My attempt at writing fiction... - Page 2

hilltower · #16 03-11-2012, 12:14 AM

Keep it up...waiting for more.

curiouslala · #17 03-11-2012, 09:27 AM

Wah..
Very nice..
It seems fun to deflower virgin boy..
Just too bad that many of those virgin boy isn't so innocent anymore..

studdyme · #18 03-11-2012, 10:00 AM

camping for more!

lammpeb · #19 03-11-2012, 12:12 PM

Jie i am very horny now....camping for more

EnigmaofSorrow · #20 03-11-2012, 04:44 PM

Celine teased his dickhead with her fingers, going in circles then up and down. She really had no idea why she was doing it. Perhaps it was to pay him back for making her feel good. She did not know that the mere act of him suckling was enough for him. She was now introducing him to a whole new sensation that he never felt before.

J: Jie! Why are you touching me?!

Celine shushed him. James lay back onto her lap. He had never felt this way before. He never dared to touch himself whenever he got hard. He thought it was weird and abnormal. No one had taught him about this, and certainly no one had touched him this way before.

Barely a couple of seconds later, Celine felt a spurt of warm, sticky fluid coat her fingers.

J: Jie! Ahhh! What did you do?

James cock was throbbing badly and desperate to get out of the constraints of his briefs.

Celine sensed this and pulled down his shorts and briefs. She gasped.

Slowly throbbing upwards was James penis, fully erect with youthful vigour, coated with the thickest semen she had ever seen in her life slowly dribbling down. All 8 inches of it. And it was not long and thin either. She gulped. This was the biggest cock she had ever seen.

James tried to pull up his shorts to hide his erection. She did not let him.

She held down his foreskin and wrapped the fingers of her other hand around the head, spreading his semen around. It was James turn to moan as she wanked him slowly. She felt like she was holding her softball bat, back when she was in Junior College, except this "bat" was shorter, and slightly thinner.

J: Ahhh.... Jie... Stop.... I can't take it anymore... Please... Ahhh....

Celine continued wanking him, slowly, but with a considerable amount of pressure. James was squirming like a worm.

A few strokes later, Celine saw that his testicles had retracted in preparation for blast off.

James let out a sustained guttural groan as the eruption occured. Celine tried to aim the weapon towards his body to direct the shot. The thick stream landed on his chest. She continued wanking, effectively emptying his tank as shot after shot was released. James lower body shuddered uncontrollably. He started crying. What had she done to him? He had never experienced such a thing before.

C: James? What's wrong?

J: What did you do to me?

C: I believe that was your first ejaculation.

J: It felt so good.

C: Then why are you crying?

J: I don't know. I'm scared.

She stroked his hair with her clean hand.

C: Silly boy.

Celine went to get tissues and passed them to James before she entered the attached bathroom to wash her hands.

As she scrubbed them, she felt a bit embarrassed as she kept thinking about the size of his manhood. There was no way he was only 15 years old. James appeared behind her and hugged her from behind. She felt it press against her butt. More dirty thoughts entered her mind again as she fantasized riding him, his monster filling her up more than nicely. She envisioned lying on her back, spreading her legs, and guiding the innocent little boy in.

She turned around and James immediately attacked her breasts. She was not prepared for his sudden move and had to grab the sink to prevent herself from falling back.

C: James! What are you doing??!

J: Jie, I like you alot.

C: James. Stop.

But she did not push him away and let herself be taken over by her horny desires.

Instead, she led him back to the room.

C: Lie down.

James did as he was told. Celine removed her shorts but left her panties on and climbed on top of him.

She kissed his neck and nibbled on his earlobes. She felt his hard cock throbbing. She ran her tongue down his neck and teased his nipples. James squirmed and moaned. He had yet to understand what it really meant to be horny. But now, all he wanted was for Celine to wank him, and make him ejaculate again.

She kissed his stomach, went down to his hipbones and inner thighs. James tensed up again, expecting her to grab his cock and let him cum. Celine went one better.

J: HOLY SHIT!!!

James thought he died and went to heaven the second Celine wrapped her soft lips around his dickhead. The sensations he felt when she sucked him were indescribable. She stroked his shaft with her fingers and started licking his cock like a popsicle.

J: Jie! Don't stop! I'm going to ejaculate!

She wrapped her lips around his head again and massaged his balls. James groaned and released another thick stream into her mouth. She kept it in and continued sucking. Strangely, his virginal sperm tasted good and she wanted more. James groaned again. Celine sucked it all up and swallowed, before licking his cock clean.

She lay down next to him.

C: That's called a blowjob. And next time, just say you are cumming. Ejaculate is too formal.

J: Yes Jie. I'll keep that in mind.

Then he attacked her breasts again.

Lennyberg · #21 05-11-2012, 09:29 PM

Great writing as always! please continue!

Putin · #22 06-11-2012, 06:04 AM

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Originally Posted by Lennyberg

Great writing as always! please continue!

Totally agreed

rubberduckygirl · #23 06-11-2012, 10:16 PM

fiction or non fiction.
i gotta admit. your stories get my undivided attention every single time.
thumbups from your loyal reader! =)

EnigmaofSorrow · #24 08-11-2012, 11:32 AM

Celine could not explain why James was making her feel so good. Her boyfriend did suck on her breasts numerous times before, but the feeling was different. James was gentle, and perhaps the innocence of it all turned her on when it should not have been the case.

She lay back and let him suckle. Perhaps he was hoping for milk? She giggled at her own absurd thoughts.

She took his hand and brought it to her lady parts.

C: Touch me James.

J: How?

C: Gently...

Celine removed her soaked panties and spread her legs. James stroked her the way he would his pet cat. If he had one that is. Celine wondered how she should instruct him in this area.

C: Wait. Watch.

She slid her own hand down and stroked her labia gently, before inserting a finger in slowly. She had pleasured herself with her fingers and numerous other objects since she was 12. But it did feel weird doing it in front of someone else. And her underaged student no less.

James watched in awe as she moved her finger in and out slowly, each stroke bringing soft moans as she slowly increased the pace. Her finger glistened with her wetness.

J: Jie can I try?

Celine removed her finger and nodded. James replicated the exact movements Celine did. She moaned louder as his finger was obviously bigger. She started to rub her clit.

James soon picked that up as well and gave her a hand. Celine closed her eyes and grabbed the sheets. James was adept at this, and he refused to stop. He was patient, unlike her boyfriend, who would give her a couple of obligatory strokes, before capping himself, then plunging in like a jackhammer, not even bothering to vary his strokes, pace, depth of penetration, and even position.

C: Oh James.... Ahhh... That feels so good... Ahhh... Faster.... Yes.... James.... You make me feel so good... Ahhhhhh...

He then caught her by surprise and went down on her with his gentle tongue.

There was no way he could not be experienced at
this. James skillful tongue worked its magic on her clit, while still fingering her. He teased her clit with deliberate licks.

C: A little slower... Rub it... Yes..... Oh yes!!!!

Her juices flowed like a breaking dam. James lapped it all up, savouring every bit of it. She tasted good, and he wanted so badly to please her as she had done for him.

For Celine, sex was not a new experience for her. But somehow James made her feel like a virgin all over again. His gentle caress. His soft touch. His awkward yet absolutely tantalising movements. She wanted so bad for him to take her and tear her apart with his monster. And yet she did not want to stop him. Waves of pleasure hit her entire body. He was definitely not going to stop anytime soon.

Celine felt the unmistakable feeling deep within her. Her face was flushed, and her heart racing. Her boyfriend had never made her feel this way before with his dick, needless to mention his fingers or tongue.

She wanted him in her so bad. She wanted his 8 inch monster to pound her like she never was before. She wanted the feel of his virgin cock probing her still-tight pussy.

But first, she had to get over the apprehensiveness and somewhat immorality of fucking her student.