My good friend's marriage

[ludwig19]

Actually it didnt matter who it was. James had a threesome with the girls AND got together with one of them in the end instead of losing both, cant get any better haha.

[DreamMaster1985]

I don't mean to sound rude or what, but I don't really care who he ended up with. I'm more interested in Don and the ending for him. Did he go to jail for attempted rape or something?

Kudos to James who decided to be with Ella or Celeste, whichever party that you guys assumed he will be with. And thank you TS for the story in which you have woven for us to enjoy.

[Megatronzombie]

I dont often post in sbf anymore but i must say this to bro ilock:

Kudos on the ending! It is frustrating yet impressive at the same time. I would say a fitting ending to this great story. I believe the ending could be whatever you think it would be. Both choices leads to so much more and nothing less. If you like the playful mysterious type, its Ella for you. If you like the pure gentle and virgin type, its Celeste for you. Whatever the ending is, i say done, bro ilock. The story's character growth, pacings, actions and sex are all very well carried out. If only this can be a movie! Hahah!!

[Bionic73]

I believe Don did not attempt to rape Ella.
From the flow of the story, Ella is a changed women after Don affair with Mimi...
She became manipulative during the trip and the threesome was an attempt by her to force James into choosing between her and Celeste...

A very cunning women that should be avoided at arms length.
Hints have been drop during ending where James have cold chills & scary thought when he thinks back the whole situation from the beginning about Ella.

I hope James end up with Celeste as the ending.
Either way, the 3 way relationship (or 4 way if include Don) is already mess up.
Whoever gals that James chose, there will always be a thorn in their heart regarding the threesome session that happens.

It would take extreme effort to build and maintain the trust if James end up with either one...

Originally Posted by DreamMaster1985

I don't mean to sound rude or what, but I don't really care who he ended up with. I'm more interested in Don and the ending for him. Did he go to jail for attempted rape or something?

[SantaKlaus]

TS, thank you for sharing.

[Secres77]

well done and thanks bro ilock for the story, great buildup and smart ending

definitely to think from the girl's perspective, James would be "safer" to choose Ella. if they end up together, she would go through a healing process and maybe in time get her relationship with Celeste back to how it was. due to their history, they share many more things in common and have a sense of close friend-turned-gf feel which most people seek for.

but if James ends up with Celeste, sure she's the one everyone prefers (me included). that's because she's loyal, because she's safe. she gave him a second chance where no normal girl would. she gave him her virginity. but after the final event, would she ever fully trust him again? seems unlikely. and she would never trust Ella the same way too. the pains just build up for her and might bring her down a road of mental deterioration.

but all that said, Celeste & Ella ftw :P

[badboy]

What an open ended ending to this rollercoaster story!


Think ilock wish to let us have our own ending and finish his story in our hearts.


Ella is e more "interesting" choice as James is attracted towards her in a primal desire way.


She would be my choice if I used my small head to choose.


Celest is the "safe" choice where she would be the happy ever after tt most people would choose to marry.


She would be my choice if I used my big head to choose.


The logical side of me thinks its Ella due to the clue tt ilock left, intentionally or unintentionally, depending on how you read it.


During last conversation tt James had with both girls in the ending section, Ella mentioned she was going to sleep.


And James choice was sleeping when she opened her door for him.


Thus I deduce he chose Ella.


Am going to imagine the wet fucking he is going to give her to punish her after going into her room with a tissue in hand


Merry Xmas guys!
Badboy

[Fudgiewudgie]

Nice.. Why all good things always come to an end!

[LimSiaSway]

Thanks bro ilock for the wonderful story

[killerBone]

I hope it is Celeste.

[blade]

Originally Posted by badboy

What an open ended ending to this rollercoaster story!


Think ilock wish to let us have our own ending and finish his story in our hearts.


Ella is e more "interesting" choice as James is attracted towards her in a primal desire way.


She would be my choice if I used my small head to choose.


Celest is the "safe" choice where she would be the happy ever after tt most people would choose to marry.


She would be my choice if I used my big head to choose.


The logical side of me thinks its Ella due to the clue tt ilock left, intentionally or unintentionally, depending on how you read it.


During last conversation tt James had with both girls in the ending section, Ella mentioned she was going to sleep.


And James choice was sleeping when she opened her door for him.


Thus I deduce he chose Ella.


Am going to imagine the wet fucking he is going to give her to punish her after going into her room with a tissue in hand


Merry Xmas guys!
Badboy

Totally agree with you. I think he chose Ella. There can't be any happily ever after even if he did chose Celeste.

[tarma69]

Originally Posted by blade

Totally agree with you. I think he chose Ella. There can't be any happily ever after even if he did chose Celeste.

Seems like a choice between the devil and the deep blue sea...

[Dumbasslor]

Bro iLock

Thank you for your story, it's been an entertaining story thus far! With regards to the ending... take a bow bro, take a bow!

Really love it. Now for my personal view, which I dont know if it's appreciated; I feel it's going to be Ella. Because there's just so much feelings and emotions with her that you dont get with Celeste.

Thank you once again for the entertaining story. Unfortunately I've already given u brownie points ahaha, can't give to you again. I await your next story if you are still writing!

Bro J aka Dumbasslor

[skyline2000]

What a wonderful story this is.

But all great stories has to come an end. Sigh

[fabregas04]

Got a feeling it's don room haha