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They all knew who the caller was. But they were confused.

Should they go down or was it simply a trap laid by Wyn?

Daniel walked and walked. It seemed like a passage to nowhere. He could only see a white tunnel and nothing else. He was wondering where he was and it just dawned on him. Is he dead?

Daniel was warded in the A class. Wyn had just left, leaving him alone in the room. Her last words to Daniel was: I'm sorry Daniel. I truly am.

There was a knock on the otherwise old door. As she opened the door, she gasped.

Ting: You?

Bernice was the first to arrive at the hospital and she was frantically searching for Daniel's ward. And she caught a glimpse of Rena too.

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Bernice and Rena held hands as they walked towards Daniel's ward. He was lying there unconscious with a drip on the side. He had lost a lot of weight. Frail was the word as their eyes blurred with droplets of sorrow.

Bernice: Oh my gosh oh my gosh...

She touched Daniel's face and she trembled. She shook with regret as she brushed his stray hair aside. The white strands of hair seemed to have multiplied. He was shabby. Dark eye shadows were visible, and he was breathing through the mask.

Rena kissed him on his forehead with trickles of tears dripping.

He did not seem to have any reaction.

Ting: 你说什么? 为什么会这样? 天啊!!! (What? You got to be kidding me!)

Ting grabbed the tickets from the man and she dashed into her room and packed immediately, heading straight to the airport.

Daniel's heartbeat was on the decline.

The surroundings that he walked changed as through he was on a time machine. He was suddenly transported to the spot where Beth committed suicide. Her desperateness. Her fear. As he walked towards her, shouting for her not to jump, she took a deep breath and plunged down.

Dan: Nooo!!!!

The scene changes to his home with his five wives when he was away on the rendezvous with Wyn. He could see exactly what happened. He wanted so much to shout, but they could not hear him.

He could only watch.

He then saw Beth.

She stretched out her palms, signalling for him to follow.

Daniel smiled to himself as he tried to hold her hand.

The beeping sound of the machine was ringing.

Bernice and Rena was shouting in desperation.

The indicators of the heart machine had stopped.

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Re: Wyn - The Day You Walked Away II

Wow!! Bro kopi, you're incredible . I applaud you. And thanks! Cheers, ....................
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Daniel could hear faint voices from afar.

He stopped for a while and waited.

Daniel: Bernice? Rena?

Bernice and Rena was shouting his name, hoping that he could hear them.

Bernice: NOOO! Daniel! Please! Come back! Don't leave me... Rena is here too! Daniel!

Rena kept pressing the red emergency button and she was trying to shake Daniel up.

Rena: Please... wake up.... dear... please...

Bernice: We will return as a family... please... wake up....

The doctor immediately raised his eyelids and prepared the necessary equipment.

The two of them stayed at the side, with Bernice leaning on Rena's shoulders. Rena patted her as they both hoped for the best.

Doc: Charge!

Daniel's body shook up with the impact.

Doc: Charge!

A second impact. No response.

Bernice could not help herself: Hubby, please come back! I love you!

Beth smiled gracefully at Daniel when he held her hand. She was wearing the white dress that Daniel had bought for her.

Beth: Go my dear. They are waiting.

Beth nodded her head as kissed him on his cheek.

Doc: Charge!

The third shock triggered him to open his eyes, gasping for air.

Doc: Yes!

The nurses cheered as his pulse came back.

Evans and Gin were standing outside his ward, both heaving a sigh of relief. Both of them looked at each other and hugged tightly.

Evans: Thank god..

Gin: Yes...

They could not contain their emotions and cried.

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Support TS, really good story
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Daniel was too weak to respond. His eyes swept quickly before he closed. He was sure he caught a glimpse of Bernice and Rena. But he was not sure if he was seeing correctly.

Evans and Gin entered and the sisters greeted each other with a smile. None of them talked. Their attention was on Daniel. Bernice was hold to his hand, letting his fingers brush her face.

Bernice: It's me Daniel.. Bernice... please... don't ever leave me again.

Rena kissed him on his forehead. Evans and Gin walked over and massaged his legs.

None of them dared to go home in case the same scene happened. Bernice and Rena rested their arms on Daniel's bed and Evans and Gin slept on the sofa.

It was nearing morning when Bernice heard wheels rolling like that of a luggage. And that familiar voice who was mumbling to herself.

The door opened like a detective who was there to investigate.

Ting: 老公!!!! (Honey!)

The 65 year old man woke up in shock as his wife stared at Ting, and gave her husband that medusa look.

Ting: 哦对不起。。认错人。。。(Sorry, wrong person)

She stick out her tongue and went out of the door.

When she exited the door, she saw her four sisters standing outside Dan's door.

Rena: I guess there's only one person capable of this voice and actions.

They laughed.

Ting: 你们很坏。 笑我。(You all are so bad. Laughing at me like this)

She paused. Then hugged Rena.

Ting: 我好想你们呢。 我以为不能再回来了。 (I missed all of you... I thought I couldn't see you all again...)

She cried and buried herself in Rena's embrace.

Rena: It's alright now... we are back together.

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Donno why suddenly I feel they are the 5 power rangers, n wyn is the badass. LOLX..

Good triumph over evil in the end.. Haha..
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Daniel slept for a whole day. When he awoke he was alone in his ward. He sighed. He had thought he saw Rena and Bernice. What good was it by staying alone in the empty room?

The sisters was back in Daniel's mansion, they were turned off by the smelly and messy state it was in. Immediately they changed into their shorts and tshirt, and started to clean up, throwing away the cans and other rubbish.

Ting: I'm tired!

Gin: Hmmph! What am I doing?

Evans: Take it as a workout!

Rena: Stop complaining. Get back to work! Look at Bernice.

Bernice was carrying pails of water, cleaning up the passageway. She was scrubbing hard.

They looked at each other. And gleamed.

Rena: What?

Ting, Evans and Gin suddenly ran into the kitchen.

Rena: What are you all doing?

Ting, Evans, Gin: Helping Bernice!

Rena continued cleaning. They came out with small pails each.

Slowly they crept behind Rena.

They whispered to each other: 1, 2, 3

Out came the splashes of water from their pails onto Rena, soaking her thoroughly. Her black bra was apparent from her white tshirt.

Evans: Wow, black bra eh?

Gin and Ting was giggling.

Rena was at a loss for words. She was wet and her hair was all flat from water.

She grabbed Evans and hugged her tightly, using her wet hair to soak her yellow tee, exposing her sky blue sport bra.

Rena: Blue!

Rena and Evans were aiming for Ting and Gin now.

The house was full of screams and giggles as they played with water, splashing each other.

Bernice came in, only to be splashed with 4 buckets of water.

Bernice: Why you!!!

She was surprised that Rena, Evans, Ting and Gin were stark naked.

They said as they closed the door and ripped Bernice's clothes.

Rena, Ting, Evans, Gin: Naked party!

They were exhausted as they laid naked on the marbled flooring.

Gin: That was fun!

Now the whole house was clean but all the sofas were soaked.

There was a ring on the doorbell.

Bernice looked through the peephole and took a deep breath.

Outside the house gate was Wyn.

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Wyn waited.

Deep inside her she knew that there were someone inside, they would not answer the door but she wanted to see them. It sounded weird. But she just wanted to see how the sisters could live happily together.

She wanted to know what it feels like.

Inside the room they took turns to take a look at Wyn.

Gin: So it's her who plotted everything. I want to give her a good thrashing!

Bernice: Wait Gin. Let her leave. We don't want anything to do with her.

Rena: Bernice's right. Let her leave.

Wyn got into her car and left with disappointment.

Daniel was recovering well and he was discharged.

He was sad that no one was there to pick him up. Not even Wyn.

He hailed a cab and headed home.

He looked at his house. Somehow it looked different.

But what?

He entered his house, only to find it sparkling clean. But there was no one there.

Who would have tidied his house?

He took a look at the respective rooms and all looked tidied up.

Had they come back?

He was not sure. But he could be just dreaming.

Bernice and her sisters went to the hospital, only to find that he was already discharged. They looked at each other and shrugged their shoulders. Bernice held on to the white box and they went to the cafe for coffee.

Daniel missed the days of laughter. And he went to Bernice's room and slept, hoping that they would return.

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no more updates?! WHY WHY WHY?! BROOOOOO WHYYYYYYYY
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Daniel hugged his bolsters tightly for it was the only thing that could give comfort. He flipped. He turned. That feel of helplessness and loneliness was something he couldn't bear.

He closed his eyes and his fingers crept to his boxers. He recalled how he got Bernice. He had sort of forced it on her and he could still remember the scene.

A single pump.

He recalled her huge melons that rested on a plain red bra. Seductively hot for him.

Another pump.

He remembered that deep cleavage that she had when he took off her buttoned shirt. Her breasts had always seemed to burst the buttons. There were some drops of sweat on her cleavage which made it look really really tempting.

Another pump.

He was getting all wet, there were precum forming on his boxers, he still closed his eyes and slowly stroked himself thinking of Bernice.

Pumps harder.

His fingers changed momentum as he tried to imitate that of a mouth. The very sight of Bernice giving him a blow job was divine. Her eyes that was pinned on him. That lips that sealed his rod with a vacuum suction. He was getting excited as he increased the momentum.

He thought of how he choked her by pushing his rod to touch her throat and hearing her gag while pumping her vigorously.

Then it happened.

He cum into her mouth. A full load where she choked, spilling out drops of white pearl-like semen from her mouth. Her hands were trying to catch the semen, not letting it fall to the floor.

His boxers were all wet and sticky. He turned himself around and slept on Bernice's bed. He wanted it to last longer. He closed his eyes and unknowingly, he fell asleep.

The sisters came back and saw a pair of shoes that had belonged to Daniel.

Ting gestured for them to keep quiet as they crept into the house quietly.

Bernice was the last to enter.

In the hall they could hear snores.

Evans: That's him alright.

Rena: Hmm.

Ting: I'm going to take a peek.

Gin: Fine by me.

Ting and Evans crept towards the sound, trying to be silent as possible.

They found him in Bernice's room.

Ting whispered to Evan: Hmmph! Why did he selected big sis room first!

Evans went towards him and gave him a light peck on his forehead.

Tings: Let's see if little Dan is obedient.

Her nimble fingers moved to his crouch and she stroked it lightly.

Ting: EEwwwwww. Yucks.

Her fingers were coated with his semen which he jerked off.

Ting ran over to Evans and rubbed the semen on her.

Evans: Yucks! What are you doing?

The two of them ran out of the room.

Ting rubbed her fingers on Evans shirt.

Evans: Hey that's disgusting!

Ting: I thought you liked it on your skin?

Evans: Ewwww...

Rena: How is he?

Ting: Yucks. He DIY on his own and is sleeping at Big Sis room now. And he haven't changed his boxers. Disgusting!

Rena: Let him sleep.

Bernice kept quiet as she took a basin of water to her room. She knew Dan would be a deep sleeper.

She took off his boxers and cleaned him up.

Ting: Big sis, you are really a good wife material.

Bernice: Let's go to sleep. And we should all squeeze in a room.

Rena: Agreed. Let's give him a taste of his own medicine tomorrow.

They exchanged their nods as they slept together in Gin's room.

They discussed the plan and came out with the codename: Payback.

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Daniel woke up, surprised to find his boxer shorts changed.

"Did I change it last night?" he thought to himself.

Then, he thought his wives were back. He ran out of the room and inspected.

Daniel: Bernice, Rena, Evans, Ting, Gin?

No one was there. He looked at his own house again. Everything was spick and span. Someone must have came here. Someone.

There was no sign of anyone at all.

He sat on the cold sofa.

Pondering again.

It was a full day of meeting for Wyn. She let loose one of the buttons on her shirt to let in some air as she sipped on her cold coffee that was lying on the table. She looked out of the blind, overseeing the CBD district.

After settling a few business emails, she went off to the carpark. Her car was parked nicely as she took out her car keys. To her horror, all her tyres were all punctured. And her car was scratched with the words "slut". She looked around, trying to find the culprits who did all these.

Wyn: Come out! Whoever did this! Be a man!

Her voice echoed the empty carpark. She was fuming mad.

The sound of her heels quickened as she headed for the door. Strangely it was half opened. But she was fumed with rage. She kicked the door with a huge force, causing it to slam on the wall. Something fell on her head.

Down came a white plastic bag which splashed all over her hair and her body. Stinky and wet. She could not open her eyes, and the huge impact of her kick caused the door to come slamming back to her. She lost her balance and her heel broke as she fell to the ground. Her hair all wet, her black blouse was soaked through and there was signs of faeces and sewage water.

Wyn took off her black jacket, and tried to clean her hands. Fortunately she managed to grab a pack of tissues tucked in her jacket. She used up the entire pack cleaning her face.

Wyn: What a bad day!

She grumbled as she made her way to the toilet.

She hated the toilet on this floor. Dirty, poorly lit and spooky to her. But she knew she had no choice. She couldn't possibly go up to her office floor and risk her staff seeing her in this plight.

She went into the ladies. It smelled of moss. The floor was damp and air stale. She put down her handbag and immediately she went to the tap and washed her hands and face, trying hard to wash her hair. She beckoned she may need to take a cab home. It took her quite some time to wash away the dirty parts. She threw her jacket into the dustbin. Luckily for her, the blouse she wore was not affected much.

Suddenly the lights went on and off, on and off. She froze.

Wyn: No... no nonono...

And the lights went off. She screamed and ran towards the door.

Wyn: Is anyone there?

The door was locked.

Wyn: IS ANYONE OUT THERE? HELP!!!!!!! HELPPPPPPP!!!

She slammed on the door as hard as she could, trying to get attention. But no one was there.

It went on for ten minutes until finally the lights were on.

Wyn stood in front of the door. Happy that the light was back on. She heaved a sigh of relief. She thought that her heart has stopped. She hushed herself by patting on her chest. The thing that happened next could literally drive anyone insane.

Suddenly dark red liquid started to flow in from the door. It resembled that of blood. And she could hear an old lady's laughter. The rumoured lady who 'lived' in this carpark.

Wyn's scream could have easily pierced anyone's ear. She ran to the cubicle, locked herself and covered her ears, closed her eyes and buried herself in her knees.

Wyn: Save me. please.. Someone...

She hid herself until she heard someone coming in and they were discussing something about going out for dinner.

Girl 1: Hey how about going to the nearby restaurant for steamboat?
Girl 2: Ok ok... it's been some time. But did you make reservations?
Girl 1: Nope. Let's try our luck then.
Girl 2: Suits me fine.
Girl 1: Ok. Let's go.

Wyn quickly open the door.

Wyn: Wait for me!

The two girls jumped when they saw Wyn. Wyn's hair was messy and her mascara smudged.

Girls: Lunatic.

Wyn quickly got out of the toilet, thankful that she was out of the 'hell'.

Then.

She discovered.

Her bag was missing.

No money. No phone. No keys.

Her only chance was to go back to her office, hoping that there was still someone there.

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Gin, Evans and Ting were laughing their bellies off.

Gin: OMG, you can be a scriptwriter already Ting.

Ting: Not funny.

Gin: Just look at the way Wyn was behaving. That was the best movie I saw. Hahahhahaha.

Evans: No.. it's not over yet.

There were only two lifts in the tower.

And there was a granny at the lift lobby sweeping the floor.

She took sight of Wyn.

Granny: Young lady... you have seen something you have not, haven't you. Be careful. Be careful. When you hear someone calling you. Do not turn around. Be careful, be careful...

She mumbled as she turned and left.

Wyn was dumbstruck.

Her fingers were still trembling when she pressed the level.

She vaguely remembered the cleaning auntie but her words stuck her.

The lift door opened at the 7th storey and Wyn stepped out of the lift. Shocked to see the cleaning trolley. She went to the right and made a turn when she heard.

Old granny: Be careful..be careful young lady...

Wyn froze. She swore she had just saw this granny on the first floor.

Wyn wet herself. She was too terrified to even move.

Luckily for her, Wyn's secretary was the last to leave and she saw Wyn. She was as pale as a sheet of white paper.

Secretary: Boss.... are you alright?

Wyn just stood dazed until her secretary gave her a pat from behind.

Wyn screamed.

Secretary: Boss... its me... your secretary.

It took Wyn a while to calm down as she hugged her secretary, asking her to send her home.

Wyn reached home and took a long shower, still trembling with fear.

She then reached for her phone and dialled: Daniel.

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