is easy but you are not happy…it is a pity…a pity.” The old man starts to walk away. I quickly stop him and ask him further. “Sir, could you kindly explain further,” I probed. Both of us settle down at a corner of the busy street.

“Sir, could you kindly help me to read my fortune,” I asked. “Ok…Based on your looks, you should have an easy life even though your family is poor, your wife will be from a rich family,” he said. I started to believe in what he said. “You should be enjoying your life after reaching 40 years old, you should be very rich.” He said. “But it’s a pity, you have a nemesis in your life which stop you from advancing,” he said as he shake his head. “Sir, how should I do about it,” I asked. “The only way for you to overcome it, is to remove the nemesis in your life…then you will…enjoy your life of riches,” He added.

“But…haiz…,” he sighed. “What happened, Sir” I asked. “My apologies…I can’t tell you anymore…because its heavens will,” he said. “Sir, I will pay you more…please tell me…,” I pestered the old man to tell me more. He just got up and walks away. “SIR…SIR,” I shouted. The old man looks back at me and said, “Do more good deeds, it is good for you.”

In the night, I can’t sleep and keep thinking. I start to wonder who is my nemesis in my life…Albert...My-father-in-law?...Mary?...My mind just wonder and wonder. I am supposed to be rich after 40 years old…Why I am still so poor… Who should I remove as my nemesis?

After a long night of probing, I decided to change my life. I do not want to be look down by anyone. I want to be rich and powerful…I want to enjoy my life. I start to think of a scheme to achieve my aim…

ilovesg
11-04-2006, 03:42 AM
Finally new updates are up but not enough dude! hehe we want more!

summoner
11-04-2006, 03:52 AM
great story ..keep it up!! ;)

Cao_pi
11-04-2006, 07:47 AM
Bro,

Honestly speaking, your story is captivating me at this moment. Any thoughts of publication? With stronger plots and better editor, your story will be a hit among man . Looking forward to more stories... All the best!

Its starting to match up to OES standard



KNS!:mad:

So long then post, I was waiting to see whether your story is worth publication, now my doubts is cleared. Your method of writing carries the exact element a good writer should have, the excitement you create through the lustful Carol. The Hook you use on us brothers through slow and steady torture. If you are really interested to get it publish, do drop me a PM

3 thumbs up!:D

prince_81
12-04-2006, 01:11 AM
more more more
i have been waiting for the story
hehe

scorkeong
12-04-2006, 02:06 AM
it is good to see you again , but the story is too short lol cannot get enough keep it up :)
cheers every brother

raider123
13-04-2006, 02:20 AM
"Ho Liao Tin Toy" (Good stuff is kept to the last-in Teochew)

Hahaha...so many bros here want to help me to publish this story...It's ok. As long as the bros here enjoy it, that is my greatest satisfaction as a writer....

Watch out for the next episode...Does Ah beng really wants to take revenge or he decides to cool down again due to his good nature??? What will he do to??? :)

ok69
13-04-2006, 03:05 AM
camping here :D
good plot ..

SexFreak
13-04-2006, 02:41 PM
Watch out for the next episode...


Bro, we have been watching and waiting since day 1 :eek: Hope won't take long for the next exciting episode :D

Cheers !!!

oakleyeug
13-04-2006, 03:18 PM
Sir wah ur story is like once in a blue moon or r u having writers block? Pls don torture us write more or think more and may your writers block go away fast.

MICKKY
18-04-2006, 10:14 AM
Still waiting anxiously for your next episode. Pls dont stop here as we would like to know your next step to become rich & famous

sexkills
19-04-2006, 09:34 AM
Oh Brother, where art thou?

shawnieboy
20-04-2006, 01:45 AM
hey dude your hell of a good story writer man can't wait to read more..

ken_v2
21-04-2006, 05:24 PM
wah. .. very long wait leh.. dun let the thread/story die.. ...

homeosapian
23-04-2006, 09:41 PM
Ya lor... must push this tread to the front so more people will read..hehe..
Please write quickly...

bobosooter
23-04-2006, 09:54 PM
good story...thanks raider for the story...camping here...more, more, more!:D

shawnieboy
25-04-2006, 03:04 PM
brother where r u!!!

libraguy75
25-04-2006, 05:08 PM
Heh Bro Raider123,

its been sometime snce u last post the story.

Hope to see you post the new chapters sometime soon.

Your faithful reader,


:D

AhhhHenG
25-04-2006, 06:49 PM
we're waiting for your story bro !!!!!!!!!!

popcorn_m3
25-04-2006, 08:13 PM
waiting........

xkingx
29-04-2006, 01:44 PM
bro... camping here arh.. quick quick...

MICKKY
02-05-2006, 04:20 PM
Bro, what happen to your story? MIA

mighty_god
03-05-2006, 12:01 PM
Please keep going bro. Couldn't stand the suspense...

ktbc
03-05-2006, 05:28 PM
Hello bro. I know you are busy and that you are contributing but at least finish what you started. i have been your avid reader from day 1. thanks..

B-free
03-05-2006, 07:05 PM
Hmmmm, Ah Beng went out to plan something & still not back yet? The plan better be good. Or maybe he got caught by his wife & lock up in the storeroom or something... hahahaha:p

shawnieboy
04-05-2006, 11:07 PM
bro pls update us if u going to continue or not... everyday i come it hoping to still your tread but everyday kena disapointment.. it's going to be almost a mth since u last post... really hoping u will come back soon

cheers

castle
06-05-2006, 12:02 PM
Bro, dont keep us wait too long leh. Your last post is on 10/4 you know!!!!!!!!!!!

nail
07-05-2006, 10:13 PM
Hi bro... This must be a long long wait ...He must be gone MIA...:D

SexFreak
07-05-2006, 10:59 PM
Well, looks like either Ah Beng is very busy or the thread is going to close down for good liao!!!:confused: What a pity.............:(


Cheers !!!

obelisk
08-05-2006, 09:01 AM
i think mr tan kana sacked by albert liao...:(

ken_v2
08-05-2006, 11:46 AM
were his actions caught by cctv? where the fuck is he?

RedJacket
11-05-2006, 02:20 AM
Spoil my mood lei ... read halfway and haven't reach the exciting part then he don't know go where liao.

But after reading his story, i can feel that Ah Tan is pitiful. Hope Ah Tan can wake up his ideas.

Damn that Albert !!!

Pistone
11-05-2006, 10:09 AM
bro... everyone is parking here.. for the continuation...

looks like u have to do a 'Public Service' or should i rephrase it
do a 'Forum Service'

hahaha

mighty_god
11-05-2006, 10:56 AM
It has been so long... think Mr Tan has been caught in the act of company sabo and is in CPIB being interviewed now... :(

khunchin
11-05-2006, 11:45 AM
Think Tan Ah Beng's OC caught him at SBF and now game over...:rolleyes:

raider123
15-05-2006, 01:45 AM
Don't worry bros of SBF... I am still alive and kicking. I took a good break to recently to recharge...the idea is to walk a longer distance :D
Here you are...

“Mr. Tan, I have got what you want,” said Ah Seng as he pass me a envelope. “Gam Sia leh Seng,” I said. “Wah I didn’t know you are into this type of stuff,” said Ah Huat. I just asked Ah Seng to purchase a pin-hole camera for me. “No lah, you will know in the future what I am going to do.” I said.

One day morning, I arrived in the office as early as 6.30pm. While getting Ah Seng and Ah Huat to “jarga” for me, I creep into Albert’s room to install the camera. Being an amateur, I have a hard time trying to find a nice little concealed spot. Finally, I decided to fix up on top of a cupboard on the right side of Albert’s desk.

My HP suddenly went off. “Mr. Tan, Albert is here,” said Ah Seng. I scrambled to look for a place to hid but failed. I dashed straight to the door and decided to flee. As I open the door, Albert is standing right in front of me. “What the hell are you doing here,” he look at me puzzling. “Eh…eh…nothing…I got to go,” I said as I tried to leave the scene. “Wait a minute, you must be up to no good,” said Albert as he tried to grill me.

After this incident, no matter how hard he tries, I just refuse to tell him anything. The matter is known to the whole family, Mary grilled me as well but I just simply refuse to say what I am doing in Albert’s room. As a result, I was sacked from the company.

I am very sad and disappointed. I blame myself that I can’t even do such a simple thing properly. How can I take revenge against Albert. However, my mind is set. Nothing ventures, nothing gain. I collaborate with Ah Huat and Ah Seng to help me. Being buddies, they help me even though they are aware of the serious consequences of losing their jobs.

“Mr. Tan, got ho liao for you,” said Ah Huat. “Simi,” I asked. Ah Huat passed me a VCD. “You go home and see loh, sure see bao marikita,” said Ah Seng. “Porno VCD izzit?” I asked. “Ya but the actor and actress are none other than Albert and Deborah,” said Ah Seng as both of them giggled away. “Wah both of you managed to do it,” I said in joy. “Ya, you have to thank us but doing this for you. Wah , the figure of Deborah is tip-top ah, sibei ho pian” said Ah Huat. “Anyway, Albert boi gan…about 15 mins fired off liao…” said Ah Seng.

“By the way, why do you want to tap their illicit relationship, you want to blackmail Albert ah,” asked Ah Huat. “Well Albert will not mind even if his relationship with Deborah is exposed. Anyway, most of the staffs are aware of their special relationship.” I replied. “Then what you want to do,” asked Ah Seng. “The key person is Erica,” I said with a grin.

A fine day, Albert called for an urgent meeting. He even asked my father-in-law back to chair the meeting. Something big must have happened. “Albert what is it regarding,” asked my father-in-law. “Pa, something serious has happened, let hear the report from Kelvin,” said Albert. “Chairman, over the past 3 days, a total sum of $150,000 has been remitted out from our company accounts to a personal account. These transactions are illegal,” said Kelvin. Everyone is surprised at this event. “Who is the person,” asked my father-in-law. “Sir, the person is Shaun, our finance director,” said Kelvin.

Shaun is very surprised and started to defend himself. He strongly denied that he has done anything wrong. However, Kelvin eventually showed all the transactions to Shaun’s personal account. My father-in-law is skeptical about this as well. Suddenly, the CAD arrived and they bring Shaun back for questioning.

My-father-in-law is angry that Albert has reported the incident to the police. “Why do you have to do this, he is your brother,” said father-in-law. “Yes I know, it is a painful decision but I have to do this in order to send a stern signal to all the staff,” said Albert. Obviously, he did it on purpose and wants to land Shaun in the jail. However, I am interested to find out how did he manage to do that. Zoe who is present, is heartbroken at these turn of events.

The next day, Mary is out for a wedding dinner. I am alone in my house. I played the VCD given by Ah Huat and Ah Seng in my room. Deborah is really making hot. That smooth and milky delicate skin, together with a pair of perky titts is enough to make me hard on. The ecstasy on her face as Albert screwed her hard…

I heard the sound of a roaring engine. I look out from my window. I saw Albert going out in his car. Sensing that this may be a good opportunity, I decided to go to look for Erica. “Sir, you are looking for Madam,” their maid asked. “Ya, where is she,” I asked. “Madam is upside bathing,” she said. “Ok I wait for her in the living room, tell her I am here ok,” I said. After watching the VCD, even their normal looking maid make me feel like screwing her…

“Sir, I told Madam already, you take a seat first,” she said. After a while, Erica strolled down from upstairs. Oh my goddess, she is as usual dressed in her sexy satin lingerie. Although not translucent, her nips are protuding against the soft satin material. My blood run faster… “What do you want,” Erica said after sitting down at the sofa in front of me. I just stared at her blankly as she crossed her slender legs. “Oi…Have u seen enough,” Erica said sarcastically. “Eh…sorry,” I said.

“Wait I complain to Mary then u know,” She threaten me. Suddenly, I feel a strong urge of courage going through my body. I raised my voice and said “Well you can go ahead if you want to but it will not give you any favour,” I said proudly. “Huh, what the hell you are talking, I need favor from you, you must be joking David,” said Erica with a laugh.

“Wait a minute, take a look at this first before you comment,” I said as I make my way to the DVD player to load the VCD. The horny and sex making scenes of Albert and Deborah are shown on their 44inch LCD monitor. Erica is speechless as she watches Albert screwed Deborah in various positions.

“Bastard, how dare he do this to me…No wonder every times he can’t even last 15 minutes with me…Slut I must teach you a lesson one day…” said Erica as she is cursing and swearing while watching the VCD.

“Cool down…Angry will make you look older…,” I said in a relaxed mood. “I want to teach them a lesson now…,” said Erica furiously. “Wait a minute, do you think Albert cared whether you know of their illicit relationship,” I said. “Do you know that your position now is vulnerable and Albert will divorce with you if you kick a big fuss…in the end what do you get…,” I said as I struck a chord with Erica’s heart.

“What do you suggest then, “said Erica as she cool down. “Well if you are willing to cooperate with me, I can make sure that even if Albert divorce you, you will still be able to reap a huge sum of money from this family, at least you don’t have to worry about your life after that,” I said.

“Why must I work with you, Bernard is the grandson of Koh family and father-in-law dotes on him. I will get my credit no matter how,” said Erica as she took out a cigarette to smoke. I said with a laugh, “You sure you want to wait till that day, what happen if Albert fall in love with someone younger like Deborah and disown you…You will have nothing…nothing at all”

“How do you want me to work with you,” Erica said. “It is very easy…woman has only one potent weapon and that is her beauty…body…her assets obviously, you have everything,” I said as I glanced her from head to toe. Erica smiles as she is slightly flattered by my compliments.

I get up from my seat, walk towards her and seated besides her on the sofa. “What do you want,” said Erica as I seat besides her. “Such a big plan, I must whisper to you so that no one will know,” I said as I am staring at her pair of milky valley…the top creamy part of her boobs. “Sickening, can you tell me your plan now,” She said.

I whispered into her ears about my plan. She smiled and nodded in agreement. “Ok, I will work with you.”

Alphag81
15-05-2006, 01:59 AM
Don't worry bros of SBF... I am still alive and kicking. I took a good break to recently to recharge...the idea is to walk a longer distance :D

bro write more ma we wait for u very long ley aleast write 2 or 3 post ma some bro is here camping very long time just for ur storie ley

shawnieboy
15-05-2006, 02:03 AM
OMG U FUCKING TEASER......

more pls more.....

oakleyeug
15-05-2006, 09:45 AM
Wah Mr Tan finally u r back...

mighty_god
15-05-2006, 09:55 AM
Welcome back bro... :)

big dick
15-05-2006, 10:09 AM
finally u r back.. and your plan of taking revenge is unfolding... camping here to see them get their just dessert... bonk all the gals in that family... bro :D

FatMan
15-05-2006, 10:36 AM
I whispered into her ears about my plan. She smiled and nodded in agreement. “Ok, I will work with you.”

“月黑杀人夜,风高放火天。” :cool:

kiddy
15-05-2006, 11:18 AM
aiyo, Ah Tan oi...
faster la, can't wait liao ley.....

nail
15-05-2006, 12:54 PM
Woooooooo WELCOME BACK... :cool:

obelisk
15-05-2006, 01:33 PM
argh....
i guessed rite..
mr tan got sacked...
but nvm, the story continues...:D

SexFreak
15-05-2006, 02:15 PM
Welcome back Ah Beng!!! Please keep the stories moving...............:D


Cheers !!!

horny001
15-05-2006, 02:16 PM
Bro...must salute you for the solid storyline...uhh...pls go work for mediacorps to raise their lousy standards..:D and also put in some of yr horny ideas to spice up their boring and substandard shows..:p

MaXx69
15-05-2006, 04:17 PM
still waiting.....

BigMatt
15-05-2006, 06:15 PM
Hi bro! Great you are back ......
Really waited a long time for your story ..... neck long long liao!

ken_v2
15-05-2006, 06:53 PM
bro, we waited a month for your update. please dun torture us and make us wait another month for the next installment...

PJ_chris
15-05-2006, 08:51 PM
Wau...kin cheong liao..the story really good brother..Keep it on...
I always follow your story...very very good class leh...Class A story...not like other Porno which always fuckk...fuck..thing..
Very appricate u good story
we all are u true supporter.

Spurslover
16-05-2006, 02:59 PM
Your story is like a drama series.

Audience like us wants more. Hope you can post more.:D

colortv
16-05-2006, 05:11 PM
maybe mediacorp will copy down this and make a drama on this .. minus the Xxx stuff..:D

Angrycum
16-05-2006, 06:30 PM
Woo woo woo, good story. Pls continue bro!

castle
16-05-2006, 10:00 PM
Wah bro, at last seen your post after so long. Pls continue, dont stop from here again.

raider123
17-05-2006, 02:23 AM
(Bro...must salute you for the solid storyline...uhh...pls go work for mediacorps to raise their lousy standards..:D and also put in some of yr horny ideas to spice up their boring and substandard shows)

Well for that to happen...I tink will have to wait long long liao. Goh's era tried to allow 3 third catergory HK movie but lost big time. Let's see whether Lee's era will allow that to happen. :D

Sangrawi
17-05-2006, 11:05 AM
Alamak! I thought you post somemore how Ah Beng and Erica conspire together.

But you talk cock only lei...

Please Bro Raider 123, can post more frequently or not. Beri chiam waiting so long for ur stori lei :confused:

airbrush
17-05-2006, 12:42 PM
brother story is getting hot...continue leh or you need soft whispering into your ear..:P

primalhunter
17-05-2006, 02:46 PM
beng beng, u r back!!! now, can u quickly continue.... kin neh.... our dicks cannot continue to stand tall tall at attention for months u know... PAIN:( :(

nail
17-05-2006, 10:46 PM
ha ya... not again... we all had to wait satu bulan lagi....
:confused:

Evolution4352
18-05-2006, 08:07 AM
How come so long....Buey tahan liao lar...:D

xkingx
21-05-2006, 12:02 AM
wah sianz.. must wait again... have waited so long liaoz.. tot wah.. this time can see ah beng screw erica.. then must wait again.. haha..

ahkai
21-05-2006, 02:38 PM
wait too long until forgotten the character's names and relationships liao. Dono who is who now, have to read again from beginning :p

glenn553
21-05-2006, 08:02 PM
welcome back bro, more please:)

MICKKY
16-06-2006, 11:19 AM
Where r u? still waiting for your story lah...................................

lovelyboy
16-06-2006, 04:28 PM
i think my mth-long stock of potato chips have been finished up ... while waiting for ur story... turning into a couch potato liao... where are U, ah beng n ericia ...??? wats your plan ?????:cool:

AnAn
16-06-2006, 08:52 PM
When is the story going to continue again?????

babycheong
21-06-2006, 08:28 PM
Ah Beng!!!!!....where r u???

RedJacket
21-06-2006, 10:55 PM
Ah Beng!!!!!....where r u???

He did not appear very long liao ... think he was fixed by his wife and banned from the computer.

Ed Powers
23-06-2006, 01:52 PM
This is wat i call a story..very well written...my heart really goes out to ah beng..really can relate to the feel like shit feeling...bro..pls dun forget to continue ur story...u write on paperback..i sure support n buy one....

Angrycum
19-07-2006, 03:54 PM
Brudder Raider123,

Where art thou? Really wait long long for your fantastic story.

Please don't leave our dick hanging :D

George28_1976
19-07-2006, 08:36 PM
i have been missing out on this!! :eek: i cant believe it......
i must say this is a good story plot and well deserved to be upped
i will be locking on to this thread, dont keep us waiting for too long bro...:D

raider123
20-07-2006, 12:32 AM
Dear bros,

I just changed my job recently so need to impress the new boss. As such, no time to write this story. However, I managed to squeeze a new episode recently...Pls enjoy...:)

After Albert removes Shaun from the company, he seemed to be enjoying the power he used to have. He has assumed the role of finance director from Shaun, a prized post where money is concerned.

Although I am out of the company, I am aware of the development of Shaun’s case through Ah Huat and Ah Seng. Apparently, we suspect Kelvin has made Shaun signed on some documents which authorized the transfer of funds to his personal account. What a smart move by Albert to remove Shaun from his position.

After investigations are concluded, Shaun, even though innocent, is convicted for siphoning funds out of the company. He has been jailed for 5 years. Zoe, his model wife, is heartbroken and depressed.

“Hello, Erica…This is David,” I said as I called Erica on my mobile. “Hi, what’s up,” she said. “I heard mum is going for a concert tonight, you should know what to do,” I said. “Really, Albert is not at home too, ok…I understand,” she said and hung up the call.

“Hello, Pa…Erica…Are you free tonight, want to come over for a chat,” said Erica as she called my father-in-law. “Eh…Ok might as well since your mum is not at home…,” He said. “See you later then,” said Erica.

My father-in-law makes his way to Erica’s house. “Good evening Sir”, said Yati. “Pa…you are here,” said Erica. She is dressed in a tight body hugging spaghetti top with a short denim skirt.

“You look youthful today,” said my father-in-law. “You mean I used to look very old ah,” said Erica as she laughs after making this statement. “No lah, you always look young,” said father-in-law. “After my pregnancy, I don’t even dared to wear this top as my tummy is a flabby with baby’s fats,” said Erica. Both of them sat down at the sofa.

“No lah, you must be joking, you go for aerobics classes everyday, how to have baby fats,” said my father-in-law. “The classes help me to slim down, but not my cup size,” said Erica. Father-in-law is taken backed by the direction their conversation is going. “Eh, eh you mean it has grown bigger during your pregnancy,” asked father-in-law.

“Ya…used to be B cup but grown to C cup during pregnancy, now still B+…so sad,” said Erica. “But…But why…Big is ok what,” said father-in-law with a smile. Obviously, he is enjoying this sexy talk with his sexy daughter-in-law…

“Most of my clothes especially body hugging one cannot be worn anymore and all these are quite ex, “said Erica with a sigh. “Never mind, ask Albert to buy for you again,” said my father-in-law. “The worst thing is during my pregnancy when I wear those spaghetti maternity tops, my boobs are so prominent, all those tiko pehs like to stare at them.” said Erica.

My father-in-law blushes as he is one of the culprits. The images of Erica bending down and zaogeng her C cup boobs are still fresh in his mind.

raider123
20-07-2006, 12:35 AM
“Actually Pa tonight I ask you to come over is to discuss about the relationship between Albert and myself,” said Erica. “What happened,” ask father-in-law. “Albert has an illicit affair with Deborah, his secretary,” said Erica. “To be frank, I am aware of this but it is quite common for men to fool around,” said father-in-law.

“Actually I will just close one eye, however I think it is not just lust but they are developing a relationship,” said Erica. “How can that be, I know Albert well, he is just being horny,” said father-in-law. “But Albert has been staying at her place for the past 2 weeks,” said Erica as her tears roll down her face.

“Eh..eh….” Father-in-law does not know what to say to Erica. He walked up and took the tissue box to Erica. “Dry your tears,” said father-in-law as he sat besides Erica. “Pa…did I do anything wrong…” said Erica. “No…no…you did not but it is Albert that let you down…,” replied father-in-law.

Erica leaned on the shoulder of father-in-law. Pa was caught off-guard by Erica’s move. His sexy daughter-in-law is now on his body…those smooth fair porcelain skin…the scent of her long silky hair…and the most important pair of delicious boobs are now on his chest. Pa is trying his best to control his physical reactions.

“Don’t cry…ok,” Pa said as he pats Erica on her back. “I will talk to Albert on this,” said Pa. “Pa, you must really help me to talk to Albert,” said Erica As he walks out of the house, he keeps thinking about Erica lying on his body…the feeling is great…he starts to fantasize that he savors every inch of Erica’s heavenly body…

To be continued...:D

johnymike
20-07-2006, 01:08 AM
Welcome Back:)

secret75
20-07-2006, 01:17 AM
well done bro! keep them cumming!

George28_1976
20-07-2006, 01:30 AM
yeah nice work raider.....glad this episode came fast....
thumbs up ;)

Peter_North
20-07-2006, 01:57 AM
Bro Raider,

You should get in touch with Wong Ching, the HK Cat III Producer, boyfriend of Qiu Shuzhen. Your stories will revitalized the stale Cat III movie scene.

Anothony Wong will be Mr. Tan Ah Beng; Carina Lau as Mary; Pinky Cheung as Deborah.

You need a nickname as Director of your movie - maybe Ang Lee.

big dick
20-07-2006, 02:02 AM
welcome back bro raider.. will up your point tomolo when i recover... and pls let me see how u take your revenge on those cruel ppl that have look down on u... :p

big dick

YellowHummerH2
20-07-2006, 09:30 AM
Bro Raider,

Fatastic ..... awaiting for more....:D

Angrycum
20-07-2006, 12:24 PM
excellent brudder raider123! Keep them coming when you can :D

SexFreak
20-07-2006, 02:36 PM
I just changed my job recently so need to impress the new boss. As such, no time to write this story.


My patience camping here has been paid off finally ......... dont take too long for next instalment, please........ hahahaha .................:D Good story !!! :)


Cheers !!!

kotek
20-07-2006, 02:55 PM
another camper here...

AAconnection
20-07-2006, 06:42 PM
brother raider 123 don't let us wait too long for your story hor.

zhivago
21-07-2006, 08:51 AM
steady lar, Raider bro...

dun let us wait too long hor...

thanx a million.

libraguy75
21-07-2006, 11:32 AM
keep it going bro...........

raider123
23-07-2006, 04:04 AM
Bro Raider,

You should get in touch with Wong Ching, the HK Cat III Producer, boyfriend of Qiu Shuzhen. Your stories will revitalized the stale Cat III movie scene.

Anothony Wong will be Mr. Tan Ah Beng; Carina Lau as Mary; Pinky Cheung as Deborah.

You need a nickname as Director of your movie - maybe Ang Lee.

Bro Peter North,

Actually I have a dream. That is to produce a HK Cat III movie. I am quite sad that this segment of the movie industry in HK is producing a lot of sub-standard movies. I remember the good old days in 1990s where the industry produce many classics. Maybe any bros here know how to get in touch with Wong Jing? :)

Pinky Cheung is one cool babe...too bad she didn't strip so far..haha

ken_v2
24-07-2006, 01:59 PM
brother raider brother raider.. stop torturing us please and continue with this great story... ..

dudulu
27-07-2006, 03:08 AM
....what an interesting "family affair story" .....really good.... pls dun let us wait..... come'on bros raider.... pls continue pls...

Estefan
27-07-2006, 03:41 AM
Bro raider123 nice story u wrote.... Camping here liao :)

Zhen_ji
27-07-2006, 07:37 AM
Raider ah Raider , i follow this thread so long and u are killing us each and everyday ah ( so slow) .....hurry leh.....haizz......lol

qguy
05-08-2006, 12:34 PM
Yo..Bro Raider,
It's been ages since yr last posting...What happened to Tan Ah Beng? Pls do continue as i believe u have a lot of bros here like me support yr story & awaiting of the revenge plot...:p
CHEERS!!!

AAconnection
05-08-2006, 09:45 PM
brother raider...can't wait so long for your story....now the story name should be rename as Dan Ah Beng..:}:D

curious_tct
06-08-2006, 06:00 PM
Hi bro raider123,


I really salute you for your very powerful story, I' a fan of u liao... ;) Pls come up with the nxt espisode asap pls, as i' already hooked to it liao.

Cheers,

Angrycum
14-08-2006, 11:39 AM
Dear Mr Tan,

The brudders at SBF eagerly await your next installment.
Please be merciful on us and continue your sexcellent Saga.

Best Regards,

Your fans

cheryl27
15-08-2006, 07:49 AM
WHere is Mr Tan??? The revenge is killing me le ah!

axeman24
15-08-2006, 11:58 AM
WHere is Mr Tan??? The revenge is killing me le ah!

Wah little girl didn't know that you also follow the story one :D

QooMilk
15-08-2006, 12:17 PM
Wah little girl didn't know that you also follow the story one

Wah axe I also didn;t know you follow little girl one :p :D

axeman24
15-08-2006, 12:57 PM
Wah axe I also didn;t know you follow little girl one :p

Wah I also didn't know you like to follow me one ah :D

simiboyfor
15-08-2006, 01:00 PM
Wah TCSS is in ;)

SexFreak
15-08-2006, 04:29 PM
Wah axe I also didn;t know you follow little girl one

Hellooooooooooooo Guni, so you are here huh ...... :D Want to kena lickzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz again huh .................bwahahahaha :eek:


Cheers !!!

p/s : bro, how's your 无影手 ?

cheryl27
15-08-2006, 06:54 PM
Wah I also didn't know you like to follow me one ah :D

si axeman , for mths i'm following this story but hor the thread starter is damn slow lah....nice story but let ppl wait so long!

erm....axeman why u follow me leh??? Even guni also suddenlt appeared

yanki
16-08-2006, 01:21 AM
nice story:D