View Full Version : The Fallen Prey (Story)
loststranger
22-09-2016, 06:36 PM
Since I usually have a lot of free time on my hands, I'm gonna try to have a go at being a 'writer'. As this's my first story, please be kind. The characters/storyline may or may not be fictitious, but as long as the story is enjoyable, it shouldn't matter.
Gin was a Chinese girl born in the 80s in a small family. Being an only child, she was the apple of her parents' eyes. That fact however, didn't make her a spoilt child. Gin had a strict upbringing under the watchful eyes of her mom and the focus was always on studies. Gin however, was never the studious type. She tried, sure she did. But it was never quite enough to make her parents proud.
Like all other young girls in a mixed gender primary school, the very early stages of puberty made Gin very confused about the changes to her body and started to realise the raising interest of boys in school. She was 11 then.
Coming from a middle class family, both of Gin's parents held full time jobs and Gin was left home alone most of the time. Her primary school was a mere 10 minutes walk away from home and she has to make hourly calls from the landline to her mom when she's back home to ensure that she stays home.
It was another typical day at home and the blazing weather was making Gin restless and bored at home. She wanted to watch some TV and perhaps take a nap thereafter. However, the humid air was making it hard for Gin to be comfortable in the living room. There was only air conditioning in the bedrooms and she she didn't have a TV in her room. Gin then went into her parents room, switched the aircon on and turned the TV on. What came on screen was not the usual TV channel, but an option to play a DVD that was in the player. Back then, the options for playback was pretty limited to just 'Play' or 'Eject'. Gin read the title onscreen 'Crimson Danger'.. interesting, she thought. Since there was nothing good that was airing, she pressed the 'Play' button on the remote.
loststranger
22-09-2016, 07:58 PM
(Gin read the title onscreen 'Crimson Danger'.. interesting, she thought. Since there was nothing good that was airing, she pressed the 'Play' button on the remote.)
What came on screen next was a strange setting to Gin. A blonde lady was standing at the balcony of a cruise, with the wind in her hair and she was overlooking the sea. She was dressed in what seem like a tacky piece of translucent nightdress with matching lacy bra and underwear. The background music was a soft, slow piano tune and the blonde was slowly shaking her hips from left to right and at the same time, caressing her own neck with her slender fingers, down to her chest and waist. The blonde then moved her hands slowly from her waist area to the lower part of her body, and her right hand disappeared under her lacy underwear. The blonde was now massaging herself in the her sensitive spot and threw her head back in ecstasy.
Gin was confused and surprised by the scene. She has never seen anything like this before. When it came to the birds and bees, she was almost ignorant. Her parents, being the typical Chinese family, had never given her any educational talks and being a plain jane, she wasn't the most popular girl in school, and has never really caught the attention of any boys. Gin contemplated about shutting the TV off. At the back of her mind, she knew what she was watching was wrong. But the curiosity got the better of her and she decided to watch on. She kinda liked it, actually.
A man appeared on screen as he slowly walked from behind the blonde and hugged her from the back. He was cladded in only a towel around his waist. The blonde, acknowledging his presence, stopped touching herself and turned her body to face him. They engaged in a passionate french kissing session, and the hunk had his hands roaming all over the blonde, eventually pulling down on her nightie and bra, exposing a full breast. The handsome dude then pulled away from the kiss and scoop the exposing breast into his huge hand, cupping it while hungrily sucking on the erected areola. The blonde stroked his hair while he was at it, occasionally pushing her chest towards him as a form of encouragement. Suddenly, the dude stopped and stood up. The blonde, as if already knowing the intention, pulled the towel away from his waist, revealing his large, circumcised and shaven manhood.
Gin was shocked. That was the first time she's seen a dick. She has heard boys in school teasing each other when they do silly childish things like peek over each other in the urinal, but there was never enough details for her to quote figure out how the organ look like. There wasn't a need for her to guess anymore. Screened on the small 14 inch CRT TV, was a glistering cock in it's full glory. The camera shot an up close view of it, and the popping green veins were obvious, and even seem like they were throbbing at some point. Gin felt this strange excitement and part of her wanted to continue watching, part of her wanted to switch the TV off. But she continued anyway.
The blonde kneeled in front of her lover on screen, with his already erected manhood right in front of her face, almost touching the tip of her nose. With one swift move, she grabbed the erected monster in her right hand and almost desperately, took the dick into her mouth. It disappeared within the depths of her gap. The dude had an almost painful expression on his face, and let out a loud, low groan.. drowning the cheesy piano music background. he then placed both of his huge hands on each side of the blonde's head and pushed it deeper into his crotch. The blonde looked up at him with her big, round eyes and started tearing up a little as her partner started to thrust his dick into her mouth roughly, mouth fucking her. The blonde looked like she wasn't really enjoying all of these, but the contradicting moans from her says otherwise.
Gin decided that she was gonna stop the video and switch the TV off. She didn't like what she was seeing. 'It was almost like an insult to the blonde', she thought. In Gin's young, innocent mind, sex should be sweet and passionate, and not what she's just witnessed. It should be with a person you love and treat you well, and not be used as a tool. She was upset on her innocent image being ruined. 'The next time, I'll fast forward the video and see what else happens', she thought. It was also getting pretty late and her mom was about to be come home based on her routine. Gin went to the washroom thereafter and realised that there was a little wet patch on her white underwear. She didn't recall needing to go to the toilet that urgently, and didn't understand why there was a slimy feeling in her vagina. She decided to wash herself down and ignore it anyway.
S.I.T.E
22-09-2016, 07:59 PM
Camping......
club49
22-09-2016, 08:59 PM
Camping too
KambingAyam
22-09-2016, 09:26 PM
Support new story :)
StarBarks
22-09-2016, 09:45 PM
Please continue bro ..
loststranger
22-09-2016, 09:58 PM
Please continue bro ..
I'm not a 'bro' 🙄
JPhantom
23-09-2016, 12:20 AM
camping!!!!
SoheiMiura
23-09-2016, 10:54 AM
Camping too!!
craiglist
23-09-2016, 12:03 PM
TS, support here.
Informer
23-09-2016, 12:12 PM
Support.. please continue.
lowhc
23-09-2016, 12:36 PM
Sounds like a good start.
YuanYang
23-09-2016, 12:48 PM
Support for you, TS.
loststranger
23-09-2016, 01:15 PM
It's been several days since Gin saw the raunchy video and she couldn't forget about the movie. The scene that constantly stayed in her mind was that of the dude's throbbing dick. There was this strange prickly, almost painful sensation in her nether regions whenever she thinks about that particular scene. One day, she was showering when the scene came to her mind again. Gin decided to touch herself below and try getting rid of the sensation she felt. She was surprised that the 'bean' like thing in her groin seemed to have became bigger, like it was swollen. Gin was terrified, she didn't know what was wrong with her. Could thinking about this forbidden activity caused her to be 'punished' with a strange growth?
With limited options, Gin decided that she was going to try washing it intensively and see if the swell subsides. As they didn't have a water heater, showering will involve a long rubber tube attached directly to the tap. There wasn't a shower head at all. When she needed the water pressure to be stronger, she would place her index finger at the end of the rubber hose to cover part of the opening, and the water pressure will be stronger, with water gushing out like a mini fountain. 'I'll probably need a high water pressure to wash it properly', Gin thought. With that, she placed her finger strategically on the opening of the hose, and sprayed it directly to her groin.
What happened next was a shock to Gin. It was hard to put in words. It was ecstatic, a mixture of strange pleasure and pain. She stopped the spraying immediately and tried figuring out what just happened. She couldn't quite explain the sensation, but she knew that she kinda liked it. So, she did it again. Only this time, she allowed the spraying to be longer. What seems like after 10 seconds, Gin felt her body convulse. Her knees felt weak and she needed to kneel down. She let out a small groan unknowingly.. and stopped herself immediately. She released the tube from her hand, and felt a strange sense of satisfaction. It was like as if she's been released from a sort of frustration. As much as Gin felt good physically, she was emotionally broken. She felt dirty, and wondered if her peers do such things. She felt ashamed and knew that it would be totally unacceptable if anyone found out. At the same time, the virgin masturbating experience felt good. It felt different. It was a feeling and kick that no other activity could give her.
She brushed her thoughts away and looked at her wrinkled fingers, a result from being in contact with water for too long.. and wiped herself dry. There was once again a transparent slim that was almost coating the most part of her vagina. Again, she didn't think much of it, except for the fact that it was a little messy to clean as it was slimy and at the same time sticky. It felt quite gross to the touch and she wondered why her body would produce something like that.
reading
24-09-2016, 06:42 PM
Support sis TS :D
Summite
24-09-2016, 10:46 PM
Support sis too :)
Alger
24-09-2016, 11:50 PM
Please continue TS
asahi06
26-09-2016, 09:16 PM
Where is TS ???
PussycatDolly
26-09-2016, 09:32 PM
Nice story, camping here!
Johnnykhan
27-09-2016, 12:44 AM
New camper reporting
ahpek63
27-09-2016, 11:38 AM
I hope TS will continue with his story soon.
Ighalo
27-09-2016, 12:22 PM
Nice story, please continue TS
loststranger
27-09-2016, 08:54 PM
My apologies on the slow update. Have been busy since I started this thread, ironically, haha. Anyhow, here goes..
(It felt quite gross to the touch and she wondered why her body would produce something like that.)
It was once again a lonely weekday afternoon for Gin at home. She thought about the naughty video again, and she decided that she was going to explore further. Surely there's a stash hidden somewhere in her parents' room? She went into the walk-in wardrobe of her parents'. All the clothes were either neatly folded and stacked at the bottom of the cupboard, or nicely ironed without a single crease which hung on the hangers. There was a safety box tucked at the side of the shelf. Right above the deposit box was a small stack of clothes. It seems to be out of place, the clothes. So Gin tried her luck in lifting the stack of clothes up, layer by layer. And there it was.
A whole stash of VCDs in its' full glory. There were at least 10 of it. There seem to be different genres in the stack. From what seems like hardcore porn of naked women spreading themselves out in the front cover, to subtle ones which shows couples kissing, with the guy being half naked. A particular VCD caught her eye. The cover was of a single naked lady standing in the shower room, with the glass slightly fogged titled 'Surprise Visits'. She decided that this was going to be her watch for the day, 'surprise visits' sounds innocent enough, or so she thought.
Gin reminded herself to replace the original VCD that was already in the player 'Crimson Danger.' later after she's done with 'Surprise Visits', she's someone who plays safe. And so, the show started.. innocently enough as a young brunette was screened in a house setting, fully clothed. She was seated on the sofa and watching her watch, seemingly impatient as she looked over at the main door entrance. It was obvious she was expecting somebody. The sun was shining fiercely through the windows in the living room, and the brunette seemed to be feeling the heat. Claud in a racer back tank top and shorts, it wasn't good enough to beat the heat. Beads of perspiration started forming around her forehead, down to her chest area and it was almost starting to drip down into her cleavage. She tied her tresses up in a messy ponytail as she sighed out in frustration. Suddenly, the door bell rang.
The brunette got up from the sofa and opened the door immediately without looking through the pin hole. She already knew who was at the door. On the pavement stood a much older man, probably 20 years or so her senior, dressed in blue overalls with a colour matching duckbill cap. In need of an long overdue shave, he has grey doozy eyes and a dark complexion. He looked..shabby, and dirty. There was dusty marks all over his overalls and boots. 'Come on in', said the brunette. For the sake of easy reference, brunette will be know as B and shabby will be know as S.
B: 'You're finally here. The weather is a killer and i really need the air-con to be fixed.'
S: 'Sorry about that, Mdm. It's been a long day and I was held up by a customer.'
B: *rolled eyes* 'Whatever, just get it fixed. Here's the unit that's not working.' She then led him to living room and pointed at the air-con.
B: 'I don't know what's wrong with it, it just stopped working. Could you check it out? And when you're done, do check out the unit in my bedroom upstairs as well.'
S: 'Yeah, I sure will."
B: 'Please hurry, I have an appointment later and I'm already running late for it.'
S: 'I will try..'
B: 'Trying isn't good enough. Do it. I'm gonna go have a shower now. Before you come up to my bedroom please shout for me first.'
S: 'Yes Mdm'
To be continued..
ChilledPig
27-09-2016, 11:00 PM
Please continue TS :)
AsahiBeer
28-09-2016, 05:25 AM
Please continue TS :)
Yes please do
EternalFrame
28-09-2016, 10:39 AM
Yes please do
Yes agree too
Johnnykhan
28-09-2016, 01:19 PM
Technician sex... woooo
mmmok
29-09-2016, 08:31 PM
No worries about the slow update but just don't disappear .
Divine Dragon
30-09-2016, 09:25 PM
Looking forward to next instalment .
Flying Snow
04-10-2016, 11:21 AM
Where is TS ???
TS again disappear .
lucozade
04-10-2016, 01:19 PM
TS please continue
yesman
13-10-2016, 03:36 PM
I guess TS still not back yet . Should we file a missing person police report ?
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