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Kyle was disturbed about the dreams. She had been having the same dream ever since she bumped into me.

Kyle: What have you found?

Bodyguards: We are still looking, boss.

Kyle: You are useless. Utterly useless.

Bodyguard A: But it seems that one of our men said they seen him loitering around Jordan, especially around a restaurant.

Kyle: Then? Work on it? Must I always be the one to instruct you? You dogs!

She said as she slammed the table.

Kyle: You better buck up if not you will end up begging in the streets.

The bodyguards stood in fear as they quickly ran off hot on my trails.

She walked and slammed the door and Lance, her private bodyguard followed suit.

Lance: Do you need me to settle this?

Kyle: No. Let the dogs do it. I will need you tomorrow. It's the full moon tomorrow night. Make sure you are by my side. You know what to bring me.

Lance: Yes my highness.

Kyle: Now go. I need some time by myself.

Lance bowed and left.

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The moon was looking bright and round. It was a cloudless night and it shone brilliantly.

Lance escorted someone that whose head was covered by a black sack and hands tied to Kyle's room. He was looking quite young. Slim and medium built. He must have been around 16. And the person Lance brought was Jin.

Jin: Where am I? Why am I here?

Lance untied Jin's hands and took off the sack, then walked away.

Lance: Stay here.

Jin: But why?

Lance closed the door and locked it from the outside.

Jin looked around the dark room as no lights were switched on. The only light that was shed was the moonlight. He walked cautiously, his heart beating. There was this feeling of curiosity and fear. Just what was he doing here? The only thing he could remember was that he was knocked out by Lance and the next thing he knew he was brought here. He took a while to adapt to the surroundings.

He then noticed movement.

Jin: Who's there?

He looked around. But there was none.

He started to panic.

Jin: Who's there? Don't play with me. Come out.

No movement.

Jin walked in fear and tripped. He landed on the huge bed.

He tried to get up but suddenly he felt someone tearing his clothes.

"I want you .... I want you so badly!"

The voice sounded really desperate, with heavy breathing and panting.

His clothes were torn open as his buttons flew all over the place. He could feel someone licking on his nipples while her hand grasped his privates. Then she stopped and ripped his belt off, pulling down his pants and boxers instantly. Immediately she switched positions, taking in his dick fully into her mouth as she buried her pinkie towards Jin's mouth.

Jin had not had any sexual encounters and so he stood stationary. He almost suffocated when he heard.

"Suck my pussy you slave. Use your tongue."

Jin was feeling really good with someone sucking deep on his dick. He had wished this feeling to go on?

Jin thought is this the thing that his friends always talked about? Blowjob? The intensity of her blow increased and still he remained motionless. And he tried to stick out his tongue towards her pinkie. It was soaking wet.

She moaned. That seductive tone. That intriguing voice was something he had fantasized about, even when he was watching porn.

He buried his face and extended his tongue to go deeper into her pussy. The moaning became heavier as she sucked more forcefully on his dick. She squirted into his mouth as he gagged.

She turned around and while he was recovering, she stuffed her right breasts into his mouth, and his instinct was to play with her nipples like what he saw in porn movies.

He caught a glimpse of the lady. Angelic. Simply beautiful as she tossed her hair to one side, letting him on a full view of her left breast. Her nipples were positioned in the centre of her breasts, and the nice moonlight shone onto her delicate tiny pink nipples. What he in paradise he thought and continued to suck on her soft melon. Her hand grabbed his right and positioned it at her left breasts, hinting him to fondle.

He squeezed gently on her well shaped C melons, his fingers brushing against her sensitive pink nipple head. Her head arched as she gave a loud breath. He continued to knit the soft dough, thoroughly enjoying himself. Her hands backstretched and held his rocket, rocking it sensuously.

Her butt moved downwards towards his prick as she stood up halfway. Held up his rod and guided it to her pinkie. His dickhead touched the lips of her vagina, feeling that moist texture of her soft succulent lips and it went in easily, deeper into her. He could feel the warmness of her insides until she sat on him. The very thought of his rod going totally into her made him nearly go into convulsions.

Kyle took control over everything and rode hungrily on him with fierce banging. Piak piak piak sounds echoed all over the walls. Even Lance who knew what was going on was trying to hear what was going on inside. He placed his ears on the doors and masturbated. But the sounds he heard was soft and he could only use his erotic imagination. Each and every bodyguard wanted so badly to be in bed with Kyle but none dared.

Lance wanted so much to charge in and take over but he controlled himself.

Jin was enjoying himself and he let Kyle take control. Sex for the first time to him was really good. Such a pretty angel and a killer body. He would die a glad man he thought.

Sweat broke out between the two, especially for Jin and he couldn't take it anymore.

Jin: I'm cumming!!!!

Kyle took it out and gave him a handjob.

"So this is what feels like a handjob.." Jin thought.

But something felt different.

Kyle's last finger seemed to be positioned on the veins of his prick.

Jin: I'm cumming!

With a single stroke, Kyle slit the veins and he ejaculated, together with blood. His blood splurt out suddenly and was bleeding nonstop.

He could hear Kyle laughing in a high pitch voice.

Kyle: Do you think you can live to tell others that I screwed you? Go to hell!

She said as she took the knife on her side table and slit his throat. She enjoyed looking at how Jin struggled and died with his eyes fixed on her. She licked the blood on the blades and went to take a shower.

Lance seemed to know that her game was over and he went in.

She dressed up and told Lance to clean up the mess. She was wearing a black see through nightie. Lance immediately got a hardon upon seeing her but he tried his best to resist.

Kyle: Feed him to the crocodiles.

Lance nodded as she left.


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I'm sorry for the boring content. Will try to sum everything up within three chapters instead of dragging.
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I'm sorry for the boring content. Will try to sum everything up within three chapters instead of dragging.

Don't think that it's boring.. Rather, the plot is something unheard of
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Lance: Your highness, we found the guy. He always frequents the restaurant in Jordan. And he seems to have a relationship with one of the waitress there. And there is always this girl beside him. I believe I know her name, Leng. She's always clubbing and sleeping around. But she seemed to stop when she met this guy. Some of our men heard his name Glacier.

Kyle crossed her legs, revealing her bush as Lance as he tried to avoid eye contact but he wanted to take a quick glance. Kyle didn't seem to mind as she let him take a glimpse when she covered herself.

Kyle: Glacier. It sounds familiar.

She thought for a while.

Kyle: Go and get Leng here. Do not let Glacier know. I want you to take her here.

Lance: Yes, my queen.

He walked out and stretched.

Lance picked up his phone and dialed.

Lance: Hello?

Leng: Hi.

Lance: Leng? It's me Lance? Do you still remember me? We met at the club?

Leng: Of course I remember. How can I forget a handsome and fit man? What's up?

Lance: Nothing really. It's just that I thought I give you a ring to ask you for dinner tonight. Today marks an important day. It's our one year 'anniversary' since I met you at the club.

Leng blushed and Glacier looked at her weirdly. She used her fingers to brush off Glacier.

Leng: Wow. I didn't even noticed that.

Lance: I tend to be one who remembers alot of things.

Leng: Wow. You impress me.

Lance: So would you be free tonight for dinner?

Leng: Of course I am. What time?

They discussed the details and then hung up.

Leng was in high spirits that moment as she said to go home early.

Glacier: Wow you are on cloud nine today.

Leng: Shut up. Can't I have suitors? You are already Fong's property. So that leaves me with nothing. And stop being so cuddly with her. It disgusts me. If you want to do that, hug her behind close doors.

Fong and Glacier laughed as Leng went off hastily.

Lance grinned.

*Can't believe how naive this bitch is, all it takes is some sweet talk and she's hooked like drugs*

Leng took her time showering, and dressing up. She wore a long black dress with a generous V in front, baring her deep cleavage. She was not wearing any bra as she wanted Lance to get a glimpse of her nicely shaped peaks. She then decided to go without any panties nor g string. Just before she stepped out of the shower room, she placed on of her legs onto the toilet bowl and started to shave off her pubic hair.

Streaks and streaks of curly short hair dropped to the floor as she turned on the shower head and washed it away, then putting some moisturizer.

Leng: Now I'm all fresh and good for a performance tonight! I'm so going to eat you till your legs turn wobbly Lance.

She put on her long fake mascaras, and a deep red lipstick, bun up her hair and put on the gold with pearl earrings and a matching necklace with a pearl hanging down her cleavage. She sat on her bed and wore the black lacey stockings which added a tinge of naughtiness to her. She then added the last tinge of gold to her eyelids and put on some gold glitter on her neck and breasts. She took out her favorite Anna Sui Wish parfum and sprayed on her neck and chest.

She brought out a nice black handbag that matched her dress and placed all her stuffs inside, including a box of condoms and lubricant. The moment she clipped the handbag, her phone rang and she heard a honk.

Lance was below her apartment. She waved and hurriedly put on her high heels.

Glacier was on his way back when he saw Leng in a distance and the guy pciking her up. He was driving a red ferrari where he kissed Leng before he led her in the car.

Glacier felt happy for Leng but there was this intuition that was telling him something's not right. But he just let it go. The sound of the Ferrari was heard clearly as Lance drove off.

Lance: Wow you look really stunning. I might have gone into an accident looking at you.

He then purposely sped and brake, sped and brake so he could see Leng's breasts jingle and pop out from her dress.

Leng: You are naughty.

Lance: Well you are the one who dressed like that.

Leng gave him a light tap on his thigh as Lance squeezed her breasts. LEng automatically lowered herself as she went towards Lance's pants and pulled down his zippers.

Lance: Not now. I'm driving...

Leng (with his dick in her mouth): Den yew con-cen-trate ooon dry ving. I wheel help yew fix yore gear.

Lance sped and turned up to the top of the park where he dragged Leng out and brought her behind his car with her butt facing him and he pushed up her dress and immediately shafted it deep into her.

Leng: Ooh... fuck... oh fuck.... it feels really good...

Lance had been keeping his urge of screwing Kyle so much that he took Leng as her substitute. He slapped Leng so hard on her butts that it turned red but Leng seemed to be enjoying so much that she liked the pain.

Leng: Oh gosh! That's it. Fuck me! Fuck me!!

Leng started to move her butt to synchronize with Lance's thrust, and there seemed to be chemistry between the two bodies. Both yearning so much for lust. She rubbed her own breasts and squirted.

Leng: I'm coming!

Lance was still enjoying himself with his eyes closed, fantasizing that the one he is screwing was Kyle, with her perfect body and tone.

Lance looked at Leng: What's your name?

Leng: I'm Leng, master.

Lance: No. You are Kyle.

Leng: Yes master. I'm Kyle, fuck me master.

The moment he heard Leng saying she was Kyle, his momentum and velocity increased almost triple fold. He was sweating with drips of sweat dripping on Leng and Leng was enjoying herself.

Lance: Kyle, I'm cumming!

Leng: Where do you want to cum on me?

Lance: Your face.

Leng immediately turned around and opened her mouth wide for Lance to mouth fuck her before he ejaculated on her face. He fired a huge load where Leng's makeup smudged a little but he enjoyed the sight of his cum streaking down her facial contours.

Lance: Suck me clean.

Leng opened her mouth and licked Lance clean and sucked out the remaining semen. Lance zipped up his pants as he walked back to the car. Leng walked unsteadily to the car and when she was about to open the door, he sped off.

Then a black sack came over her head and she was knocked unconscious.

Just then Kyle's other bodyguards ransacked the restaurant where Fong was working. They kidnapped her and left a note to Glacier.

Note: Try rescuing Leng and Fong. I will be waiting. Kyle.

The address was written underneath.

Fong's brother was badly beaten up but he managed to call Glacier.

Fong's brother: Save Fong...

He said as he passed out and Glacier immediately ran to grab a cab towards the restaurant.

Glacier was shocked to see the restaurant tables and chairs smashed to bits and maybe laid there with cuts all over.

The sound of ambulance sirens could be heard and Glacier took the note that Kyle's bodyguards left. He kissed his pocket watch.

Glacier: Bless me Elizabeth. This is going to get really nasty.

He said as he walked towards the location the Kyle wrote with his fists clenched tightly. It has been so long since he last wanted to see bloodshed.

Glacier: Kyle, if you want it, don't regret it.

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Glacier tightened the shoelace of his boots and was well on his way to the destination. He hated the feeling that Fong was kidnapped as it reminded him of the past where Kayla separate them but putting the curse of stone heart which led to immortality and taking away Elizabeth's youth, causing her to die. But luckily for Glacier, he could at least see the Elizabeth till she breathed her last. Would the same scenario happen all over again?

Hell no. Glacier thought and the more he thinks the more furious he got.

He arrived at the scene around 20 minutes. There he was at an abandoned old warehouse. He walked and stepped on the puddle of water. He pushed open the warehouse door with the squeaking sound of rusted hinges. A huge gang of thuds stood there with their eyes locked on Glacier. ANd they were holding knives, rods and weapons.

But what caught his attention was that he saw two ladies being tied up and hung in mid air. He then saw Kyle sitting at the second storey with Lance beside her.

Kyle: Oh my oh my. You are quite fast ain't you? Now I remember everything. Are you going to kill me again huh Glacier? Do you think you can?

She shrieked with a sinister laughter.

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Kyle: Get him!

Kyle said as she looked at her fingernails, studying the details of her nail painting.

The entire gang charged towards Glacier. It felt almost like the war wedged between his men against the witch Kayla, except that he is alone. He dodged the blows of the attackers, easily sending them flying to the floor, and taking the chance to grab the staff that the attacker dropped. One by one the attackers fall. But Glacier was losing a little due to the sheer number of attackers. They stabbed him and tried to cut him deep in the chest but he managed to dodge in time. He stood in the circle of the circle of hungry attackers that resembled like that of hungry wolves.

But for Glacier, his wounds healed and he was back in the defense. He did not want to kill but the atmosphere was didn't allow him to. He shouted at the top of his voice.

Glacier: Kyle!!!!!

His voice shook Kyle, sending the fear vibrations down her spine. Her goosebumps stood as she stared at him.

Glacier took hold of the parangs and there he started the blood pool. Slashing his victims like rabbits against lions. Limbs flew, heads broke, blood splattered all over and now the attackers slowed their attacks due to fear of him. His face drowned in blood, eyes bloodshot. After all the attacking Glacier did not seem to tire. His eyes now totally changed, those that were tasked to kill without hesitation.

He continued his rampage until the attackers ran for their life, running out of the warehouse in fear.

Glacier stood there, carrying the blood stained parang with blood dripping from the edges. He was sweating and his hair was wet, with splattered blood over his face that made him look like the Count.

Glacier: Release them Kyle. If you know what's best for you.

Kyle: You think threats will work on me? Well let's see how you fare then.

Lance went over and lighted a candle towards the rope binding Leng.

Kyle: Let's see how you can save her.

Kyle snapped her fingers and Glacier heard a click. In the shadows he could hear footsteps with a growl. And a duo black panthers came into view. Eyes fixed on their prey.

Grrrrrr..... grrrr....

Glacier flipped his parangs clockwise, ready for battle. They pounced on Glacier trying to land their razor claws on him, but to the war seasonsed veteran, his sense was too quick for the animals. The duo tried to bite and pin him down but failed miserably.

Lance and Kyle was shocked by Glacier's determination.

The first panther jumped an in one single blow, Glacier struck at the blunt end of the parang against its neck and the sound crack could be heard as it collapsed to the ground, motionless. The other panther sniffed and seemed to be intimidated by Glacier's presence as it retracted and hid into the shadows in fear. It identified Glacier's presence and smell and ran towards the darkness, its eyes still fixed on him. Instead Glacier went towards the panther and patted its head. It submitted to him as he laid down and licked its paws.

The rope broke and down came Leng, falling down fast. Glacier ran and jumped, catching Leng in the nick of time. Leng fainted due to shock and he laid her down, patting the panther to protect Leng. The panther seemed to know his intentions and slept beside Leng.

Glacier: Good job beast.

The panther licked its paws again.

Glacier stared at Kyle.

Glacier: Let Fong go. She is innocent. It's you and I who have a score to settle.

Kyle laughed.

Kyle: Don't be stupid. Do you think I'll fear you?

Kyle gestured Lance to her.

Kyle whispered: If you defeat him, I will let you do whatever you want to me. Wherever, whenever.

She said as she licked Lance's ears.

Lance could feel his prick hardening. He jumped and clenched his fists. Snapping his neck left and right. He stared at Glacier.

Beast stood up but Glacier gestured him to stay and Beast obeyed.

Lance was fast and skilful, unlike the amateurish gang pawns. Glacier took a beating by Lance as he punched and kicked him furiously, and Glacier could feel his ribcage breaking. Lance continued his attack on him with no room for Glacier to dodge. He was like Lance's punching bag. An heavy punch sent Glacier, flying to the floor. And he spat out blood.

Lance lifted his fingers, taunting Glacier to counter.

Glacier stood up, brushing the blood from his mouth again. He charged towards Lance, sending punches but Lance dodged it swiftly, retaliating with deadly punches to the abdomens and Glacier came coughing out blooding again. He endured Lance's punches and waited for the right moment.

Lance punched him mercilessly until suddenly Glacier took hold of his fist and twisted it sideways, causing Lance to flip. His right hand was twisted and broken. Glacier pulled Lance and knee jabbed Lance forcefully on his stomach. The sound of his ribcage breaking could be heard. Lance threw out blood and down came Glacier's hammering elbow towards his spine.

Glacier threw Lance away as he laid on the floor, barely alive.

Glacier: Kyle! I'm warning you release Fong!

By now Kyle was already near Fong. Fong struggled to break free but to no avail.

Kyle: Alright, if you say so.

Kyle cut the rope and Fong came crashing. Glacier tried to run towards Fong but it was too late for him. Beast leapt and Fong landed on him before she fell to the ground, minimizing the impact of the fall. Beast growled as he laid in a pool of blood. He had sacrificed itself whilst saving Fong.

Glacier patted Beast's head. "Thank you Beast'.

The panther stuck its tongue out and gave a low growl before it breathed its last.

Glacier untied her as Fong tried her best to stand.

Glacier: Are you alright?

Fong nodded and Glacier hugged her. The both of them were lost in thoughts of each other.

Kyle spat. "Disgusting".

Lance mustered up all his strength, took out the pistol and fired away.

Fong saw Lance and immediately she came in front of Glacier.

The sound of the gunshot exploded and it pierced straight through Fong's heart. Fong's eyes opened wide and she was breathing heavily. She turned her face towards Glacier with tears in her eyes.

Fong: I love you Glacier.

She said as she breathed her last, dying on his shoulders.

Glacier screamed as he went running towards Lance and in one thumping stomp, he smashed Lance's head to bits. His heart cracked as he knelt on the ground.

Kyle: hahaha... see you lost her again... you will never be with her as long as I'm here. Now. Forever! Hahaha

Glacier: KYLE!!!!

Glacier's deafening roar made her jump as she lost her balance and came falling. She screamed but there was no one there to help.

Kyle landed on her head as it broke instantly, followed by the pool of blood.

Glacier tried means and ways to revive Fong but none worked.

Leng regained consciousness and was terrified by the entire blood mess of the warehouse. She ran towards Glacier and instantly knew what happened. Glacier carried Fong and left with Leng.

This incident stayed with Leng throughout her life. Leng took Glacier's hand and looked out of the window.

Leng: How long have it been already? Look. Hong Kong had changed so much. There are so many skycrapers surfacing. And everything seemed to change so much except you Glacier. You still look the same 40 years ago.

Leng said as she held on to Glacier's hand. In the reflection of the mirror was an old lady in her 70's on her deathbed.

Leng: I hope you will meet her again. Thank you for always being there as a friend Glacier. Thank you.

Leng said as her hand dropped to the side and the heartbeat machine went dead.

Glacier placed her hands together and placed the rose in between her hands as he left the hospital.

He glanced at the sky and detested the very thought of seeing centuries of change. He had waited for centuries and when Fong appeared, she suffered the same fate as Elizabeth. How long more did he have to wait again?

He put on his coat and walked away with his slinged backpack.

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Great interesting stuff, do carry onz bro TS. Thanks! Cheers, ............
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It's probably the end of season 1. Will continue if you guys like.
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