Fate or Destiny - Part 2

[Frozer]

Support from me as well.

[plok]

Wow! Mega update! Shiok lah. Loving it.

[spritexia]

Next episode would be interesting haha

[RapidxBoy]

Setting up campfire.

[pussluver]

I knew this was his plan all along as I noticed that he had started to touch her all over her body. However, she was unaware and had fallen into the trap. Earlier, I had told him that if she did not reject his touches, I would not stop him. As such, when she remained silent, he made full use of this opportunity.

On the other hand, he was also an experienced enough photographer to understand that he should not cause her to lose her confidence completely. So for the next few poses, he only gave her brief instructions on what adjustments to make and praised her once the picture was taken and her confidence gradually returned with her poses.

However, she seemed to have lost the mood and her expressions were rather stiff. He knew it as well and stopped.

Xi: ok.... that's all.....

Jamie: har?.... but it's less than 20 photos...... Was I doing something wrong?

He shook his head.

Xi: those are good sexy lingerie photos... but Scott told me that he wanted it to be sensual..... and you're not showing it.....

I had not mentioned that but I did not contest it. She raised her eyebrows and look at me while he proceeded to explain to her.

When he was done, she looked at me apologetically.

Jamie: sorry, baby.... I didn't know and I don't know how to do it....

I knew exactly what I needed to do to get her back into the mood. I went forward, wrapped my arm around her waist and kissed her directly on her lips.

Jamie: babymppphhff.... waitmmpphhf.....

When she opened her mouth, I took the opportunity to snake my tongue in. Once it touched hers, she responded automatically.

Immediately, I reached up and grabbed her breasts.

Jamie: babymppphhff.... nooooommpphhf.....

Even though she continued to kiss me, she was still trying to push me away but I managed to sneak my hand under her bra. I found her nipple easily and started to tease it furiously.

Jamie: ernmpppphhff.... babymppphhff.... stoppmmpphhf..... ernmpppphhff....

I noticed that he adjusted her crotch as he continued to watch us but I was not prepared to give him a free show. She stopped trying to push me away after about 20 seconds and I waited for another 5 seconds before I retreated away from her.

She was breathing heavily as she tried to regain her composure but there was not even the slightest bit of annoyance on her face. I could see that she was well aroused again.

Xi: hmm... Good job Scott..... Jamie, it seemed that you're more in the mood now.... I think we're now good to continued....

He went back behind the camera and she stuck her tongue out at me.

Xi: Jamie, face sideways now.....

She was still kneeling on the sofa and adjusted herself so that her entire body was now facing sideways before she turned her head and looked at the camera with a seductive look.

Xi: yes.... good.... that's more natural.

*click*

Still in the same position, I was surprised when she reached up and grabbed her boobs on the outside of her bra for the first time the whole evening.

Xi: yes.... very good....

*click*

She placed both her hands down on the seat so that she was now on all fours before looking at the camera again.

Xi: wait.... pulled down your undies but don't remove it completely.... leave it hanging on your mid-thighs.....

She contemplated for a moment.

Xi: Didn't you agreed to something sensual?

Since she was facing us with the side of her body, we would not be able to see her bottom. She gave me a brief glance before she made her decision. Supporting herself with only 1 hand and both knees, she reached down with her free hand and pulled down her G-string until it settled on her mid-thighs.

Without asking her, he went forward and squatted down beside her. He left one hand on the back of her upper thigh near her butt while he started to adjust the garment with the other. Even though she had her undies down but since she had trusted him completely, I was not surprise that she remained relaxed and calm as he made the adjustment.

*click*

After the photo had been taken, I was surprised that she did not pull G-string up and instead, she reached down with her hand and placed it between her legs. She half-closed her eyes and a look of pleasure spread across her face. Although we were unable to see what she was doing but it was not hard for us to guess.

*click*

Her hand did not remained there and started to slowly slide up along her body, leaving an obvious trail of liquid behind its path.

*click*

Once it arrived at one of her breasts, she grabbed it and turned her upper body towards the camera.

Xi: wait.... hold it there.... your nipple.... it's in an unnatural position..... Can you adjust it?

She released her breast and made the adjustment. However, once she grabbed the boob again, her bra tightened against the nipple and caused it to sit in a strange position again.

He went over and squatted beside her again.

Xi: Don't let go of your breast.... I'll help to make the adjustment to your nipple.....

Even before she replied and as if he was afraid that she would stop him, he slipped his hand under her bra. She remained completely still and through the sheer fabric, I could see his fingers reaching out for the nipple.

Although he could have just pushed it with his finger tips to get it into the right position, he held it between his finger and thumb and applied gentle pressure on it.

Still holding her breast, she cringed her face and bit her lips. She was breathing heavily now and I knew that he had just aroused her even further but he knew enough not to linger for too long. He retracted his hand and returned to the camera.

Xi: good.... keep that expression.....

*click*

She pulled up her G-string and sat on the sofa before turning to face us directly. Once her stilettos were on the floor, she left her thighs open and grabbed both breasts this time before pushing them forward, as if offering them to us.

Xi: hold it there.... I need to make adjustments again.....

This time, she did not even attempt to adjust herself and waited patiently for him.

Standing directly in front of her, he slid both hands into each of her bra cups. Once he had her nipples between his fingers again, she unexpectedly let out a soft sound.

Jamie: um.....

Instead of retracting his hands, he continued to hold onto her nipples and peered into her face with a concerned look.

Xi: are you ok?

Jamie: erm... yes.... um.....

Xi: ok good.... got it.

Finally, he removed his hands.

*click*

Xi: very good..... it's time to change the background.... let's go into your room

He passed her the camera and brought the lights into the room.

She looked at the photos and showed them to me.

Jamie: baby.... how is it? Do you like them?

Me: yes..... but I'll also like you to show off more skin.....

Jamie: hmmm... your greediness is insatiable....

She picked up her towel and headed to the room.

[pussluver]

He went out to smoke and we sat on the bed.

Me: were you worried when you pulled your panties down?

She shook her head.

Jamie: I'm not worried.... and as expected, he didn't try to go behind me to sneak a peep.....

Me: what about when he touched your nipple?

Jamie: I also wasn't worried since he was just helping me to adjust.....

Me: You knew he wasn't just adjusting right?

Jamie: He was professional about it.....

She tried to deny it but I did not want to push it further.

Me: hmmm.... ok.... but I saw that you tried to control your moans when he was touching them..... you enjoyed it, didn't you?

She blushed.

Jamie: why is he taking so long? I'll go and hurry him...... It's getting late......

She got up from the bed and went out of the room.

After a few minutes, she was still not back and I went out to look for them. She was standing in front of him in the balcony with a can of beer in her hand while he was on the phone and smoking at the same time. Once he saw me, he hung up.

Me: Jason?

Xi: nope.....Jamie said that Dong left before she could get him to bring some T-shirts over for her.... so I told Park to help her get some additional clothes....

Me: I see..... baby, you shouldn't be drinking any more beers.....

Jamie: hehe.... just one last one.....

She gave me a puppy-look that made me stop my nagging.

Xi: Scott..... Jamie and I had a discussion and we'll be doing a video shoot after this....

I was surprised by this development. Apparently this was what they discussed in the balcony and I was sure that it was his suggestion.

Me: baby, you sure about it?

She nodded.

Jamie: I've done the photo shoot.... I agree that doing a video might be more interesting.....

Xi: yup.... but like I told you, it's different compared to still pictures as I won't be able to give you advise on any adjustments you need to make once I started filming.....

Jamie: yes... I know.... and you said you'll tell me what to do exactly before we do the filming so that we don't have to keep repeating the take, right?......

Xi: yes..... Scott, is that ok with you?

I was not sure how it will pan out but I nodded. He snuffed out his cigarette.

Xi: let's go.....

Once we were in the room, she took off her shoes and climbed onto the bed.

She laid sideways and pop her head up with one hand, waiting for his instructions.

Xi: ok.... start by stroking your thigh..... and then move up to grab your breast.....

She stroked her thigh with her free hand and he started the camera.

*bzzzz*

She slid her hand along her body, until it reached her breast. She held it and started to squeeze it gently.

By now, most of the alcohol should have already been cleared from her and she should be rather sober. Furthermore, we had a rather long break from the previous shoot and she should no longer be too aroused.

Although it was not part of the sequence that he wanted, I was surprised when she unexpectedly slid the hand under her bra and started to tease her nipple under the sheer fabric.

She started to close her eyes but he stopped the camera and frowned.

Xi: Tsk.... hey Jamie.... the idea is good but the execution is not correct..... every motion need to be fluid..... let me show you.....

He went onto the bed and sat behind her.

Xi: watch carefully.....

He started to explain simultaneously as he placed his hand on her thigh. Slowly, he slid his hand up along her waist, across her tummy and onto her breast. He gave it a gentle squeeze before sliding his hand under her bra and took her nipple between his fingers.

Earlier, he had just held onto her nipples but this time, he began to twirl it around his finger tips. He was obviously teasing it and I was stunned that she did not push him away. Instead she bit her lips, cringed her face and closed her eyes as if she was enjoying his touches.

Xi: Hey Jamie.... open your eyes and watch carefully..... I don't want to re-take the video again.....

She half opened her eyes to look at how he was touching her. I continued to watch in astonishment that she was showing zero objections.

Xi: Do it slowly, like this..... twirl your finger around your nipple gently..... then hold onto it and give it a little pinch like this.....

She closed her eyes again hoping to control herself.

Xi: Jamie... open your eyes....

Once she opened her eyes, she was unable to hold it back any more.

Jamie: ern......

Immediately, she held onto his wrist.

Jamie: ern.... stop..... ern.... stop....

I took a step towards the bed. However, when I realized that she was merely holding onto his wrist and was not pushing him away, I held my position. I remained silent and continued to watch them but I was ready to stop him if she insisted on it.

Unexpectedly, he retracted his hand before she moaned again.

Xi: so..... I guess you know what to do?

She had started to breathe heavily and merely nodded her head.

He left her there and went back to the camera. She was still looking flushed when he started the camera.

*bzzzz*

She did everything in accordance to what he had told her to.

Xi: ok, good take..... luckily you paid attention... if not, we will need to waste time to re-take the scene again....

He looked at his watch.

Xi: It's almost 2 and I'm tired..... I think for each scene, I'll better demonstrate it to you so that we can save time on the re-take.... ok?

She laid on her back and nodded without opening her eyes.

[pussluver]

With her nipples being so sensitive, I knew that he had gotten her aroused. However, I also knew that she would still be able to control herself and resist him if she found something that he was doing to be inappropriate. On the other hand, what I could not understand was that why she had not stopped him when he fondled her nipple.

I remembered the incident when she told me about Cory's friend who grabbed her tits in a club. She had felt appalled and slapped him then. Aside from that, the guy could not be uglier than Xi and I was at a dead end and could not find an answer to this question.

However, I knew that he would attempt to touch her further but also wondered how much more she would allow him to. Curious, I turned my attention back to them.

She was still laying on her back with a leg straightened out and the other forming an inverted V. She had opened her eyes and he was again sitting beside her on the bed.

Xi: ok.... watch this carefully.....

He started to stroke her neck and slowly moved down to her breasts. This time, as he slipped his hands into her bra, he pushed the cups down and brought her breasts into the open. Slowly, he began to massage them while fondling her nipples at the same time.

She had stopped trying to control herself and started to moan freely but softly.

Jamie: ern..... ern......

However, her eyes remained half-opened as she watched his fingers moved expertly around her nipples. I noticed that goosepimples had already appeared around her areolas.

Leaving one hand on her breasts, he slid the other Southwards, across her tummy and stopped once it reached the outside of her G-string, on top of her pubic area.

Xi: Sit up..... I want to show you how to do it below for the video.....

She sat up and looked down.

He had stopped touching her breasts but she did not attempt to re-adjust her bra as he slid his hand between her legs. He placed his index-finger and his ring finger on either side of her labia before stroking her nether lips with his middle finger.

Throughout the night, the sexual tension had been building up steadily in her. Although he was doing it on the opaque portion of her G-string, her immediate reactions announced that he had found her clitoris.

She tilted her head back and closed her eyes while spreading her legs apart.

Jamie: ernnnnn........

Just like how he teased her nipples earlier, he did not stop.

Xi: Open your eyes and look..... I don't want you to miss anything later.....

She forced opened her eyes but continued to moan loudly as if encouraging him to do more to her. However, after a while, he removed his hand.

Xi: Got it?

She nodded weakly.

He helped her to re-adjust her bra before returning to his camera.

Xi: Action.....

*bzzzzz*

She repeated the actions and once she started to touch her bottom, he moved over to the other side so that he could capture the actions between her legs before stopping the camera.

Xi: perfect.....

So far, she had allowed him to touch her all over and it was not difficult to guess what he was going to do next. However, I also suspected that she was not going to stop him but if she did and if he did not stop, I was prepared to restraint him.

On the other hand, the anticipation had got me extremely excited and I almost wanted to fuck her on the spot. However, I quickly calmed myself down as I was more curious about how far she would allow him to go.

She was laying on her back, catching her breathe and he went onto the bed again. He adjusted her position until the bottom of her feet was facing me.

Xi: ok.... let's do the last video.... here's what you do....

He reached behind her and unclasped her bra. Then he guided her hand to remove it sensually. After that, he slid his hands down along her sides until he reached the waistband of her G-string and he started to pull it down until the middle of her thighs.

He slid his hand up to grab her breasts while lifting one of them towards her lips.

Xi: Then you lick your nipples like this.....

I was completely flabbergasted when he bent down and started to lick her nipples.

Jamie: AHHHH...... AHHHH....

Instead of pushing him away, she grabbed her breasts and pushed it even further into his mouth.

Xi: *slurp*.... as you licked your nipples..... *slurp*.... I want you to slide the other hand down like this.....*slurp*....

As his hand slid down her body, she automatically kicked the G-string off and spread her legs. I could hardly believed my eyes that she was welcoming him.

He did not need any further encouragement and inserted his finger into her.

Jamie: ERNNN..... ERNN....... ERNNN......

He started to finger-fuck her slowly.

This was never my intention in the first place and the Yahya incident flashed across my mind. I wondered if I had let this gone on too far.

He continued to suck her tits and increased the speed of his fingers as I contemplated my next course of action.

Even though she was continuously moaning in pleasure, suddenly, I realized that she had opened her eyes and was looking at me. I froze when I saw her mouthed something to me.

There was no sound but I knew what she said.

"I know this is what you planned for..... so I'm doing this for you...."

After she said it, she closed her eyes and completely allowed her body to take over.

Within the next 30 seconds, she had her orgasm.

Jamie: ERRRRNNNNKKKKK......... ERRRRNNNNNKKKKKKK...... AHHHHHHHH........

Once she completed her climax, he retracted his wet finger from her and licked it, looking extremely satisfied.

As she laid on the bed with her eyes closed and trying to regain her composure, he got up from the bed and went to the camera before turning to me. He handed me the SD card without any fuss before speaking softly.

Xi: I recorded what I did to her earlier..... and as you can see, she enjoyed it.... haha.... so I hoped you like the video.... anyway, thanks for allowing this to happen..... it's very enjoyable.....

I stood there and stared at the card in my hand as he collected his stuffs and returned to his room.

[pussluver]

She had her bath before I had mine. She was naked and waiting for me under the blankets as I tucked in beside her.

I had so many questions in my mind when she snuggled into my arms. I made sure that I did not sound like I was accusing her.

Me: baby..... what happened earlier?..... why did you say that I planned for him to touch you?

She giggled and sneaked her hand into my shorts.

Jamie: hehe.... Xi told me all about it when we were in the balcony.....

I was shocked. I had told him that if she allowed him to touch her, then I was fine with it but initiate my intention was to get her to expose herself not being finger-fucked by him.

As I was coming to terms with what had happened, in the meantime, she pulled my shorts down and straddled me. Holding my cock at the entrance of her pussy, she slowly lowered herself onto me.

Jamie: ern.... Remember that I said that I knew you saw what Yahya did to me? .... ern.....

She started to fuck herself slowly on my cock and momentarily distracting me from my earlier concern. I nodded blankly.

Jamie: That night, I told you that I saw you watching me..... and after the incident, when I went into your room, I could smell the lingering scent of your sperms..... so I knew you had masturbated to what I was doing..... and that's when I realized that you also enjoyed watching other guys touching me..... ern....

I turned red.

Me: erm..... I....

She placed her finger on my lips.

Jamie: Also, like I said earlier, you were getting greedier with every photo shoot..... ern.....

She continued to ride me slowly.

Jamie: ern..... but initially I thought that you only wanted to get me to expose my body.... ern......but after you saw him touching my nipples, you asked me if I enjoyed it..... ern...... that's when I suspected that you wanted to see him touching me..... ern.... but I needed to confirm my thoughts..... I didn't want to let him touch me if that's not in your plans...... so I decided to ask him directly because I wanted to surprise you... ern.... to fulfill your fantasy.....

I could hardly believe my ears as I realized why she was had went to the balcony. From there, it was easy to figure out what had really happened and why she had allowed him to touch her so readily.

Again Cory came into my mind. She had rejected to fulfill his fetish and escaped to Bali when he had wanted her to expose herself to his friends but now, she had thought that I had planned the entire earlier incident and tried her best to please me even though it was a huge misunderstanding on her part.

Jamie: but he didn't want to tell me...... ern..... unless I agreed to his condition.... ern....

This came as a surprise. He would have gotten to touch her by misleading her but I did not expect that has a condition.

Me: He has a condition?

Jamie: yes.... he wants to fuck me..... ern....

She started to ride a little faster as she said that.

Me: and you agreed?.....

Jamie: no...... I'll never agree to that...... ern..... but I offered him another alternative..... ern..... I proposed to let him touch me again tomorrow.... ern.... ern.....

Me: what?!

I felt my cock getting harder and I could feel that it had started to twitch within her but I responded a little too loudly. She stopped moving and looked at me guiltily.

Jamie: sorry baby.... are you angry that I agreed to the condition without your consensus first?

Me: no I'm not.... I'm just surprised that you would make such a proposal...

Jamie: sorry.... I only countered propose only because I didn't want to have intercourse with him but still needed to know what your plans were so that I could do it for you...... I wasn't thinking too much then, except that I was determined to please you.....

For once, I felt bad about the entire episode.

Me: sorry..... baby.... it must be tough on you.....

She shook her head.

Jamie: I'm not thinking about it anymore..... and I'm glad that I asked him about it and made you happy...... furthermore, I've already told you that I'll do anything for you.... anything....

Even though I already knew how much she loved me, at this moment, I melted further and decided to tell her my real purpose.

Me: baby..... I'm not going to deny that I got aroused when he touched you..... but actually my main intention was only for you to expose yourself......

She blinked her eyes, shocked by my reply.

Jamie: what?! he lied to me?!

Me: yes he did.....

Jamie: are you angry with me then?

Me: nope.... I'm not....

Still sitting on me, she leaned forward and kissed me.

Jamie: thanks baby..... I so stupid.....

Me: no.... I hoped you don't blame me....

Jamie: I didn't......

Me: actually I was thinking that it might help you to get past the Yahya incident..... I knew you were still affected by it and was hoping that this incident could distract your mind so that you would stop blaming yourself about what had happened then.....

Jamie: Yes, you're right.... until this afternoon before I asked you about it, I was still bothered by it.... I felt that I had betrayed you then..... but after I heard your answer today, I've decided to put it behind me so that we can move forward together happily without thinking about it any more.... that's why I said that I'll do anything for you... because you did not blame me even for the slightest bit and actually came back for me..... also I also wanted to make up for my selfishness... for leaving you so abruptly and not considering how you would feel.....

Now with everything cleared up between us, I grabbed her breasts and started to tease her nipples. She sat up and resumed to fuck me slowly again.

Me: so..... How did you feel when he inserted his finger into you?.....

She blushed and started to increase her speed again and I sat up as well.

Jamie: ern.... My mind was blank.... ern..... I didn't think of anything..... ern....

*squish* *squish*

She had started to lubricate more and the sound of our fucking could be heard clearly. It was getting me more aroused as well.

Me: it seemed that you enjoyed it as well.... anyway, since he had agreed to your proposal, I'm totally fine if want you to keep your promise to him tomorrow.....

Suddenly she stopped moving again and I could feel the tension in her.

Jamie: I did it for you and I didn't really enjoy being touched by him.... like I said, I willed myself not to think of anything when he was doing it..... it's my body natural responses..... and he didn't agree to my proposal......

Me: har? so what did he want from you then?

[pussluver]

She looked down on the bed.

Jamie: erm... he said that since he would get to touch me tonight already, just plainly touching me again tomorrow does not appeal to him any more...... and he said is not an equivalent trade compared to fucking me.....

I waited for her to continue.

Jamie: so he asked me what other clothes I had..... and wants me to wear only my nightie and subtly expose myself to Park.... Once I've got Park interests, he would make a bet of SGD10k with Park that he would be able to touch me in front of Park until I have my climax.....

It was a complete bombshell.

Park managed the prostitutes for Jason and based on rumours that I had heard during my NS days, pimps would get to fuck all his stable girls. Even though I had not met him yet, but I was sure that he was definitely as lecherous as Nan and Xi.

If Xi had gotten to get her to orgasm in front of Park, Park would take it that she was a complete slut and I was sure that he would also want to join in the fun at the same time, perhaps even raping her.

I was fine with it if she was being touched by one guy. 2 guys at the same time was one too many and by then it would be useless even if we were to complain to Jason. With 2 witnesses from his right hand men, Jason might not believe us.

However, one thing I was unable to understand was that I would still be in the house and Xi had obviously knew that I would not allow that to happen. I was sure that he would also have a plan to get me out of the way. I asked her about it.

Jamie: erm.... He said we'll do it while you are bathing....

I could hardly believed that she had agreed to this and just like when she made the bet with Yahya in the past, I was sure that she had not thought about the consequences of what Park could potentially do to her. However, I need more information from her.

Me: So, how did he make sure that you'll agree to it tomorrow?

Jamie: He took a naked picture of me when we were in the balcony with his phone as collateral in case I changed my mind..... he said he will delete it before he leaves tomorrow if I kept my side of the bargain..... else he will post it on the internet.....

With all these information, I explained the potential risks to her and she was shocked.

Jamie: I've been touched by Xi but I don't want to be raped by Park!......

She shook her head guiltily and tears were forming in her eyes. Her voice was quivering as she spoke and I could feel her helplessness.

Jamie: *sob*..... sorry.... I screw up....... *sob*..... At that point in time, I only wanted to get the information from him.....*sob*.... I didn't think so much..... even before you explained to me about Park.... I was already having regrets..... *sob*.... I'll tell him that the deal is off..... *sob*.... I don't care if my photo get on the internet..... *sob*

She started to get up but I held her back.

Me: baby.... wait.... let me think first.....

I thought about it.

Paying him the money for his bet was not an issue for me as the amount he intended to bet with Park was only SGD10k.

However, he had planned to execute his plan while I was bathing and there was always a high possibility that I could come out at any time to foil his plan. It was too a big risk just for the 10k.

From what I heard from Dong earlier today, Xi was an avid gambler and even though Jason paid them about 4k each month, if Xi had chalked up substantial loses, he might be desperate for money and I suspected that the amount he lost was 10k.

Although earlier, he had agreed to waive the 3k if I allowed him to touch her, I also remembered how lustful he was when he first saw her in the afternoon. With us being a good friend of Jason, she was something that was unattainable for him. So I guessed that this was the amount he was willing to forsake in order to get his hands on her body.

On a side thought, I wondered if the bet was placed with Nan but that was not a priority.

Aside from money, I also suspected that there could be another possibility. Dong had said that Park was the only one who was attached amongst the 4 of them and I assumed that Park must have boasted to Xi many times about it. Even though Park had not seen Jamie before, I suspected that Xi was planning to use Jamie to show off to Park that he could get to touch her in order to restore his pride.

So it could be either of the scenarios or both.

Of course everything could be pretty straightforward and we could reject him directly but I could not let her nude photo get on to the internet as it might affect her divorce proceedings.

I formed up 2 separate plans of how to tackle the issues and once I was sure that it would work, I told her about it. She wiped away her tears and looked relieved.

Jamie: will he agree to it?

Me: Don't worry....I'll make sure he accepts it......

She was still sitting on top of me but my flaccid cock had long retracted itself from her pussy. I pushed her down on the bed and stuffed my cock into her mouth suddenly.

Me: suck it....

She had a shock initially by my aggressiveness but as I left it in her mouth, she automatically closed her lips on it and started to suck my penis with gusto, bringing it to attention instantly.

Before long, I was fucking her and we reached our climax rather soon.

Jamie: ERRRNNN......baby.... shoot inside me.... ERRRNNNNN......

Me: eh... I don't think we're ready for another baby so soon....

Jamie: ERRRNNN...... it's safe.... I just finished my menses 2 days ago..... ERRRNNNNNKKKKK......

With that, I emptied my load into her.

Exhausted, we collapsed beside each other and slept.

[Boeing737]

No points to up, but up your thread.

[okoyi]

Goodness! The tension built up is killing...hope more chapters per day.

[Insigne]

Fantastic story, camping for updates

[Experience]

Let's go! Carry on the great story

[pussluver]

Originally Posted by okoyi

Goodness! The tension built up is killing...hope more chapters per day.

Dont forget, the more chapters that are being updated, the quicker the story will end

[okoyi]

Originally Posted by pussluver

Dont forget, the more chapters that are being updated, the quicker the story will end

Awww...don't end soon. Or at least have it tie in with the stories in the other stories in the same universe. Especially now revealed Coleen is the same person from the previous story
Coz now you have the male protagonists from the current and previous stories all have a common trait - Smart, sly, and rich. Means they can operate under a great grand show under Uncle's League of Extraordinary Gentlemen. U can form an "Avenger" story of them coming together already.