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#166
06-01-2011, 09:32 PM
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Re: Until Now I Still Can’t Forget Her………
TS, your story is addictive and it evokes the readers' emotion.
Up to this point of the story, seems like we have to brace for the bad turning of events.. already standby hanky for tears..  Btw, do not be bothered by those jokers who brought down your thread rating from 5 to 3 stars. Yours is definitely a 5 stars piece of work! Keep it up! 
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#167
06-01-2011, 10:49 PM
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I'm addicted to the story, follow this thread daily. It invokes memories. Why rating drop suddenly?
Bro TS, I support you pls cont. Don't stop.
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#169
07-01-2011, 12:39 AM
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I guess the key word here could be the phrase/word "familiar" ??
GM: Ah Kuan si boh…le chin bin saek leh… (Jenny is it….you look familiar) Could it be that you're somehow related? ke ke , cheers bro ................
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#171
07-01-2011, 01:40 PM
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Bro, you dont find girls like these these days...
most are only concern about what you can and have sacriface for them inside of offering to sacriface for you (man), thats why most local singapore girls are a big turn off for me and many bros here. She is a keeper and gem in this sense. Sadly, most people only learn to treasure people and things after we really lost them.... if there is a lesson to be learnt, then it should be to treasure who is with us now, even if it dont seems this way. No wonder you cannot forget her... good story pls continue. <<Jenny: Then I tell you what….I will resign and find another job….. if it makes it easier for you. Me: Will you? Jenny: Of course I will…I will do anything for you. Me: But you will have to start all over again as operator…. a big pay cut Jenny: Don’t worry about me….. it’s not difficult to get another job…pay no issue….if can’t find one then….. you feed me lor.. Me: Feed you no problem as long as you don’t make me pok kai… Jenny: I already sacrificed so much for you….. James, you must promise to take care of me ok? Me: I will…..promise>>
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07-01-2011, 02:51 PM
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 You are such a good writer. I just saw this thread and keeps reading.....faster faster post the concluding episode.
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07-01-2011, 08:11 PM
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07-01-2011, 08:19 PM
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Thank you all for your support and encouragement. I am disappointed that this thread got downgraded…but what to do?
Enjoy reading the conclusion of Part I………. Continuing my story……… Towards the end of the dinner, my stomach was not holding the food well. I saw Jenny sitting with my grandma and mother chatting happily. I told Jenny that I need to excuse myself to go to the toilet. In less than half and hour, I was done. My stomach felt much better. When I went back to the hall, to look for Jenny, I was shocked. Jenny was no where to be seen. My grandma and mother’s facial expression tells it all. Something serious must have happened. What is it????...........In a panic state, I asked………. In Hokkien…. Me: Ah Ma….Where is Ah Kuan? GM: Left liao… Me: What happened….why she did not tell me? Mother: You 2 cannot see each other from now on…..you stay away from her……in a raised tone I was stunned by mother’s sudden outburst and negative attitude towards Jenny… Me: Why…I thought you both like her. GM: Cannot means cannot…you want to make me angry is it?........in a agitated tone Me: Why…..What did she do….. Mother: Don’t ask……just cut off all contacts with her from today…….raising her voice Me: What is wrong with you all….Did you chase her away…you are being unreasonable…………..practically shouting With that, I dashed out of the house to look for Jenny. My grandma and mother were calling out to me to come back, but I wasn’t listening. I was only interested in finding Jenny. I need to know what happened… From a distance, not far from the main road, I saw the familiar figure of Jenny squatting beside a fire hydrant. I ran up to her. I was shocked into disbelief when I saw her ….. To this day, I can never forget the look on her face ….. Tears were flowing very freely, like 2 small black streams down both sides of her cheeks, dripping onto her dress. Her mascara ran very badly. It was a pitiful sight. The moment she saw me, she stood up, hugged me very tightly and wailed loudly in the most heart wrenching manner, so loud that I thought she might collapse any moment. I have never seen her so upset like this before. She was full of grief and anguish. It was distressing just to hear her cry…… Jenny: Wahhhhhhhhh……….Wahhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!! Me: It’s ok…it’s ok…I am here It took her a good 5 mins or so before she finally managed to calmed down a little and stopped crying. I really wanted to know what happened while I was away. Why did things changed so suddenly? I offered her my handkerchief. She took it and wiped her face. The combination of ran mascara, makeup and tears, made her face look unattractive. I helped her cleaned it up. My handkerchief was wet with her tears and back mascara in no time. She was still visibly upset. Even after she stopped crying, her body continued to tremble as she speaks….. As she sat on the fire hydrant, she related what happened earlier to me……... Jenny: After…after you left, your granny asked me about my….my family…she sniffed loudly. Me: Then? Jenny: I…I told her…then….then she asked me if my father’s name…is Ah Ban…......she continued Me: How did she know? Jenny: That’s why I’m shocked….I say how you know Me: Then? Jenny: Then she tell me……..as she started to cry again Me: Tell you what? Jenny: Do you…Do you…know that your grandfather and my father are brothers? I was stunned beyond words…………….disbelief Me: What? How can that be? Jenny: Yes…it’s true…she says….she says she now remember that saw me at my auntie’s funeral last year. Me: Oh my god….what is happening…... Jenny: I also…also cannot accept it, but…but it’s true. Your grandma knows my father, mother and everything…. down to the last detail….. Me: Oh my God….how is this possible? My little perfect world started to crumple right before me. My mind was in a turmoil….like a whirlpool…..trying to grapple with the facts… How could there be such a coincidence…. Then it’s started to make some sense….we bore the same surnames…..the funeral of her auntie and my grandma’s cousin….Oh my God…. If my grandfather and her father are brothers…..that means Jenny is…… my aunt and we have sinfully committed….. incest……..OH NO………this can’t be happening… The very girl I want to spend my life with…..turned out to be my aunt….I am dumfounded….I was hoping that there was some kind of mistake or maybe it’s just a bad dream…..This whole thing is so disturbing….a disaster of epic proportion blowing up right in my face. ….. Then Jenny broke the train of disturbing thoughts….. Jenny: Can we ….go somewhere quiet…just the 2 of us…I am very tired. Me: Ok… ok. I got to the main road hail a cab and I told the driver, the only place I wanted to go right that very moment….. East Coast Park…by the beach to reflect what happened tonight. Through out the journey until we find an empty bench, Jenny did not say a word. I, on the other hand was confused, not ready to accept what was painted right in front of me….there must be some kind of a mistake..….maybe we can elope to some unknown place that no one will know… I was in a state of denial…. At East Coast Park, Jenny just leaned against me listening to the waves pounding onto the sand, silent, deep in her own little world. After a good 30mins or so…. Jenny: James….what should we do now? Me: I seriously don’t know Jenny….I know I love you…but ….I also know it’s not right…..you and me. Jenny: James….I love you too…I don’t think I can live without you….. Me: Jenny….I….. Suddenly, she kissed me on my lips. But this time I felt different. In the past, it would have been hot and passionate, leading to sexual consummation…but not this time….just a simple kiss…..I keep reminding myself, she is my aunt. I needed to think of a solution out of this fiasco. After a long internal deliberation, I decided it is best to end it no matter how painful or sad it maybe, as our families and the society at large will not be able accept us together as a couple. But I need to do it gently with Jenny as she I am afraid she may not be able to take it. Me: Jenny…I think we need to cool off for a while and think through this. Jenny: I don’t know.. Me: Jenny…look…. I know it hurts you as much as I, but we need to handle this right. Jenny: I cannot accept it… Me: Me too…. but we have to…no one will accept us together…your are my aunt and….it’s …it’s….incest Jenny: Don’t say….please don’t say anymore….. Me; Ok…. but you have to accept it. Jenny: How…. Me: Jenny look….I don’t like it too….but we have no other choice.. Jenny: James….Maybe…..maybe…..we can still see each other….stay in touch Me: Ok…….maybe…. as friends Jenny: Friends….ya right….friends……can we? ….... she laughed sarcastically. Jenny stared blankly ahead. Then she turned and hugged me. I held her tight. Remain as friends…..I knew it was not possible, I also know she felt the same way too. Even without looking at her face, I know she was crying silently …….. I don’t know how long we were there. It seems eternity, but to us it was probably our last night together. Things will never be the same again after tonight. Fate has played such a cruel joke on us. Our innocent loving relationship has suddenly turned into a disaster of catastrophic proportion. No words can describe the feeling of falling in love for the very first time and having it end this way. My heart was bleeding and there was no stopping the flow. Soon it was daybreak. It was time for us to part. We were both as calm as we can be. Jenny says she want to go home by herself. I respected her decision. I gave her a tight hug…. Me: You take good care of yourself ….. Jenny: You also…. With that, she turned and walked away without looking back. I was hoping that she would, but then again, I wouldn’t want this pain to prolong unnecessarily. I knew she was crying as our hearts were linked. I silently stood there watching her, as her lone figure slowly disappeared out from my sight…… the love of my life. At that very moment, tears just rolled down my eyes. I wanted so much to run after her, but I stopped myself. I knew that it was time to let her go….. The date…..10 Feb……4 days shy of Valentine’s Day. ………..to be continued
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#175
07-01-2011, 08:59 PM
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What a good written story my friend , as I read , i really feel the heartpain too ..
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#176
07-01-2011, 09:39 PM
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Oh my god!!
This is like lightning strike. But I guess there is no other way out except breaking up. You made the right decision, in a moral sense. Still got continuation? 
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#177
07-01-2011, 10:16 PM
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Re: Until Now I Still Can’t Forget Her………
i registered because of this story...
i do hope to read more....
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#179
07-01-2011, 11:34 PM
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haiz.. so so so 无奈！
Hope that both Jenny and you have found own's happiness after the incident. Thank you for sharing with us a great story!
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#180
08-01-2011, 12:12 AM
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Hey bro what a turn of event. Really feel your pain but I know there's nothing we can do nothing in situations like this. Pls cont your story I know every bro here wants to know what happened in the end.
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