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Rena had anticipated that Wyn would call Daniel for help. For comfort.

The sisters was gleaming when they heard his phone ring.

Evans: Rena, you are a genius!

Rena: Erm. You got to thank Bernice. It was her who told me about the idea. And it was her who took his phone.

Bernice smiled.

Daniel searched the entire house and could not locate his phone. He sighed deeply as he switched on the tv and sat there like a couch potato.

Rena and the others was laughing in the Rena's car.

Rena: You all ready sisters?

They nodded in unison.

After a while of ringing, Rena answered the call and put it on speakerphone.

Wyn was so happy she got through.

Wyn: Dear... I'm really afraid, could you...

Rena: Oh darling... ahh.... yes! more.... more... arghhh.... touch my breasts... ahhh....

Ting intercepted: My turn now, you bitch... oh ya.... deeper.... harder.... awww... Your rod feels really good in me dear...

Evans: suck my nipples... yes.... that's the way... eermmm... ahhh.... I'm cumming.... oh ya...

The line went dead.

Wyn was totally stunned beyond words.

They laughed hysterically as they highfived each other.

Gin: Sucker, bitch.

Wyn cried. It's been quite some time she broke down. She comforted herself by hugging her bolster and burying in it, sobbing silently. She knew that she only had herself to blame. But was she wrong to do it? It was just unfair to her if she had to share him amongst so many.

She closed her eyes, hugging the otherwise wet bolster that was the only thing that could give her the warmth she needed. It took her a few hours to really doze off. What was the use of having a huge but empty mansion? She was still sniffing even though she was asleep. The silence of her sobs echoed through the walls giving the entire house nothing but a cold and lifeless feel.

Daniel didn't know how long he spent watching tv as he slept.

Bernice opened the door. And the other sisters followed behind. They saw Daniel sleeping on the couch as they tiptoed quietly, avoiding him.

They crept into Ting's room as they planned for the next assault on Daniel. The more they looked at each other's eyes, the more they smiled, with an evil grin.

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Bernice: Do whatever you like, just don't drag me in.

She said as she stretched and laid down.

Gin: Oh come on... it's going to be fun.

Evans: Come on big sister.

Ting: Yes! come on!

Rena: Oh well, just let her be. Let's go on with the plan.

They wrote everything down, every detail recorded.

Rena: Great. Now it's time for the plan to be activated. Thank god tomorrow is Saturday. And this is going to be perfect. Bernice, here's what I need you to do now. Get a pail of water and wake Daniel up. Each of us will give him a slap. And give him a piece of our mind. Then we will act and go out of the house, you will then tell him that this will be his last chance, throw this envelop on the floor.

Everyone nodded and they went out of the room.

Daniel was still sleeping when suddenly a pail of water came splashing down his head.

Gin: U freaking son of a bitch!

Out came a slap on his right face with a loud piak.

Ting: I'm so disappointed!

A loud slap to his left.

Evans: Bastard!

Another right slap.

Rena: Fuck yourself and you call yourself a man! Business trip, my foot.

A really heavy left slap came and you could see his face turn red.

Bernice was the last. She did not utter a single word but her eyes told everything. It was cold and disappointing. She stared at him, her eyes turning red.

Daniel: I...

A double slap landed on his face as they stormed out of the house.

Before she slammed the door, she threw the envelop on the floor.

Bernice: This will be your last chance. And if you fail, it's all goodbye.

The door slammed shut as they made their way out. Squeezing in Rena's car.

Daniel was shocked. And he was dripping.

He took a towel and dried himself before he picked up the envelop.

He sat down, calmed himself before he opened it. And he knew he had to be prepared.

But what he saw made him scratch his head.

If you want us to return, it takes a lot of courage. There are a total of 5 missions. If you fail any one mission, you fail and we will be gone. For good.

Venue: Takashimaya Shopping Centre.

We will text you what to do. Reach by 9am. No later.

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As his eyes scrolled down the letter, there was one sentence.

Go to Ting's room. There is a bag. Bring it with you tomorrow. Inside the bag are five little bags. DO NOT OPEN until we let you know your mission. If you dare open it before we tell you, its GAME OVER. We have installed cameras at home so you are being spied on. Do not try any tricks.

He saw a black backpack and he laid on her bag and slept.

He knew it's not going to be easy but he really wanted them back.

He woke up early and cleaned himself up. Really to fulfil all his missions to get his whole family back together again.

His phone rang. The message was from an unknown number.

Good job Dan. Now take out bag #01 and see your mission. You are to complete it before going on the next. And good luck.

He placed his bag down on the brown marbled floor as he took out the first bag with the number 1.

He unzipped the bag and saw a message. Then his face turned pale.

Mission #1: I don't care how you do it. Go around. Ask 5 ladies for their used underwear. 3 used RED bras and 2 used RED underwear. Put them in this bag.

He froze.

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Dan was dumbstruck. How the hell is he going to do that?

He was standing at Civic Plaza as he looked around the entire building. He took a deep breath and tried his luck. There he spotted a lady walking towards his direction as he tried his luck.

Dan: Sorry miss, I need a favour..

Without any hesitation, she brushed him off like a plague.

Then he tried again with another passerby.

Dan: Excuse me miss, I have a favour to ask. Could I ask what colour are you wearing inside....

Without finishing his sentence, he was rewarded with a huge slap.

Lady 2: Nuts. Pervert.

He tried. And failed and failed. He was nearly threatened to be taken to the police.

He sat down at the fountain. Rubbing off his sweat under the hot sun. There was a blonde sitting beside him. She was wearing a long floral dress, she was at least 1.75m, with possibly a C cup breasts. She looked at him and smiled.

Dan: Hi.

Lady 3: Hi, how are you?

Dan: I'm sorry but I need a favour from you?

Lady 3 (surprised): Yes?

Dan: I know it may sound really absurd but I have done something very wrong to my wives and they would only forgive me if I can finish the missions they gave me and this first mission is already very difficult.

Lady 3: And what is that mission?

Dan: I need to collect some lingerie from passerbys.

Lady 3 (shocked): Wow. Are you sure?

Dan: I know it's absurd. But the requirement is worse.

Lady 3: What is that?

Dan: It needs to be red.

Lady 3: Red?

Dan: Red. I need to collect 3 red bras and 2 used undies.

The lady giggled as she looked at him.

Lady 3: I'm not sure if you are nuts or a pervert.

Dan blushed as he murmured: I can prove to you.

He dug at his backpack and tried to search for the #1 bag.

Lady 3: Here you go. I don't know but I thought you are a reliable man.

On his hands were a red thong. He was all red as he stared at the undergarment on his hand.

Lady 3: Well, good luck to your missions.

She said as she smiled and left.

Daniel was dazed for a while and passerbys stared at him holding the thong.

He quickly put it into the bag.

Of course he was having a hard on visualising the lady who gave him her undies. He wanted very much to wank using her undies but he knew he was still far from completion.

It took more than an hour to get one. And he still had 4 more pieces to go.

3 red bras. 1 more red undies to go.

He tried his luck again but his cheeks were already swollen with slaps.

He went into the compound to have a quick rest, using the aircon to dry himself. He thought he would try his luck there, hoping to find a lingerie shop.

And an idea struck him. He knew it's going to be difficult but he thought was really worth a try. If it succeeds, his first mission would be complete.

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Dan had to act fast. He need to finish all of it in a flash.

He changed another way of approach. And he saw one suitable candidate.

Dan: Greetings, miss. My name is Dan, an entrepreneur who is interested in the lingerie business. I'm thinking of importing some brands from Europe but before that I need some feedback and even samples. I can pay you for the samples if needed. But because it's still on the concept stage I may not have that much, perhaps we can discuss this a bit? Your name?

Lady: Liz.

To his surprise, she did not slap him nor scold him but she patiently waited for him to finish.

Dan: What colors do you usually like to wear?

Liz: Hmmm. Probably red and black.

Dan: Wow that's bold colours. Sexy, seductive and sizzling.

Her eyes shone with excitement as Dan mentioned the characteristics.

Dan: I think red looks really matching for you. Would you happen to be wearing it now?

Liz stopped for a moment but she nodded.

Dan: Wonderful. So what kind of support are you looking at? Underwire, or others? Would comfort be the first thing that comes to mind? Desgn? Or brand?

She was very enthusiastic about her replies: Of course it's comfort! You don't have to really spend so much money on it!

Dan: What if I tell you that I would offer $80 to buy the bra you are wearing now, would you be interested? This is for a research I'm working on. As I mentioned I'm sorry that I can't afford too much to spend.

Liz thought for a while. She was wearing a black dress with long sleeves, probably with pads on it to push up her cup.

Liz: Where? Now?

Dan: Yes Liz. Now.

Liz: But...

Dan: I can only afford $80 Liz. I'm quite tight for this project.

Liz: Wait for me outside the toilet. Give me the money first.

Dan was even quicker: $40 now first. $40 later when you give it to me.

Liz: Fine.

She said as she went into the ladies. She was fast to change.

She handed him her strapless red bra and collect the money with a smile.

Liz: Thank you Dan. See you!

Dan was excited as he quickly put it into his bag.

2 more lingeries, 1 undies.

He needed them more and quickly, but deep inside him, he wanted to really wank himself in the toilet cubicle just holding the bra he was given. He caught the figure on the bra which read 34A. He resisted the urge as he went on to try to get more.

And to his amazement, he saw a large group of ladies walking in his direction. He knew he can't miss this opportunity.

Wyn was pale when she woke up. She hardly got any sleep from the scare she had. Her hands were still shaking, lips trembling.

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a masterpiece...
excellent story, man, waitin' 4 more.....
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All Dan's wife was at Rena's place, laughing at his actions. They had asked a friends to take snapshots of his behaviour, not knowing that the ones who gave him the panties or bras were actually arranged by them.

But never did they know they were about to see the unexpected. And things were not going as planned.

Dan saw the group and he had absolutely no idea who they were and where they came from.

Dan: Hi ladies, how are you? My name is Dan, I'm an entrepreneur who is interested in expanding my apparel design to lingerie and I'm curios if you would allow me to ask you all a few questions please?

Group: Erm.... ok.

Dan started asking questions and they did not really buy the idea but they kept silent, waiting to see if he would ask something 'unexpected'. One of the ladies were texting on the phone, uninterested in his advance.

Dan could feel that he was getting nowhere, then he asked the question.

Dan: I was thinking if some of you could sell me the underwear you are wearing right now, I would give you $80 for each, I'm sorry but I....

Without finishing his sentence, his arms were handcuffed. And he soon caught sight of the policeman arriving in the scene.

Police: You are arrested for sexual offences. You are going to the station with me.

Little did Dan know that the group of ladies were cadets in training.

Dan: Sir.. I can explain....

He was dragged into the car. Upon arriving at the station he was beaten up. And then thrown in the cell for a lockup.

Dan had to call Bernice. He had no other choice.

Bernice was reluctant to pick up but she gave in.

Dan: Bernice? I need help. I'm in the police station now. Could you bail me please?

Bernice turned pale as she looked at the other sisters.

Bernice: Ok.

They put down the phone.

Bernice: Ok look. Now Dan's in the police station. Sharks. Great plan of you all.

They froze in fright. Their attempt to prank him has gone overboard.

Bernice dressed up and went to bail him, she explained about the situation and then Dan was released.

Police: Make sure this don't happen again.

Bernice did not speak a word to Dan as she turned her back and left.

Dan could not find the courage to speak. He knew he had failed his mission.

Upon leaving the police station, before Bernice raised her hand to say goodbye, he suddenly knelt down on his knees, already ignoring the fact that he is in public.

He shouted: I'm sorry I'm really sorry... I failed. I couldn't even fulfil a single task you gave me and I'm a burden to all of you... especially you Bernice. I let you down. I know I can't ask for your forgiveness. I know I hurt you all umpteen times. I don't know what went over me. I....

He slapped himself hard on his face.

Bernice could hear the slaps. It was hard and forceful.

The other sisters who hid could not bear to watch. They placed their hand on their mouth, touched by his very sincerity. They had wanted to come out to tell him that they had already forgiven him but they were waiting. Waiting for Bernice's response.

Bernice was clearly weeping. She closed her eyes, letting the past memories flood her vision. She swallowed her saliva. Now her hands were shaking.

A honk from a taxi woke her as she flagged the cab.

Dan watched in disappointment as he continued slapping himself. He was already dripping blood from his gums.

Bernice answered to him: Go to Wyn. She needs you now.

She finished and boarded the cab.

Dan could only watch as she left.

The other sisters left in sadness as they knew that was Bernice's answer.

Dan clenched his fist as he stood up slowly, like a lost soul. His mind was totally emptied, helpless and lost.



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Hey, nice one! Can you please continue the story?
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Wyn closed herself in the room, making sure that all the lights were on. Her eyebags were huge, and she was pale as the moon. She was still covering herself with a blanket, still shaking in fright.

She kept staring at her phone as if she was waiting someone to call.

Bernice reached home and her sisters were flooding her with questions and questions. She appeared calm and told them what she said. The entire house went quiet as they stared at her in disbelief.

Ting: What the?

Evans: Thought she deserved it?

Gin: Why?

Rena: Ok. I think we went overboard to scare her to this extend. But sis, is it too drastic a move? What if he don't come back?

Bernice: He will, Rena. But based on my intuition, she will be one of us.

A loud boo echoed the entire house.

Daniel picked up his phone and reluctantly dialled Wyn's number, curious to see why Bernice had requested him to.

Wyn jumped as she heard her phone rang but relieved that it was Dan. She quickly answered.

Wyn: Daniel, please be here now.... I need you really really badly. Please... I beg you... I'll do anything you say but... please...please be here now... I'm scared.....

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Daniel sighed.

It took so long for him to see Bernice and yet it was over in mere seconds.

Now he's stuck. He was reluctant to see Wyn but could he reject Bernice's order?

He hailed a cab and stood outside the familiar huge mansion that he was in previously. Everything was the same. Nothing's changed. He thought that Wyn would have all the locks changed but everything was as if previously.

He found the gate unlocked as he walked in. There was no one in. Even for her maid. He walked upstairs, hearing his own doorsteps. Thud, thud, thud.

Standing outside Wyn's door he was in mixed feelings.

Wyn's door was ajar, lights were on. As he peek inside he saw her wrapped in blankets, shivering. Her hair messed up, her face pale and she was burying herself in her arms.

He had never seen her in this state before. Never.

She was wearing a translucent red nightie that shone brilliantly under the light. But seeing her in this vulnerable state gave him grief but yet a dose of kinkiness. As though he could really take full advantage of the vulnerable her. Of course it sounds sick. But somehow he wanted to try it out.

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He kicked opened the door and Wyn jumped in fright.

Wyn: AhHHHHHHHH!

Immediately she capped herself using the blanket. The shivering became more.

Dan: It's me...

She stopped.

Slowly she took the blanket down.

Dan got a shock from her face.

He had never seen her like this before. Sunken eyes with dark eye shadows and eyebags. Her eyes were red, her lips dry.

Her eyes shone with ease when she saw Daniel.

Wyn: Daniel! Dannnniiiiiieeellll........ gahhhhhh.... you are heere.e.....

Immediately she threw herself at Daniel and hugged him, and cried.

Wyn: Dan...dannnnnn.....

She couldn't hold her tears..she just let everything out...

Wyn: I'm terribly sorry for what I did........ please.....please.... forgive me.....

Dan: You don't sound right. What happened?

Inititally Daniel wanted to punish her for what she did to him but seeing her in this state made him feel sorry.

Wyn swallowed her saliva.

Wyn: ghhoooooooossssttt...

Dan: ???

Dan: Gold?

Wyn: Ghosst.... near...my...office.... I seen... it...

Dan: Are you sure?

Wyn nodded as she continued crying.

She embraced him hard.

Ting was furious about Bernice's decision.

Ting: Hmmpph! I don't care. I'm going down to where that bitch is and don't stop me!

Ting stomped heavily towards the door.

And she paused.

No one at home moved.

Ting: Hey! Ain't you going with me?

No one moved but they giggled.

Rena: Silly you!

Gin: Silly gal!

Evans and Bernice laughed.

Ting: Not funny!

Ting said as she placed her hands on her waist. "Hmpph!"

Bernice: Daniel must be there now. Let him hush her before plan #2.

Ting: Plan #2?

Evans: See? I told you you were silly already.

Ting scratched her head.

Gin facepalmed herself.

Bernice: All right. Time for Plan #2. Let's go.

Ting: Go where? Do what?

Evans gave Ting a hard knock on her head.

Evans: Just follow and don't ask! Follow Big Sis's instructions.

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Good stuff bro kopi, getting intense and suspensful, as well as stressful, can't wait for the next post! Cheers, ....................
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