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TS BRO ILOCK
THANK YOU SO MUCH! A Beautiful story with a perfect ending. Your story had incredible amounts of detail that the scriptwriter, if it were to be made into a movie, would have little to add. |
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Indeed nice ending... BUT... Ilock u left us craving for part2 or europe adventure story... Either way really thank you for the wonderful story but hopefully thrs sequel lol
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Silent reader but I just had to give my thanks to ILOCK for providing such a great read. Few writers would actually have the persistence to complete their stories. Kudos ILOCK
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Great piece of ending bro ILOCK.
But if i remember your last 2 story, this time looks like a new ending style. Usually you will give us a clear cut account what will happpen to the main key persons leh. Allow me to do abit of CSI on the final plot. Like another bro say, there is abit of hint here hint there for us to second guess what the relationship will carry on to. Like Celeste asking James where is her castle. That is a good piece of hint she forgive James and wanted him back. Like Ella and Celeste sporting the same short hair. And almost the same fashon style at Airport. This kind of lead me to think both of them are ok if to share the same boyfriend. Sister unite. And further more, both girls turn up for the Europe trip. In normal realtime suitation, should be only one turn up. The one who want to go with James to carry on the relationship. Guess only Bro ILOCK know how & what will be will be.... Haha bro, keen to share with us the ending ending you know? And last question, is this story based on a real relationship ( with you adding the drama & sex ) send to you by some bro? |
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Great story!
Thank you for the time n effort! Cant wait 4 ur next masterpiece |
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And Bro ILOCK, am still waiting for your Ma Xiao Ling story.
Same with another bro said. |
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What a perfect ending! The amount of space you left us hanging with for our imagination to go wild.. Really superb and yet another fantastic story! Salute!
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http://imageshack.com/a/img633/94/q5gtPT.jpg
Ella: Fuck me James....Fuck me for a while longer.. http://imageshack.com/a/img537/1598/ssUCEP.jpg Their eyes met as James fucked himself to the hilt.... a little something to honour bro ILOCK work
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Ella: Fuck me James....Fuck me for a while longer.. Their eyes met as James fucked himself to the hilt.... a little something to honour bro ILOCK work
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Thank you bro for your nice story.
Really enjoyed it. Just curious, is this story based on a true story narrated by some of our fellow samsters here? Haha. |
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Good good good.
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My humble view. The best story so far by bro ilock.
For a moment I have thought the 3rd gal will be joining for the trip . |
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Nb. This story is really one of your best work.
Sibeh solid. 10/10. Hope you can continue this arch with a sequel and prequel like those solid movies. Thanks for your time that you took to invest in this story. |
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There is only three I wish to say to bro ilock: damn good work,
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Bro Curry puff, your closure means that there is nothing good to look forward to until you start a new story. To be frank, there are many stories out there, local or aboard. In my opinion, its not about the sex, but also the process, passion & pain.
What makes your writing different are the passion & pain one has to goes through in any relationship. Its not about getting the fruit, it must includes getting or stealing the fruit, peeling the skin & at long last getting a good bite out of it. I sincerely hopes to see more of your writings, which you manage to infused all the good points above, in the near future whether its a new story or Part 2 in the making.
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