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Re: The story of Tan Ah Beng...
welcome back bro, more please
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Where r u? still waiting for your story lah...................................
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i think my mth-long stock of potato chips have been finished up ... while waiting for ur story... turning into a couch potato liao... where are U, ah beng n ericia ...??? wats your plan ?????
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When is the story going to continue again?????
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Ah Beng!!!!!....where r u???
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当男人全心爱过一个人之后, 该付出的付出了, 全心努力的去把握过, 曾试图给她想要的一切, 曾试图为她而死, 但回报却是无动于衷, 于是在一次次寂寞的等待中, 心血一点一滴的滴干了, 最后心血全无,心灰意冷, 当爱情失去信仰, 当感情离开忠一的港湾后, 对于男人来说, 爱情是什么这一切就都显的无所谓了! 男人的心冷了, 就再也难以热起来, 因为爱过一次之后已经让他失去了爱的能力。 |
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This is wat i call a story..very well written...my heart really goes out to ah beng..really can relate to the feel like shit feeling...bro..pls dun forget to continue ur story...u write on paperback..i sure support n buy one....
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Brudder Raider123,
Where art thou? Really wait long long for your fantastic story. Please don't leave our dick hanging |
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i have been missing out on this!! i cant believe it......
i must say this is a good story plot and well deserved to be upped i will be locking on to this thread, dont keep us waiting for too long bro...
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Dear bros,
I just changed my job recently so need to impress the new boss. As such, no time to write this story. However, I managed to squeeze a new episode recently...Pls enjoy... After Albert removes Shaun from the company, he seemed to be enjoying the power he used to have. He has assumed the role of finance director from Shaun, a prized post where money is concerned. Although I am out of the company, I am aware of the development of Shaun’s case through Ah Huat and Ah Seng. Apparently, we suspect Kelvin has made Shaun signed on some documents which authorized the transfer of funds to his personal account. What a smart move by Albert to remove Shaun from his position. After investigations are concluded, Shaun, even though innocent, is convicted for siphoning funds out of the company. He has been jailed for 5 years. Zoe, his model wife, is heartbroken and depressed. “Hello, Erica…This is David,” I said as I called Erica on my mobile. “Hi, what’s up,” she said. “I heard mum is going for a concert tonight, you should know what to do,” I said. “Really, Albert is not at home too, ok…I understand,” she said and hung up the call. “Hello, Pa…Erica…Are you free tonight, want to come over for a chat,” said Erica as she called my father-in-law. “Eh…Ok might as well since your mum is not at home…,” He said. “See you later then,” said Erica. My father-in-law makes his way to Erica’s house. “Good evening Sir”, said Yati. “Pa…you are here,” said Erica. She is dressed in a tight body hugging spaghetti top with a short denim skirt. “You look youthful today,” said my father-in-law. “You mean I used to look very old ah,” said Erica as she laughs after making this statement. “No lah, you always look young,” said father-in-law. “After my pregnancy, I don’t even dared to wear this top as my tummy is a flabby with baby’s fats,” said Erica. Both of them sat down at the sofa. “No lah, you must be joking, you go for aerobics classes everyday, how to have baby fats,” said my father-in-law. “The classes help me to slim down, but not my cup size,” said Erica. Father-in-law is taken backed by the direction their conversation is going. “Eh, eh you mean it has grown bigger during your pregnancy,” asked father-in-law. “Ya…used to be B cup but grown to C cup during pregnancy, now still B+…so sad,” said Erica. “But…But why…Big is ok what,” said father-in-law with a smile. Obviously, he is enjoying this sexy talk with his sexy daughter-in-law… “Most of my clothes especially body hugging one cannot be worn anymore and all these are quite ex, “said Erica with a sigh. “Never mind, ask Albert to buy for you again,” said my father-in-law. “The worst thing is during my pregnancy when I wear those spaghetti maternity tops, my boobs are so prominent, all those tiko pehs like to stare at them.” said Erica. My father-in-law blushes as he is one of the culprits. The images of Erica bending down and zaogeng her C cup boobs are still fresh in his mind. |
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“Actually Pa tonight I ask you to come over is to discuss about the relationship between Albert and myself,” said Erica. “What happened,” ask father-in-law. “Albert has an illicit affair with Deborah, his secretary,” said Erica. “To be frank, I am aware of this but it is quite common for men to fool around,” said father-in-law.
“Actually I will just close one eye, however I think it is not just lust but they are developing a relationship,” said Erica. “How can that be, I know Albert well, he is just being horny,” said father-in-law. “But Albert has been staying at her place for the past 2 weeks,” said Erica as her tears roll down her face. “Eh..eh….” Father-in-law does not know what to say to Erica. He walked up and took the tissue box to Erica. “Dry your tears,” said father-in-law as he sat besides Erica. “Pa…did I do anything wrong…” said Erica. “No…no…you did not but it is Albert that let you down…,” replied father-in-law. Erica leaned on the shoulder of father-in-law. Pa was caught off-guard by Erica’s move. His sexy daughter-in-law is now on his body…those smooth fair porcelain skin…the scent of her long silky hair…and the most important pair of delicious boobs are now on his chest. Pa is trying his best to control his physical reactions. “Don’t cry…ok,” Pa said as he pats Erica on her back. “I will talk to Albert on this,” said Pa. “Pa, you must really help me to talk to Albert,” said Erica As he walks out of the house, he keeps thinking about Erica lying on his body…the feeling is great…he starts to fantasize that he savors every inch of Erica’s heavenly body… To be continued... |
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Welcome Back
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well done bro! keep them cumming!
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yeah nice work raider.....glad this episode came fast....
thumbs up
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Bro Raider,
You should get in touch with Wong Ching, the HK Cat III Producer, boyfriend of Qiu Shuzhen. Your stories will revitalized the stale Cat III movie scene. Anothony Wong will be Mr. Tan Ah Beng; Carina Lau as Mary; Pinky Cheung as Deborah. You need a nickname as Director of your movie - maybe Ang Lee. |
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