The Day you walked away

[GrieGzEters]

Power!!! I really feel like I am watching a drama. Every scenerio u wrote seems to be playing like a film in my mind.

[LovePotion]

bro u r the man.. u should be a scripwriter two thumbs up for you

[curiouslala]

Kopi broo..
Fast fast continue..
Waiting n subscribed already..

[ilovepolkadots]

Like your story very much! Please don't let us wait too long!!!!

[Coffeecans]

Rena: Are you alright?

Daniel: I'll call you later. Bye.

Rena: Who's that?

Daniel: A friend.

Rena: Friend?

Daniel: Can you please stop asking?

Daniel grabbed Rena and walked out.

Daniel: Let's go back to our room.

Rena: But I haven't...

Daniel: If you don't want to come then I will leave right away.

Rena like being dominated and she obliged.

Rena: Yes. Everything you say.

The moment they reached the hotel, Daniel ripped her Chanel dress open and threw her onto the bed. He tore everything he could see on her and threw it to the sides.

Rena: What are you doing? These are....

Daniel took off his pants and went straight into her pussy without any warmup. It felt dry but he insisted on pumping.

Rena: It hurts, Daniel...

Daniel covered her mouth with his palms and continued thrusting. There were some tears in Rena's eyes but Daniel's mind were full of other thoughts. Why is Beth back all of a sudden and why did she want to meet him for? It was her who destroyed his love life. It was her who made him lost faith in love. He lost everything because of her. He felt frustrated and lost at the same time. Just what is these mixed feelings?

It didn't take him long to ejaculate. He took it out and sprayed sperm all over her body. By now Rena was already enjoying herself.

Rena: yes...spray it on me.... I love it.... ohhhh...

Daniel went over to her face and wanked his dick on her. Her mouth opened big and sucked the remaining semen on his dick.

Rena: Give me more... I want more...

Suddenly he slapped Rena on her face.

Daniel: Shut up. I do as I want. You just lie down and spread your legs when I want. Do you understand?

Rena loved to be dominated and she replied: Yes Master...

From the shrewd lady that Rena was, Daniel had managed to conquer her.

Daniel was really feeling the 'heat' from the raw oysters that he ate and then he started to thrust her again.

Rena: Oooooohhhh......fuckkkkkkkkkkkkk....

She turned around and let him enter her from behind where she arched her buttocks to cushion him from the bangs. He slapped her hard and her buttocks were red but she seemed to like it.

Daniel closed his eyes and thought about Beth. How they had sex for the first time and how fun it felt.
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[soothHerOnlyIf]

wow..great story kopi bro! no points to up you yet but great job there! i guess usually bossy girls like to be dominated on bed itching for that kind of women. must learn from Daniel and be patient.

[kittymae]

Originally Posted by soothHerOnlyIf

wow..great story kopi bro! no points to up you yet but great job there! i guess usually bossy girls like to be dominated on bed itching for that kind of women. must learn from Daniel and be patient.

I can vouch for that fact!!lols...

[Iluminati]

Originally Posted by kittymae

I can vouch for that fact!!lols...

are you saying you are bossy in work?

[kittymae]

Originally Posted by Iluminati

are you saying you are bossy in work?

Not telling
Lols

[Iluminati]

Originally Posted by kittymae

Not telling
Lols

Guess the saying "behind the fierce cat lies a docile kitten" is true then

[Coffeecans]

Daniel's phone rang again whilst he was halfway through. He took it out and Rena was disappointed. She was yearning so much for sex due to her being single and her super busy schedule.

Daniel: Hello.

Beth: Can I meet you around an hour. Say at our usual place?

Daniel: ...... why do you want to meet me?

Beth: I.... I... just want to see you.

Daniel: .....

Beth: I know you may not want to see me. But please let me see you just one more time... Just one more time...

Daniel: K. Usual place.

Daniel went to the toilet and washed himself.

Daniel: Rena, I will be back. Sleep first, I will definitely be back for you.

He kissed her and left. Obediently, Rena went to sleep.

He drove and thoughts flooded him. Why now? Why are you back to mess things up again? His heart had still a small place for Beth, no denying that. But he had to put on the mask that he had clean forgotten her. He turned on the radio Class 95 and then the song was playing.



The lyrics sent that cold to his heart. He then remembered the happiest moments with Beth and how Beth loved this song so much she memorized and sing everytime they are together.

Because I love you, I'll do anything
I'll give you my heart, my everything
Because I love you, I'll be right by your side
To be a light, to be your guide

If you should feel that I don't really care
And that you're starting to lose ground
Let me reassure you that you can count on me
And that I'll always be around

Because I love you, my heart's an open door
So won't you please come on in
Because I love you, I'll be right by your side
To be a light, to be your guide

He couldn't help but stop at the corner and wept from all the memories. How can a relationship that long be easily forgotten? *Why now Beth, just when I was about to cleanly forget you, you appear again...why?*

After letting it out, he continued driving until he reached the destination they agreed. And Beth was already there. Wearing the dress that he liked most. The one that he bought for her to wear to the wedding. He knew he could not control the tears now. The real Beth was just in front of him. He tried his best not to look at her by looking down. When Beth came running towards him and then embracing him.

Beth: I'm sorry.... I really am.... I.... I...

Daniel could see the bruises on her but he tried his best not to open his mouth. He closed his eyes but he knew his heart has already opened to her... His lips trembled... and then Beth could feel his tears dropping down when it suddenly rained. Drenching the both of them while they were lost in each other's embrace in the rain and then he could hear her sing softly.

Beth: Because I love you, I'll be right by your side
To be a light, to be your guide...
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[kittymae]

Originally Posted by Iluminati

Guess the saying "behind the fierce cat lies a docile kitten" is true then

Hehehe...perhaps Mr.T is the best person to ask abt that..Hmmm


And kopi kor....ure making me emo again after reading that... *sob

[Coffeecans]

Bernice was getting ready to give Daniel a surprise. She had managed to get a small longan lychee cake from Takashimaya. She hoped so much that Daniel would be so happy and would spend the night with her. She was in love with him so much. Carefully she placed it in the fridge, and telling her parents and siblings not to touch it. Not even moving it. She brushed her teeth and switched on Class 95, listening to the love songs. Being in love was the sweetest thing in her life. She couldn't wait for the next day to arrive. She stared out of the window, seeing the heavy downpour. Took her phone and texted him: The weather is cold, cover yourself with teh blanket and don't catch a cold ok? Love you.

Rena was fast asleep, due to her intense traveling. She was snoring but was smiling in her sleep when she uttered the name: Daniel...

The rain continued and the both of them stood embracing each other. The touch of each other was like returning to the past where flashbacks came into their minds.

Daniel looked away and asked: Why are you here. Why do you want to see me. Are you happy seeing my pathetic self now? You walked away on my wedding day and left me at the church. Now you are back and what do you want? WHY DO YOU HAVE TO BE BACK WHEN I AM ABOUT TO FORGET YOU! WHY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Daniel shouted and knelt down automatically. Beth followed suit and hugged him as his head was resting on her shoulders.

Beth: I'm sorry I caused you so much hurt... I'm really sorry.... I ran away from Nick... he was abusing me everyday until I couldn't take it... and he... he... (she was trying to tell him about him forcing her to entertain Nick's client when she decided not to)... I know this is my decision and I regret it... Dan.... can you just give me one more chance? Let me heal the hurt. Let me mend your heart again? Dan... I..still love you.

Her word etched his heart deeply but he knew and he promised never to fall back in love again. He didn't want to experience that excruciating pain ever again. He stood up, brushed her hands off and then replied: Never. My feelings for you was already dead the moment you left me. I'm having a girlfriend now so, please don't look for me any longer.

He turned and closed the car door, reversed and drove off when he stopped after a 10 minutes drive, ensuring that Beth was not following him and he shouted at the sky: Arghhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Beth drove back with a heavy heart. She knew she would get the answer that she had predicted but didn't expect it to hurt that much. Perhaps she need to make Daniel believe that she truly loves him and she need to start from scratch again but wooing him back. Can she do it or would she just give it up?

Daniel saw his phone and read Bernice's message. *Fuck* Why are you so concerned about me, Bernice. I'm just toying with you and I'm dumping you right after I get tired of you. But why am I feeling this uncertainty? Don't tell me that my heart is slowly skewing towards you?

*Don't be stupid Daniel. You can't be falling into the trap again.*

He drove and then opened the door, seeing Rena sleeping soundly when she was talking in her dreams: Daniel... Daniel... I..think... I love you...
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[Sapphirez]

OMGG! I'm so addicted to your stories!

The way you write your story really let me feel the sadness/helplessness in the characters.

Your another story, 'Love, Can I' really make me feel as if I am those typical girls watching those K drama and start crying. Also, I like those Chinese words you written!!

Hoping to see more of your stories!

[scoobyhoo]

nice writing! up your points.