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Old 23-01-2010, 11:27 PM
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The Player

Have been reading alot from SBF since a year ago and i really wanna try writing my own erotic novel so that other bros can enjoy. hope you guys like it. Btw i'm a 19 year old guy currently attached and i'm a virgin cause previously i was underage and my current gf is a stanch christian so i'm currently looking for a FB. If you guys can help me out that'll be great. You know how painful it is now to control. haha Disclaimer: This story is purely fictional and there's no relation to anyone or anybody or anything so don't be offended if the name i choose to use coincides with yours.

Part 1
My name is Daniel and it all started when I was in secondary 3. I'm in a guys school and previously, I was young and din't know how it feels to like someone. At sec 3 as all you brothers know it, this thing called hormones start acting in and you get attracted all of a sudden to chio bu(s). I started knowing more girls through my friends in friendster and somehow i got interested in a girl called Lynn. She's small as in around 1.55m and perhaps 45 kg, in terms of figure not really flattering with petite boobs. For me, i'm not really into boobs, big butts or legs but i'm more of a face person. (Know that everyone have their own liking, some like to look at boobs. To find out what kind of person you are, ask yourself what you look at first when you look at a girl) To me, she really really looks gorgeous. Her facial features are small yet sharp. It looks something like this (insert link here) It's that kind of feeling where you just wanna protect her with everything you've got.

I asked friend intro intro abit then added her on msn. At first it was awkward cause being in a guys school suddenly talking to girls its just weird but after a while we exchanged phone numbers and we started texting each other more. I remember averaging 15 smses a day (of course now its nothing but back then 15 sms a day costs an atomic bomb esp when i'm paying the bills). We'll talk about random stuff, how we're feeling and being shy and everything I never really dared to declare my feelings for her. I just stood behind her all the time supporting her in the shadow, giving her words of encouragements when she's feeling really bad. Sharing her joy with her and everything else. *fast forward*

After a year or so, I began to show my feelings for her more explictly. Its a stage where I felt that I can't help being friends anymore. I want more. So i asked her out and she agreed. Maybe cause we're used to eating together and hanging out together over the past year. I brought her out for dinner at Junction 8 and we shopped a little after that. It was getting late so i told her to let me send her home. As we walked out into the darkness, I made a reach for her hand. She jumped a little cause she was shocked by the sudden touch. But I grabbed her hand tighter this time, at the same time making a reach for the other hand. I stared into her eyes and my heart started racing like there's no tmr.

*Awkward Silence*
Lynn: What you doing?
Me: eh... I don't want to hide my feelings anymore. I've been supporting you all the long in the dark and I no longer want to be walking behind you. I want to walk with you, walk beside you. Hold your hand and face any obstacles together. I want to love you and protect you with everything I've got. Will you give me a chance to be with you?
*at this point my heart sank. what if she said no-.-*

Lynn nodded her head and we walked off holding each other's hands. I was so happy that day that I jumped about all day when I reached home. I couldn't sleep thinking how surreal that moment felt. How fortunate and blissful everything is.
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Old 24-01-2010, 10:13 AM
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Part 2
We really had fun together, sending love notes. Going to the beach together. Long story cut short. When we reached JC, we planned to enter SAJC together but I din't meet the mark and I ended up in JJC. Her parents din't want her to settle for JJC when obviously she could settle in a better environment so we had no choice but to continue with our lives in different JC. I was thinking it doesn't change anything because true love lasts forever. We still took time to meet after school and over the weekends. After a few months, meetings became less frequent and I guess it's natural because of the hectic schedule in JC. I din't bother much but our conversations at night became shorter and more awkward. I wanted to make amends and do sometime to make it last longer. I planned to hold a surprise for her during our second year anniversary hoping that our relationship would pick up.

I planned for that occassion 3 months in advance and during this period I was told by my best friend that Lynn have been going very close with this other guy called Michael in SAJC since they're in the same CCA - Squash. I've been told bout Michael during our nightly conversations and I know that they've been going home together cause they're living very close to each other. At that time, I chose to trust in Lynn. She's never gonna betray me. I loved her so damn much.

During our second month anniversary, we din't plan to meet up as I decided to give her a surprise. As she live in a HDB flat and below is an empty field used for recreational activities. When it was around ten at night, I thoughtfully placed red candles in the shape of "DANIEL (HEART) LYNN". I lighted them then called her.

Me: Baby, do you know what day today is?
Lynn: huh what day?
Me: Think again. Remember when we met?
Lynn: oh! It's our anniversary. Why?
Me: You know what baby, I love you and that'll never change. Anws, have you been wondering where I've been too?
Lynn: eh ya? where you go ah? how come never ask me out eat dinner?
Me: Look outside your house now.
Lynn: Huh what outside? You playing with me right?

She looked at the scene and went down shortly after. I thought that she would be touched and I guess it right. I saw her appearing in tears and she hugged me. She grabbed my hands and look at me sternly I remember the exact words she said.

Lynn: Baby. I know you love me. Thank you for doing so much for me but I really don't deserve it. You know I think it's time i told you that I don't have any feel for you anymore.
Me: But, we've been together for 2 years. We've been through everything. Why?
Lynn: I've met Michael and I realised he is more suitable for me. He is richer, more handsome than everything you could ever be. Let's break up. Just go please and not make it difficult.

I stood there dumbfounded can't believing my ears.

Lynn: If you're not gonna leave, I am.

With that she took off. I was lost. I thought she loved me. I thought this was everything. My legs felt weak and suddenly they crumbled and I knelt to the ground. Shocked. Not moving. I stayed in that position for more than 1 hour and suddenly, it started to drizzle.

I asked myself why. Stayed in the rain and finally came to a conclusion. I had to be stronger, richer, better. I was wrong to think a relationship could work out. I'm never gonna be serious ever again. From now on, I am a player and I only want fresh hot babes and sex. Nothing else. Once a girl has been laid. Game over. It's time for the next one.

(Next UP: Daniel's new self)
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Old 24-01-2010, 10:15 AM
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Re: The Player

i'll be away till tuesday so guys. bye for now. dont forget to cummm back when i post the next part.
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Re: The Player

Chey....

no sex one, who wants to come back read.....

school boy love story....sianz...
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Re: The Player

Please bring out the erotic part soon.
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Part 3

My CCA in JC days was soccer. I am the captain of my team and i play AMC. I trained really hard in it because i wanted to make it to clubs abroad in future just like fandi ahmad did. I became quite good in the game and in fact I have been approached to join woodlands wellington when i was 15 but my mom thought it'll be better if I went on to study first. Anws cut the bullshit short, soccer was one of the "hot" CCA group among girls in our school and naturally as the captain, I was quite popular.

In my soccer group, we were very close and always met up during school breaks. We'll talk about girls, drinking everything under the sun. So the next day, we met up after school for lunch and we were talking about girls. Somehow we all agreed on a challenge. This is the challenge: to be the fastest in hooking up with a new girl and have sex with her.

I never really looked at the girls in our class because i was so engrossed in the relationship. But now, thirsty for my first victim for revenge. I became more observant. The first girl I realised is Priscilla. Her facial features were quite defined and she looked really beautiful. Her bust size i'm guessing is 34B. I was thinking to myself " fuck my eyes ta stamp ah. how come never realise got so chio za bo in our class before". From that moment, I just had to have her.

I started initiating conversations with her in class and after a while found our she's a very bubbly person and she goes to clubbing alot so we agreed to go clubbing together on a weekend. We met up and realised she dont drink much there just sip sip abit then dance then we left.

Me: Eh fuck first time I go clubbing drink so little. buay song leh
Pris: Aiyah can alr la drink so much ltr knock out how.
Me: lol hum ji leh you. I here today what. scared what.
....
after more rounds of taunting
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Me: You scared issit?
Pris: who scared who come la. we challenge.
Me: haha ltr you knock out i sell you to thailand.

After which i bought a bottle of scotch from a nearby cheers conc 43% and another bottle of vodka. Initially we mixed it with tea and juice then after a while challenge here challenge there starting drinking shots. After the first bottle (scotch), can tell pris losing control of herself and started dancing around. I realised it's too embarrasing to let her dance in public so no choice drag her home. As we were quite close I know where she lives. So i just supported her back. She was wearing a bright blue dress with those type of loose collar in front. As we were reaching her HDB void deck. I let her sit at those chairs outside meant for old folks. At that time she was so dead she just practically leant to me.

I held her and when i looked down. Whoa nice sight man. can totally see her cleavage. Her white exposed boobs with a white bra. Evil thoughts started flooding my mind. I carried her up the stairs and laid her down and some dark corner. Taking off her dress, I was getting a hard on. And my heart was practically pounding so hard it feels like its gonna jump out. My hands was shaking cause its the first time i doing this kind of shit. I wasn't contented just yet so i took off her bra to expose her brown nipples.

I started twirling my fingers around it to see her reaction and she was giving the shiok expression. I put my mouth towards it and started licking it and sucking it away and I could hear pantings. "ah... ah..." she went and her head was moving from side to side. I pulled down her matching white panties and I found that her pussy was shaven nicely. I liked what i saw and I could feel that its wet when i brushed my hands across it.

I took off my pants and boxers to expose my manhood cause it was getting so hard that its getting painful. Still shaking i started stroking myself to the beautiful sight. I dint think of sex at that time maybe cause its my first time doing this. I continued sucking on to her and pulled her closer to me at the same time using the other hand fingering her slowly and faster and faster. I changed my pace and her moans became louder. Being drunk she dint have any strength to resist and just leant on me. At that point, i stopped and opened her mouth and put my dick inside.

I held on to her jaws and started fucking her mouth. Whoa the feeling is sensational and after a few thrusts, i pushed my thing in deeper. Whoa now the feel is better and i just continued thrusting it in. occasionally stopping for her to cough as she was choking sometimes. I sped up the pace and fuck i'm cumming. Not wanting to leave any evidence i pulled my dick out and used her hand to wrap around my dick and started jerking it. I cummed a huge load on the staircase floor then i cleaned up and dressed her up nicely and carried her to her home. Luckily i dint cum in her mouth or anything if not her parents would know what i did. Told her parents it was a class gathering and she drank too much. Another parent drove us here and i was tasked to carry her up. They thanked me lol and i was smirking. I was satisfied that day. Next time I want more
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