Spare me. Please. The Story of Brenda.

[bombshell]

I love this story. almost like those R-rated detective type from HK movies.keep up the good work.

[Hardstick15by5]

well done TS, brenda. the friendly neighbourhodd slut. ha

[Beam]

Nice , remarkable camping here always with pastries

[queeniegal]

Coffeecan!!! Haha soooo long nv read your writing..

I shall read it this weekend (: support

[Coffeecans]

wow its been ages queenie

Originally Posted by queeniegal

Coffeecan!!! Haha soooo long nv read your writing..

I shall read it this weekend (: support

[Coffeecans]

AG was satisfied scaring Brenda and thus he had beer with his other khakis.

Teck: Any more lobang or not?

AG: With you screwing up where got now? CB still got the cheek to say.

The other 2 friends was not interested to hear and they discussed about horse racing instead.

AG: Wah lau eh, jio you two out always read books, no wonder you keep losing. Come lah, bottoms ups!

The four took their Stout and toasted each other.

Teck saw the pretty beer lady as he raised his hand. She came forth and he touched her butt.

Teck: Go get me 5 more Stouts.

He said as he squeezed. The beer lady shoved his hands off with disgust and went to the cashier.

AG: Careful not to get charged for molest you know. This is a public place.

Teck: Pot calling kettle black.

AG: Watch your mouth you CB.

Teck: If I get charged for molest, you get charged for rape.

AG: Can you go wash your mouth please. It stinks.

Teck: Go wash go wash lo.

AG: You really kam gong leh you know. It's a phrase. Not a literal instruction.

Teck: K lo.

AG face palm.

On the table there was already 8 bottles, 2 more and they will call it a day.

AG drove happily back home as he thinks of the naughty things he can do to Brenda.

The next morning he suddenly got an early morning call.

AG: Wah lau eh... 7 morning 8 morning call me for what?

Supervisor: Boss... I think you better come leh. There's someone looking for you. And they look really fierce like those gangsters from 'Jiang Hu'.

AG: What does that got to do with me?

Supervisor: They specifically stated your name. And they said they won't go until you show up.

AG: What the fuck. Ok I be over in 30 mins.

AG thought to himself. What the heck? Who are they? I don't owe loansharks money. Why are they here for?

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[Camel]

waiting for more

[alan0338]

camp for more...

[Coffeecans]

Xiang, together with two of his friends were hitting down at the lobby of AG's company. Waiting for AG to be back. He was wearing dark shades, with a black tshirt that shown his bulging muscles, together with a dark blue denim jeans. The other two was bald and they looked like bouncers. The menacing three created a huge distraction to the staffs, where tongues wagged.

Worker 1: Wah I didn't know boss was in so much debt.

Worker 2: Ya lo. Till the loan sharks step in.

Worker 3: Would we be terminated?

Worker 4: Don't scare me leh.

Just then AG appeared. Wearing his blue Polo Ralph shirt and grey pants.

AG's secretary told him that the three was looking for him.

AG: Yes? Can I help you?

Xiang: Let's talk in your room.

AG: Ok. Let's go.

AG ushered him to his huge room and Xiang ordered his two friends to stay outside.

The moment AG closed the door.

AG: Do I know you?

Without a second thought, Xiang gave AG a hard punch, causing him to fall on the floor. They could see the shadowed silhouettes on the frosted glass.

Xiang: CCB. Don't you mess around with me you bloody bastard.

AG: Whatt...did..I..

Xiang punched him again.

Xiang: What did you do yesterday you filthy bastard...

AG: I went drinking.

Xiang: Before that?

AG stopped and pondered for a while.

Xiang punch him again. AG was bruised on his face.

AG: Wait..wait wait... we can talk this through.

Another punch came.

Xiang: Talk what through? KNN you wasn't like this when you and your friend was abusing someone and taking clips of her.

Another punch went to AG's stomach, causing him to kneel in front of Xiang.

AG's eyes opened in fear.

AG: I thought....

Xiang: CCB. Thought..thought what? If I thought I'll be the PM!

He kicked AG hard on the stomach.

Xiang: Someone was watching you already. You think what? You can go away scotfree? Limpeh tell you straight. The one you are trying to screw is my old friend. You think she can be bullied easily is it? KNN. Let me tell you this. I have the card with me. I am going to send this to the police and make sure you are screwed for life.

He said as he spat on AG's face.

He walked towards the door when suddenly AG changed.

AG: I'm sorry brother... I beg you.. Please don't give it to the police. I have a business...

Xiang kicked him aside: CB... so what? Means you can take advantage of people and force them to do as you lease? There's no way I'm going to let you go. Bastards like you don't deserve a second chance.

AG felt terrified.

AG: Tolong la brother. Please... spare me. I'll do whatever it takes...

Xiang: Pui! How much does Brenda owe you?

AG: Not much.. $36K.

Xiang: KNN... from $30K become $36K. You think I stupid is it.

Xiang kicked AG again.

AG begged him: Ok I'm sorry.. she owes me $32K.

Xiang: THEN?

He stared hard at AG.

AG was intimidated.

AG: I...I...

Xiang: I what I what? If you want to say something say lah.

AG: I will waive it for her.

Xiang: And?

AG: and... what brother...

Xiang: KNN... you think waiving it is enough? You scared her until she is still shivering you scumbag.

AG: $32K waived and $1K to compensate.

Xiang was furious as he grabbed AG by his collar: Let me tell you this. You think I am joking when I say this. Let me tell you something. Limpeh knows the police inside out. All I need to do is to expose your deeds and you are a goner. You think $1k is 1 million is it?

AG peed in his pants.

His legs were shaking. His eyes now looking at Xiang with fear.

AG: I have only a small company...

Xiang: CCB. I have a small hole.

AG: $5K is the most I can afford.

Xiang: You want me to punch you again?

AG hands tried to block his face.

AG: Ok ok... $10k is the most I can afford. Really.

Xiang pushed him away.

Xiang: Go draft the agreement letter. I want it now.

AG nodded as he quickly went to his computer and typed out the agreement letter of waiving the $32k and a compensation of $10k to Brenda.

Xiang: WHAT'S TAKING YOU SO LONG!

AG jumped.

Xiang: Look at me for what? Do up the document la!

AG was frantic as he accidentally pushed his stationery down the table.

Xiang: Ooi. You buay song is it?

AG: No.. no..no... I'm sorry....

Xiang: Are you done?

AG: Yes.. give me ten more minutes.

AG typed out the letter properly and handed it to Xiang.

Xiang: You sit down and wait! I'll get my lawyer friend to come down and vet. Don't think you can get away with it. And I will get Brenda to come down to sign. You don;t think you can get anywhere making a false document.

AG was white with fear. He thought simply drafting a letter would suffice but he didn't expect this gangster to be so detailed when it comes to these.

Xiang: KNN you stink of pee leh.

AG: I'm sorry...

Xiang: Take off your pants.

AG: But...but...

Xiang: TAKE IT OFF!

AG immediately did as he was told.

Xiang throw it out of the office.

AG walked toward the door and threw his pants out.

His workers got a fright as it landed on a female staff of his, her hair stained with his urine.

Worker: Arghhhhhh!!

Xiang: Take a walk outside this corridor.

AG: But I'm in my boxers....

Xiang: GO!

AG reluctantly walked as Xiang took the video using his phone.

The staff watched in disgust as AG covered his boxers.

Xiang: Now you know how it feels like don't you? I have a video of you and will upload it into youtube tonight.

AG: No...please...

Just then Kelvin walked in together with Brenda, with her head hung low.

AG and the rest returned to the room and discussed on the letter that was drafted.

Kelvin: This is absolutely rubbish.

AG knew that he was exposed now.

Kelvin: I WILL draft the letter.

AG turned pale. He knew that this time the letter is going to be the real one and he will make a loss of $42K in total.

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[curiouslala]

wahh.. so bowerbull.. hahaha
camping for moreeee~~

[vampireking]

Bro..... a nice one.....

[pttd]

Bro, good writing skill, great story & easy to read.

Thank for writing and CLAP, CLAP CLAP.

[MichaelScofield]

Good story

[Cancer]

Great Story, I love it especially this line "Open your eyes when you choose your husband/wife. Don't be like mummy/daddy. I was blind to choose your mummy/daddy. After marriage everything changed."

[Coffeecans]

AG calmed down and suddenly he shouted at them.

AG: This is a trap you all did. I never laid my hands on Brenda at all. You are all in cahoots! I'm not going to pay. I'm going to get my lawyer.

Kelvin: Go ahead. You already have a booking in Quality hotel. Go ahead. If you want this to blow up, I'm all for it. But mind you, you are not going to get away easily if we go to court. Chances of you winning: 20%. And the video has your face and your other friend. If that is your decision, there is nothing to talk about. Let's go. We are going to court to settle this.

AG knew that this was a bad move.

AG: How do I make sure you are telling the truth.

Kelvin held a screenshot that Max had took of AG trying to rape her. Of course Brenda could not be seen. Max simply captured it in his phone and gave it to Kelvin just in case.

AG froze.

Reluctantly he confessed.

AG: Yes. Please draft the letter now. I will sign everything. Please. I do not want to go to jail. I'm sorry Brenda. I'm sorry everyone. I will compensate her. Brenda, you won't have to pay for anything.

AG asked his Supervisor in: Mary, please come in.

Mary entered his room.

AG: I need you to help me. Take this cash cheque and change it to cash. I need it asap.

Mary frowned and did what she was told. Isn't cash cheque the same?

Kelvin had proposed this just in case AG decides to play punk.

Kelvin: We will wait for Mary to be back. Now, sign this. And I would need a witness. Mary would be the best person.

Mary was back within the hour and she was asked to sign as a witness. Mary excused herself as she finished.

AG: Ok. Now everything is done. Is there anything else?

Kelvin: Yeah. All is complete.

AG: Can I have the memory card back?

Kelvin took the memory card out. And lighted it. The plastic corroded as it turned black. He waited for the entire card to be charred.

Kelvin: Keeping the evidence is an offense. There is no more threats for you now AG. You better wake up your idea. If this ever happen again, you will not be getting off this easily.

AG nodded.

The entire group went out of the office and left.

Kelvin handed Brenda the letter and the money.

Kelvin: Here. This is what was promised to you. Keep it.

Brenda: Thanks so much Kelvin. I don't know how to thank you.

Kelvin: Go and settle all your other outstanding things first. We will talk after you are done. And my advice to you. Close the company. Start a new one if you like because its not looking good. Else you can try to get a job first and make sure to have a reserve before you start over again.

Brenda: Sure. Thanks Kelvin.

Kelvin: Perhaps a light kiss would be good?

Brenda was shocked but she smiled and kissed him. She was surprised that he had requested to have a kiss.

Kelvin: Ok we are here already. See you Brenda.

Brenda: Thanks again Kelvin.

Kelvin smiled as he drove away.

Brenda stretched her arms, with her burden lightened. Now she could breathe fresh air again.

Brenda: Time to start everything again. Yesh!

Just then she got a message from Max: How's everything? Dinner tonight?

Brenda replied: Yes! And I think we haven't finished what we were supposed to yesterday...

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