I was Naive (Story)

[AhBooon]

Originally Posted by papagraphite

superb updates that come in short snippets throughout the day. i like your style of writing as it gives ample time to each girl, and also your thoughts at different stages of your relationships with them. keep up the good work bro. can't wait to read more.

Very observant bro

[Starter]

I arrived at Thomson Plaza at ard 445pm, I was early and waited at the entrance. As the evening sun shone on my face I saw a familiar figure, the way she walk and that ponytail, It was all too familiar but something was off, the height was wrong. I shook my head and took a second look, It was Felicia, and she had tied a pony tail just like what Christina always does.

It took me a moment, telling myself to be fair to the girls and I should not be thinking of Christina especially after all that has happened.

Felicia: Eh Idiot, they all not here ah.

Me: No leh, they not here yet maybe jam lah.

Felicia looked around trying to located Jasmine and Ann, I wanted to disturb her and I tucked on her ponytail.

Felicia: Oei, dun pull lah wait I need to tie again.

I smiled and I told her ok, I saw Ann approaching us from the shopping centre.

Me: Felicia, Ann is here.

Ann told us to follow her as Jasmine and her parent were already at Swensens, we went up to the 3rd level and entered the restaurant. After telling us to order whatever we felt like having Jasmine and Ann's Dad Went off and sat at another table with their mother. Their parents were great, Maybe they wanted to have a romantic moment but I always believe they did that to let us feel more comfortable during the meal.

We ordered our meals and we had lots of fun during the dinner, Jasmine as usual will complain about whatever I did and Ann was always looking out for me if I needed anything. Felicia was trying everyone's food taking some of everybody's food, I sat there looking at them and I can't help but smiled. (they were an wonderful crowd to have around)

After dinner, we went Shopping with the parents, I ended up with their father most of the time. Jasmine and Ann's Father was always asking me if I needed anything and he actually asked me to have a game of basketball with him some day after I told him I played the game.

We proceeded to Yaohan as they need to purchase groceries, it was not hard to realise that Jasmine was a titbits junkie and Ann loved Ice Cream. It was a great evening but all good things comes to an end. Their parent actual bought a bag of food items each for Felicia and me to bring back. I guess it was the aftermath of the "poor and needy" Program

[liber]

Yohan, tats like half a decade ago

[Johnnykhan]

Nice long update!!!!

[Starter]

After saying our good byes, Felicia and I left Thomson Plaza at ard 845pm, I volunteered to send her back, Maybe I felt that I needed to show her a bit more love.

We boarded a bus toward AMK and she leaned on me while on the bus, I held her hand and was playing with her fingers. it soon turn into a thumb wrestle match on a bus.

We changed another bus and we arrived near Felicia's home, I walked her to her block and kissed her on her forehead before leaving her. I did not take the bus but instead I walked back to AMK, I walked pass the block that I met Felicia when She ran away from home, and later reached the park which Jasmine and me chased after Ann. these memories made me smile.

I took a deep breath and walked towards AMK, It seemed the right thing I should do, I was ready for the confrontation.

I never thought it might end this way, but I walked on toward the fastfood joint Christina worked, I looked at my watch and I reached just on time, I waited for a few minutes and I see Christina coming out and Alan was chasing after her.

I followed them and I could see Christina turning back occasionally, I did not know what was going on and I was sure that Christina was upset. I could imagine that Alan was pushing her to clarify things with me, I let off a smile and I was teliing them in my mind, there's not need to push it, It's coming to you soon.

I follow them to Christina's block and I saw Alan rushing into the lift while the door was closing it was my chance, I ran up the stair and I reached Christina's Level.

[Starter]

I started hearing cries as I approached Christina's Level, and when I saw them, Alan was forcing himself on Christina. I moved to him and tried to pull him off asking him what was he doing, I could see Christina struggling and crying. I got into a fight with Alan and he ran off shortly, I held Christina in my arms and told her it's ok I am here. she buried her face on my chest and cried.

Dear Readers sorry if I have wasted your time but the above only happens in movies below will be the actual Account.

I started hearing cries as I approached Christina's Level, and when I saw them, Alan was forcing himself on Christina. I moved to him and tried to pull him off asking him what was he doing, I could see Christina struggling and crying. I got into a fight with Alan and he ran off shortly. I tried to hold Christina in my arms but she pushed me away.

Christina: Why are you here?

I did not reply her or rather I did not know how to reply her.

Christina: Lawrence were you following me?

I nodded my head in silence.

Christina: Standing up : You don't Trust me! You Don't Trust me! (crying)

Me: Christina, I.....

Christina: Go away... go Away!!!

I could see that Christina was very upset and I did not wish to agitate her any farther I walked down the stair leaving her, I was wrong the whole time. Neither did she not lie to me, nor was she ever with Alan. I was insecure and I assumed she did what I did, I was the one that betrayed her.

[fireman008]

I love this story. You r truly a great writer..

[power69]

Originally Posted by ravendanish

yes!!!!this is the way Bro. ...write more.....awaiting for the next update

got new posting let me know

[canoechamp]

Great style of writing) really enjoyed myself reading your accounts. Although, I would have told Christina that I felt that Alan might do something drastic after her rejection and thus followed her to protect her:/ I would never want her to be in harm's way.
Hahah it's all up to how you phrase your excuses

[MassachuSEX]

TS update very fast, cannot keep up

[Starter]

erm If by any sense my dear supporter have thought of this as the end of the story.

YOU ARE WRONG!!!

This is only the first chapter lolz.

hm.... should I take a break....

[OweMeMoney]

Please carry on ts! I'm checking back 5 times a day for updates lols

[banger_boy]

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Me been refreshing my screen since 1pm for updates bro.

Write a few more chapters let me shiok den break leh.

[Victorlim96]

Same here, I can't wait for the next update

[Starter]

Ok... no break... shall carry on....