[guyorgirl]

Originally Posted by justforfun90

ignore the naysayers and don't skip the lead-up
its your story so tell it the way you want to.
the lead-up is what makes this story relatable
if it's just sex, there are tons of other stories out there.
the impatient ones can just go rub one out from those other stories.

No la, not naysayers, I forgot that there will be other readers apart from those we already know how I post and irritate people and so others will feel irritated and tired of it. It's fair play, not really nice to say others ba. It's partially my fault I didn't 'work' during holidays also, else I can post long long ones

Originally Posted by want0nmee

i'm okay with all the lead up, that's what story is meant for right.
maybe just longer post. haha
thank for the post bro.

I am trying but cannot too long, once I see the scroll bar become 'longer', I know I write too slow then I will write more, if I write at one shot then post, I will become lazy.

Originally Posted by Blackenrose

I like your story! The slow build up is nice, it's very relatable.

Thank you, I'm glad you do. Sometimes it's just my style and some can't accept, but I'll do better with feedback

Originally Posted by poseidon88

Slowly build up and take your time bro.

This one a bit slow because last time I am young and can't read body language and understand women well, the build up will be longer as I share how I moved up the 'ladder' with Alicia to get her trust and the silly things along the way that lead to our first time (with, or without guilt?).

Originally Posted by Iceball88

I like the build up cuz that's what make the story interesting.keep it up

Thank you bro, glad you do, I don't have much sexual details apart from a few, the build up is my favourite memory also.

Originally Posted by Anonyabc

Just write it your way your time.

Yes bro!!!