My Milfy Lovely Sis-in-Law

[viperf14]

Originally Posted by erkianpeng

I am sure you all agree with me that the different perspectives have put a dampener on the flow of the story. It feels heavy and stuffy. There is no more play for this story. How much more can the story be twisted? The in-law and the TS humping Audrey in a 2-man-1-woman manner, all the in-law screwing the backside of the TS which Audrey plays with herself? Then Audrey's husband comes home suddenly and they all engage in a big climatic gang-bang?

The story has stalled. The only interesting thing to watch out for is the pics that TS might throw in once in a while.

No one agree with anything you said. If you dun like the story can go away. If you like picture so much can go to exchange plaza and view the photo post by other. No need to talk so much here.

[noobster89]

Wow wow hey cool down, peeps!! Fiction or not, we are here to satisfy your sick needs to read such stuff. Comments, be it positive or negative, are all feedbacks for TS to see if he is doing a great job entertaining us or not. I'm sure TS has spent time conjuring stories, kudos to efforts!!

Once again, cheers, ppl!! Don't need to get so worked up!!

[Hardstick15by5]

Originally Posted by erkianpeng

I am sure you all agree with me that the different perspectives have put a dampener on the flow of the story. It feels heavy and stuffy. There is no more play for this story. How much more can the story be twisted? The in-law and the TS humping Audrey in a 2-man-1-woman manner, all the in-law screwing the backside of the TS which Audrey plays with herself? Then Audrey's husband comes home suddenly and they all engage in a big climatic gang-bang?

The story has stalled. The only interesting thing to watch out for is the pics that TS might throw in once in a while.

maybe we should all go support his story..

the real true professional writer..

[HANDFUL]

No lah TS.... we'd rather wait for your update !! Loyal supporter here !

[takashi31400]

Originally Posted by HANDFUL

No lah TS.... we'd rather wait for your update !! Loyal supporter here !

Bro TS,

Same here,we will patiently wait for your update.

[Kooker]

Originally Posted by erkianpeng

I am sure you all agree with me that the different perspectives have put a dampener on the flow of the story. It feels heavy and stuffy. There is no more play for this story. How much more can the story be twisted? The in-law and the TS humping Audrey in a 2-man-1-woman manner, all the in-law screwing the backside of the TS which Audrey plays with herself? Then Audrey's husband comes home suddenly and they all engage in a big climatic gang-bang?

The story has stalled. The only interesting thing to watch out for is the pics that TS might throw in once in a while.

I disagree. You can write your own and make a new thread if you want though.

[extrawendog]

Originally Posted by erkianpeng

I am sure you all agree with me that the different perspectives have put a dampener on the flow of the story. It feels heavy and stuffy. There is no more play for this story. How much more can the story be twisted? The in-law and the TS humping Audrey in a 2-man-1-woman manner, all the in-law screwing the backside of the TS which Audrey plays with herself? Then Audrey's husband comes home suddenly and they all engage in a big climatic gang-bang?

The story has stalled. The only interesting thing to watch out for is the pics that TS might throw in once in a while.

Seriously, you want to complain then don't surf sammyboy.
Bros here had put in effort to write these. Fiction or real stories.
If you can''t get climax by reading.
Please go and find your girlfriends or wife to achieve it.
Worst situation you have your 2 hands.

[jinjin26]

Originally Posted by Hardstick15by5

maybe we should all go support his story..

the real true professional writer..

Bro why u are wasting your time replying to him... pls continue your story. It's damn additive.

Must say one of the best story I have read..

[Botakhead]

Cyber space, dun get worked up, it happens. . . . . . . . .just take it with a pinch or rather a spoonful of salt to get rid of these distasteful negative hurting remarks.

We are all humans, getting jealous is normal.

[Nicole78]

Originally Posted by Hardstick15by5

maybe we should all go support his story..

the real true professional writer..

No!!!!i read it everyday like writing diary so you must continue writing it....
Still waiting for it to be continue thanks

[fluffykite]

Originally Posted by Nicole78

No!!!!i read it everyday like writing diary so you must continue writing it....
Still waiting for it to be continue thanks

Ya same here leh... TS almost 48hrs no updates liao...

[KLKOOL]

Camping for the next installment

[noobster89]

Eh wah lau wtf someone -9 for my rep leh. I was stating the facts what. Got wrong meh?????

[Hngata92]

Originally Posted by noobster89

Eh wah lau wtf someone -9 for my rep leh. I was stating the facts what. Got wrong meh?????

I'll up you

[Hardstick15by5]

Narrator: In-Law



Then finally. She gathered her energy and sat up… it was fast.. but I swear I get to see a flash of her nipple.. NICE!


http://i.imgur.com/H9qI3sz.jpg


She quickly readjust her chemise straps… next round… wah fuck! I lost…

Audrey: drink or dare?


I really need to stay sober

Me: dare!

Audrey: haha.. push ups for you then ! 15!!

Me: ok then.. sit back some more.. give me space…

Audrey: you’re a man! Should do on the floor!

Me: cannot.. must be fair to me and you..

I bend forward… held my body up, face very close to her pussy area…  fuck! If only she was legs folded and facing me instead of sitting with her feet resting on the floor..


Fuck! It was difficult… am I like going to throw face in front of her… I tried to do a few… wah… did until 10… gave up…. landed my head purposely on her smooth smooth thigh… i rested my right hand on her kneecap and pretended to pant….


I rested there for a moment.. she didn’t say anything…


my right hand moved upwards slowly and caressed her sweet sweet skin…

audrey did not try and stop me..