The Garden

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Snow embraced me as she planted her tongue in my ears, swirling around it, giving me goosebumps. It felt ticklish yet good, something that I have not experienced before. Soon she moved towards my neck, brushing the sides of my side as though she was painting a canvas, followed by her sucking on my neck like those of a vampire. I felt a little pain and her heavy suction. Her hands were now roaming my body, rubbing my chest to my stomach. Slowly she reached below...

The doorbell rang as we both jumped in fright.

She quickly dived into the bed, covering herself with the blanket before I answered the door.

"Room service Sir."

I thanked and tipped him and took the tray to the table.

Snow was surprised. She wasn't expecting the bottle of wine.

Snow: When did you?

Me: You were taking too long in the toilet. So I was thinking perhaps I can order some food.

Snow just sat there. She did not know how to react.

She stepped out of the blanket and walked towards me, and planted a light kiss on my cheeks.

Snow: Thanks. You are so thoughtful.

I covered my eyes as I replied: Go wear the bathrobe. Please.

She hit me gently on my arms: Why? You don't like to see me naked?

She did as she was told as she wore the robe and sat on the chair.

I poured the wine and passed her the glass.

She took a sip and then asked: So what do you want to know about her?

Me: Everything. Please.

Snow was taken aback. She was thinking why is he so attracted to her?

Snow: Why do you want to know so much about her? Isn't I worth the attention?

There was a tinge of bitterness and jealousy in her voice, but she knew she had promised him.

She took a deep breath as she savoured another sip.

Me: Perhaps after dinner? Let's tuck in.

Snow nodded as she ate the dinner, feeding me some chunks too.

She was smiling radiantly. But little did I know that this staycation was her sweetest moments in her life.

There was a teardrop at the edge of her eyes as she ate.

Snow: It feels good to be loved, doesn't it?

With that she teared.

And trembled.

Snow: We were broken toys Max. It happened about 5 years ago. When Dawn and me were the few who joined the ktv...

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[gotnotime]

Such intense emotions..

[MissPooh]

nice writing.

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Snow took a gulp of the wine as she sat cross legged. She turned her head towards the balcony:

Dawn and I were the newbies back then. We were both not well educated, and probably it may seem that this was the fastest way to earn money. And we tried. But both of us had a limit. No sleeping with any guys.

Mary was good to us, teaching the ropes patiently. And soon we became the hot favourites, and it was good money I must say. Everything was good until that bastard came. That guy named King.

He was filthy rich as his dad was a very successful entrepreneur. He treated girls like they were playtoys. Abusive, arrogant and filthy. He took a fancy to us and kept coming back. He wanted to buy us out so he could do what he pleases. Being blinded by the amount, I agreed to him but Dawn did not. He made a contract for us to sign. He would buy us for a period of a year. And we would need to standby whenever he wants. Of course it was not easy.

He was rough and aggressive. I had to go to the doctor almost everytime I was with him. He did not treat me like a woman, he loved beating me, dropping hot candlewax on me... to the extend of... sharing.. me...

I had enough of being abused and tried to get him to terminate the contract. He threatened me and raised the amount I had to pay.

I only work for a living, how could I have the money to pay him?

I had to tolerate his every actions. It was a nightmare Max. Every single day was a nightmare.

Snow began to weep thinking of the past.

Me: So what happened to Dawn?

She took another gulp.

Dawn was always there to comfort me, she was like another sister to me. But her background seemed complex. Her mother was a compulsive gambler and her dad was struck with a terminal illness. She had a brother whom she had to support. She was always beaten by her mum for being a jinx, she blamed Dawn for the plight she was in. She blamed her for her bad gambling luck.

It was not until last year, her dad had to had an operation. And a very expensive one. Her brother had to go to university to. Her brother did not help out in the family expenses and he was brainwashed by his mum that it was Dawn's job to be the breadwinner. It was only right that Dawn should be the one supporting him through university.

Her dad's condition got worse and he needed that operation to survive. To Dawn, her dad was the only one who knew of her hardships. He wept every time he saw Dawn. And Dawn could only smile at him, telling him that everything was alright.

Her mother was still the same, gambling every single cent she gives and always tell Dawn that it was not enough. And her brother too would always ask her for money.

It was her last resort. She agreed to King's request.

I clenched my fists. And thought to myself: Bastard. Freaking bastard.

Snow looked at me, with a frown on my face.

Snow: No Max. You are no match for him. He's really rich and you are just a pauper. Please. I know my request to be here has already burnt a hole in your pocket. I'm thankful for this. But please. It's after all Dawn's decision.

I did not know what went over me. But I knew the desire to win Dawn back was even stronger.

Me: Snow, tides will change. The winner do not stay at the top forever. Given that bastard's way of spending, he would be in debt if anything happens.

And I was right.

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I started on the other sculpture, eager to finish it. Now my business was starting to pick up. I started to showcase my artworks in art exhibits, and they were well received. I just just received an award for best masterpiece from an international art festival and was invited to fly to receive that award.

I must have been a fortune teller. For what I told Snow the other day, my prediction came true.

The stock market plunged to a real low, hitting the world hard. Punching many a great blow to their pockets. Many went bankrupt in an instant. That very day was a day where everyone would never forget.

King's face turned pale. His dad had to sell everything, every single asset and it was still not enough. They had to be declared bankrupt.

King: What are you saying daddy? We have to sell everything? Then what about my expenditure, my allowance, my car, my credit card?

King's Dad (KD): Didn't I give you enough for your savings?

King: You didn't say anything about savings daddy?

KD: Didn't I tell you not to spend unnecessary money?

King: You didn't tell me that daddy. Now give me another $10k. I need to go out with my friends.

KD: Stop your nonsense son. Don't you know what we are facing now?

King: Face what? Give me my money or else.

KD: Or else what?

He stared at King sternly.

King: Just you wait!

He kicked the table and slammed the door.

It has been days he did not visit the ktv.

I went there again, this time alone. And then I asked for Snow.

Multiple exposure to the media and news had boosted my confidence. And perhaps, this time, it would be a golden chance for me to see Dawn. Probably saving her.

But before that, I needed some inside intelligence. And that would be Snow. Not about Dawn. But that bastard.

I wanted him down. Down where he would never stand up again. Never. In his life.

"I'm going to make you pay thrice for what you have done to my future girlfriend." I thought.

Hmmm. Probably not thrice. But endless.

I pulled up my collar as I stepped into the ktv.

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[KLKOOL]

Very nice .. Please continue

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Snow stared at me for a while. Seeing me in shirt and pants, my hair all combed neatly and well shaved.

Snow: Max?

Me: That would be me, miss bathrobe.

She slapped me on my arms and gave me a pinch.

Me: Free?

She nodded as she leaned close to me: Are you going to date me out?

I nodded. She leaned and gave me a kiss.

Snow: Wait for me.

I waited and saw Dawn in a distance. Her gaze was as cold as ever. And there seem to be something troubling her.

Perhaps I would be able to find out why later.

Snow came out and waved goodbye to Dawn. Dawn smiled at Snow.

Dawn: Good for you to find someone, Snow.

Snow: I'm not sure of that Sis. But I'm contented being his friend.

Dawn: Don't say that I'm sure he likes you.

Snow sighed: Well, it's complicated.

Seeing Dawn smile was the best thing.

Snow cross her arms around mine as she leaned on my shoulder as we left.

Snow: Where are we going?

Me: Up to you.

Snow: Whole night?

Me: Whole night.

Dawn looked at Snow and she gave a smile before she went back to the room.

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[Johnnykhan]

waiting for the next

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Snow: Let's go to the coffeeshop. My treat!

Me: What's the occasion?

Snow: Because I feel like it!

True enough, she was radiant. She held on to me and led the way.

Sitting at the coffeeshop, she ordered many dishes and ate happily. I was amazed by her appetite.

Me: Are you so hungry?

Snow: No. I'm very happy.

Me: Ok.

It feels weird that it feel good seeing her happy.

Snow (with her mouth full): Yooooouu noooot eatiing?

I giggled looking at her like how hamsters store their food in their mouths.

She slapped me on my shoulders.

Snow: I'm so full! All your fault. You ate so little I had to finish them! Bill, boss!

She asked for the bill and paid happily.

Me: So where to now?

Snow: Take a walk with me.

Me: Sure.

She swung her little handbag to and fro, and was silently hymning a song.

Me: Tong Hua?

She stopped. Looked at me and smiled as she carried on walking.

We walked along Fort Canning Park where she sat at the patch of grass, looking at the full moon.

Snow: Beautiful isn't it?

I nodded.

She then leaned her head on my shoulder. And that feels warm. Something left as though we were lovers.

Me: I...

She placed her fingers on my lips, asking me to be quiet. She liked the feeling of leaning on me. We sat there, for more than an hour. Perhaps the silence seemed really romantic.

She lifted her head and stared at me. Her intense look, as though she could see the inner side of me through my eyes. She leaned closer, her eyes closed. Her nose touched mine, as she rotated her head, letting her soft lips touch mine.

Her tongue came and circled mine. Her lips closed gently, causing a suction in both our mouths. Her fingers now was placed on my cheekbone as she pulled me even closer to her.

I could smell her hair, and her delicate skin. I did not know what to do but let my instinct take control. Soon we were locked up in each other's embrace, letting our passion flow. I could feel the heat from both our bodies.

She stopped, looked at me, and pointed to an otherwise place nearby.

Merchant Court Hotel.

And the expression in her eyes were something I had not seen before. Somehow it was something that I would probably never experienced.

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Snow was breathing heavily for a reason I did not know. Her face was red. As we checked into the room, she quickly slammed the door, put down her bag and pushed me to the bed.

Snow (panting): hurrrrgh... hurrgh...

She started to unbutton my shirt in a hurried motion. She lowered her head towards my body as I could feel her hot breathing on my chest. I could see her two breasts resting nicely on her blue coloured lingerie cups through the top of her black dress. She immediately planted her lips on my right nipple, sucking gently and licking the tip.

Her fingers were massaging my left chest before she unbuttoned the whole of my shirt. She pulled it off as she started licking on my left. Her nimble fingers went down to my belt and unbuckled it in one go, she circled around my crotch, as she grabbed Little Max from the outside.

It feel good as I stood erected.

She stopped, dragged her dress strap sideways, revealing a nude shoulder with her straps hanging on the side. A super turn on for me, I could now see her strapless blue bra in full view.

I laid there, letting Snow do what she wanted. Her hand temperature was hot and it seemed like it was sweating too.

She unclipped my pants and in one single motion she pulled it down. Now only my boxers were left. She stood up, looking at me from the top, giving me a glimpse of her matching blue laced panty.

She slid her dress down and I could feel the soft fabric resting on my knees.

What a sight. Her body was beautiful and slim.

Her face still red. It was as though she was on drugs. She stared at me with hungry eyes as she licked her lips. Her hands stretched behind, to unhook her blue cups, and she threw it on my face.

It smelled really good. Feminine, with a tinge of sweat. I took it and studied the bra, looking at its detail and contours. I took a deep sniff again, loving the fragrance of her breasts. There was a tag hanging on the back, near the clip which read 34A. Though I did not know what that was, the numbers was etched in my mind.

I flipped the lingerie again and gave out a lick at the cups, wondering how it tasted like.

Snow placed her small feet on Little Max as she stroked it with her toenails, in circles. It felt really erotic, and her feet reached for the top of my boxers, using her toenail, she grabbed it and pulled it down with her right foot.

Now Little Max was in full view.

She continued, using her toe to stroke the outermost skin up and down, slowly as she stepped on it gently, letting LM lie on my crotch and fastened the rubbing with her feet.


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It felt really exotic with her using her feet to stroke my prick. Snow was looking at my erected Little Max when a pool of saliva came on my crotch. Snow proceeded to take off her blue panty.

She used her legs to part my legs, where she squat down and stroked my prick with her hands slowly, pulling the foreskin down before slowly pushing it up. Her grip was intense yet satisfying.

Snow shot me a look.

It's that hungry eyes again. She resembled a tiger with its eyes fixed on the prey, ready to pounce anytime.

She spat on my prick and in one shot, she gulped down my entire shaft into her mouth.

It was the very first time for me.

And it felt really good.

I threw her lingerie aside, and stared at her giving me the blowjob of my life. Her eyes was still fixed on me. And that was totally erotic.

Then she spoke with my prick in her mouth: Duuu yeeww liikkee kiiit?

I seem to be able to hear what she was saying and I nodded.

She took my bundled bags on her palms and gently gave it a squeeze, before her fingers worked on it like an octopus clinging on a round ball. That combo was beyond belief.

I was having my ecstasy now.

I closed my eyes.

And tried to visualise.

Snow fastened her movement.

I could feel my veins tightening on my prick.

The words 'Ahhh' escaped out of my mouth.

And that cue seemed to please Snow. She slowed her pace and used her tongue to play with my tip.

I could not help but arch my back. I loved how she plays with my balls.

I fantasized.

Yes. I imagined her to be Dawn.

Snow now fastened her mouth work. I did not know why but suddenly I reach for her head, and took her mouth for Dawn's vagina. Holding her head and I mouthfucked her.

Within minutes, I ejaculated a huge load all into Snow's mouth, with the visual of Dawn's vagina in my mind.

Snow choked but she did not spit out my cum.

She waited for me to finish my load before she took it out.

Snow looked at me with her mouth full.

She walked towards me.

Sat beside me and she opened her mouth to reveal how much I have deposited in her mouth.

Seeing the semi white semen in her mouth may have looked sick but it felt really good.

Then she swallowed it all.

She held my hands and headed to the shower room.

Snow: Let me clean you up...

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Mary looked at Dawn.

Mary: Isn't that the guy who bumped into you? He really looks different when he dresses up isn't it?

Dawn smiled.

Mary: Have you heard?

Dawn: About?

Mary: King.

Dawn: What about?

Mary: I heard he lost everything after his dad went bankrupt. I hope he does not come and create trouble.

Dawn was dumbstruck.

Dawn thought to herself "What would happen to my dad?"

She was demoralised and there were still few months left in her contract with King. He would only pay the full amount after the contract.

Mary: Are you alright Dawn?

Dawn nodded but deep inside her she was afraid what would happen to her dad if she did not have enough to foot the hospital fees.

Snow gargled her mouth, getting rid of the residue of my semen. She then tied up her hair, where she looked like a perfect housewife. She turned on the shower, and tested the temperature of the water.

Snow: Alright, come here Max.

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King was not convinced that his dad is bankrupt and that he would be living a low life where he had to work hard to earn that little wage. At a tender age, he was accustomed to living the high life, spending money like a tap, womanising and 'buying' women.

He blamed his dad for the plight he was in. He was in alot of debts too, swiping his credit card for everything. Previously the debts were piling but he did not care.

They were now living in a rented place his friend had. Small and cramped. And the bed wasn't the springy one but only cushioned. His dad was still going to work like normal and he treated the bankrupt issue with ease.

King's Dad: Son, I'm going to work.

King: Fuck you. Go for all I care.

His dad shook his head as he left the house.

King smoked heavily in the cramped 2 room flat, swearing vulgarities. He was unshaved and looked really untidy.

He was sick of the small bathroom. And the maids he had previously.

King: Marie! Fetch me my orange juice!

Nothing happened.

King: Fuck Marie! Give me my orange juice or I'll fuck the brain out of you now!

There was no reply.

King shouted his vulgarities until the neighbours shouted back.

Neighbour: Stop shouting you bloody man. Everyday know only how to grumble, swear and smoke. Useless!

King: Who are you to tell me, you fucking neighbour.

He was fed up and he slammed the door and went out.

And he wanted someone to vent his anger on.

And immediately he knew who.

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[kunt69]

Hey bro.- good write up can make into a book.please continue 😌

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Snow coated me with the shower foam from my back, she pressed her body against mine, rubbing her nipples on the surface of me, with her skilful hands working on my front.

She pinched my nipples hard, causing me to twitch and she giggled. She sucked at my back, as though she was extracting blood from me. And her fingers went to Little Max again, stroking me gently.

She whispered to my ears: Want another go?

She blew and licked my ears.

Me: It's fine Snow. You seem to be... hungry today ain't you?

Snow: I'm going to eat you alive tonight Max. Are you scared?

Her look was really foxy and any man who saw this look could rape her multiple times and shoot every single drop in her.

She proceed to give me a massage in the shower before washing off the foam.

Unlike the first time I saw Snow, she was a really sweet and great girl. It's just too bad. There isn't any affinity. I thought.

Snow: Can you sleep naked with me tonight please?

I looked at her.

Shouldn't these questions be asked by the guys?

I turned my head and nodded.

She buried her head on my shoulders.

Me: Snow?

Snow: Yes dear?

Me: Tell me more about that bastard.

She paused.

Sighed.

Then she started describing about him. His temper, his hangouts and his bloody habits.

It went on more than an hour.

Snow: I'm tired dear. Shall we sleep?

Me: Sure Snow. Sure.

With the info in my head, now all it takes is an evil plot.

Snow: Why are you smiling?

Me: Nothing Snow. Nothing.

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